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Published: 2006-11-26 23:48:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 56; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Wandering the lonely streets at night,Reminiscing the days when things were right,
There weren't much people at sight,
Took out a cigarette which I start to light.
First puff,
All I can think about is you,
Second puff,
How did I end up so blue?
Third puff,
You lied to me, over and again,
Fourth puff,
I hate you for putting me through so much pain.
I felt paranoid and angsty,
Asking
Why did you have to leave?
I thought we were perfect together,
But now, you're asking me to find someone better.
Unhappy,
Upset
And confused,
Myself, I abused.
I can't think of any title for this, suggestions anyone?
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Comments: 4
merzhin [2006-12-15 21:33:50 +0000 UTC]
i really like your idea with the whole second verse thing you've done
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tskye In reply to merzhin [2006-12-16 02:31:12 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much! it just came to me like that..haha
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PurpleLight [2006-12-07 03:49:36 +0000 UTC]
I have no suggestions for a title, but I must say that this is wonderful, and it hit home for me.
I love the descriptions with the smoking!
Love It!
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tskye In reply to PurpleLight [2006-12-07 13:56:37 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much for your kind comment
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