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tskye — how i feel
Published: 2006-12-17 06:07:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 124; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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under the endless skybeneath the moon and stars
i sit and watch you cry
for someone near but seems so far
hurting, watching, in pain
you cried on my shoulder
tears as cool as the evening rain
but my heart, as heavy as a boulder
my sleeve soaked with tears
i wish i could be the one
who chases all your doubts and fears
and then you said.. ' she's my only one '
i look at you in silence
and said ' i feel it too '
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o_O that's a heartsmasher right there. went straight through the center and took something with it. great job.
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That's very good. Flowed well
I especially love the first stanza. Haha It reminds of one of my old ones "Asteria." But yea that's really really good.
Keep up the great work!
Mitch
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thank you!
yeah..that was how i felt when i wrote about it.
it's smth true....sigh..
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