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Published: 2006-10-25 17:07:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 3615; Favourites: 158; Downloads: 3
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Mommy please don’t cry,It wasn’t planned for me to die.
At this young age I should laugh and be glad,
But I haven’t been as the others and they treated me bad.
I tried to escape mommy I really tried,
But they always found me, and against agony they me tied.
I tried to cry when you weren’t home,
I tried only to cry when I was alone.
Mommy why did they hurt me, wasn’t I beautiful,
With white soft skin, as a china doll?
Daddy when you read this letter I’ve left this place,
Sadly I couldn’t do it without leaving a trace.
You will find an empty body in my room,
I sent myself to an unpleasant doom.
They pushed me to far dad; I’ve been hurt so much,
They pushed out to the dark zone where I was out of touch.
But not from their words and their laughter,
Their bullying made my heart shatter.
Why did they do this to me
Why wasn’t I, as they wanted to see?
I tired to fit in mom and dad, I really tried,
But I guess they all wanted me to die.
I’m crying right now, for the last time,
I’m going to pay for a useless crime.
With my blood that will takes my tears place,
I’m going away from here without any grace.
Mom and dad, my view is turning black,
I’m sorry but there is no turning back.
Goodbye mom and dad,
You are the greatest parent I could ever had!
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This is actually touching, and really a lovely read despite the fact the reader committed suicide.
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Document the number of times you're bullied. Write down the ones responsible for what they have done and use the who, what, when, where method. Bring a sound recorder device and turn it on for the next time they go after you. Catch them in the act. If any adults were involved, write down their names as well as what they did and told you. If you present the documents to the principal and it continues to happen, take it to the school district. If still nothing changes, its time to take the school district, the adults involved, and the parents of your tormentor to court. Present the evidence and rally a change in the system of how to deal with bullying. I want you to have a full wonderful life because any dreams you have ahead of you could change your life as well as the people you help.
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This is so sad I cried so much
I need someone to cuddle with
write mire
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thank you! and well, I can only write poems when in the mood, and thankfully I'm not bullied anymore and doesn't need to get it of my chest
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Oh I´m so sorry. You were bullyied?
That stupid *****nvjudsbidsy@349jccbyxi%idn=8... thats so argh ... i hatte bullying
But were better than them ! I´m glad you arent bullyied anymore ...
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Of course we're better then them! 
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(( This is such a lovely read despite the underlying fact that she committed suicide in the end. ))
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I adore this. Join the #AgainstTheBullies Campaign, if you support!
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The world is full of light and darkness, as someone below said.
That couldn't be more true, but sadly, it's easier to wander into darkness in the world we live in. No one has to do it, but society teaches us to. We are told when we are young, 'Don't talk to them. They aren't good,' or 'Don't associate with those people. Stick with those ones over there.' The world is full of the dark that we have brought into it, and we have contaminated most of the light.
I hope no one feels this way. And to the author, your short poem couldn't have put the grief of the thing into better words. No one should have to put up with anything. Ever.
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a friend of me told me that some rude guy once said "She wouldn't need a vacuum cleaner, she'd use her mouth!"
Don't you DARE to laugh at that!
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oh my goodness this made me instantly cry. i just seen the Amanda Todd video for the first time. it truly makes me wonder what is wrong with this world. america is supposed to the place of importunity yet we are shallow enough to judge someone that isn't perfect and make them feel unloved. you are aweome you came from a completely different perspective in this poem and you should be proud of yourself. keep reaching out and make people listen.
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Wow thank you! I wrote this poem for a very long time ago and my english wasn't the best at the time, thats why it feels kinda forced in some of the rhymes. So my 14 year old self thanks you alot 
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Its sad really, how people can be nasty to someone else because they are different!!!!
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i was serouisly verbally bullied and cyber bullied,
and i was diagnosed with depression.
i felt like, i wanted to die
and im only 11 :/
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So the bullying made you depressed and me bitter and untrusting. To all those who say bullying shouldn't be treated as a crime, you are all bloody morons and in need of a reality check. Could you people please tell me how is something that causes people to become bitter, untrusting, depressed, suicidal, turn to drugs or alcohol, and turn the thug life is NOT a crime? Kid listen to me and remember what I say. STAND UP FOR YOUR SELF!!! Tell the teacher, or the principle. If they do nothing about it FIGHT BACK. If you do fight back and they kick you out or suspend you for fighting back FILE A LAW SUIT AGAINST THE SCHOOL AND THE BULLIES!!! BLOCK the trolls and cyber bullies and report them!!! DO NOT DO WHAT I DID! DO NOT SIT THERE AND TAKE IT! FIGHT BACK!!! Because if you don't do anything about it you will end up like me. Bitter at the world, hate filled, and untrusting. Or you might end up in a gang or become a just another homeless guy addicted to drugs and/or alcohol. Professional help should do you some good as well.
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I... I don't have words for this. You just made me cry.
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I cried as i read this knowing my brother might take it, knowing one day i'll lose it.. and might commit it,Once some one you loved it comes to push a shove and there gone...
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What? You're thinking of committing suicide? Don't! Nothing's worth that!
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At school I said I would commit suicide, my friends got worried and went to the principals office. I started to bang my head against the brick wall. my friend stopped me. I went to the principals office and stayed there for the rest of the day.
I actually almost turned into Jeff The Killer.
in 6th and 7th grade, I got hurt a lot.
now I'm in 8th grade. I'm just going to wait and see what happens.
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I hope you don't take this the wrong way, but with problems that deep do I think you need to talk to a proffesional. I'm not saying it will solve the whole issue and all, but it feels better to talk with someone who knows how to handle them and maybe can give you advice about what to do. My best friend, wich I still have today, was the one who helped me. Like your friends that stopped you from banging your head against the wall. See the little things, cause you are never completely alone. I hope you understand that I'm not calling you sick, just talking and get those feelings out of you is good.
Stay strong mate, you've done two years now, school is soon over. When school ended for me and I went to college, everything changed.
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I know.
When I went to the principal's office, he had the guidance counselor from the high school come and talk to me.
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this almost happened to me several times....
i've been bullied all my life.....
i still have a scar on my right shoulder.....
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Oh god this made me cry. I'm taking a stand myself. Starting this school year I'm going to work extra hard to stop this.
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Dear Bullies,
You see that 15-year-old girl holding hands with her one-year-old son that you called a slut?
She was raped at 13.
You see that boy crying that you made fun of for being a cry-baby?
His best friend committed suicide last night.
You see that girl that you make fun of for having all those bruises?
She is abused by her parents.
You see that bald woman that you made fun of?
She is dying of breast cancer.
You see that old man that you called ugly?
He got a serious injury to his face in the war.
You see that man that you made fun of for having all those burns?
He ran into a burning hospital to save his dead daughter.
You see that girl that you called fat?
She is starving herself.
You see that boy you called stupid?
He has Down Syndrome.
Like this journal and re-post if you are against bullying.
Originally found in Gummy-warlord's journal
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Absolutely beautiful and tragic poem. It really shows how awful bullying is. This also hits me on a personal level since I've been through that and know how painful it is. Stay strong
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Thank you, and yeah, that was kind of what I felt when I went through that horrible time. I'm glad my ending wasn't as in my poem. I'm a strong and happy person now, and kind of in a way became the person I am today thanks to the bullying, sad in a way when you think about it.
And yeah, I know that was an tragic thought when I was younger, but I remember thinking that when I got bullied, that I wasn't alone in the world of being bullied, and in a way, that gave me comfort. If other could get through it, then I would aswell
Thank you again
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...............the world is cruel...we know your pain.
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I love this poem, its so touching! I was left out a lot in school but I don't remember much. Now I have a group of friends I hang out with and a bestfriend!
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this poem connects to me, almost everyone at school bullies me and i have no friends, its a living hell each year, its been four years and i am surprised that i'm not dead yet because i have gotten an idea of suicide before
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Honey, don't give up and don't give in. The only thing your doing by taking your own life is giving up. I know it's hard and I know how it feels... Be strong and talk with your parents, if they don't listen go to the teachers, if they don't listen then go to the police and report them for personal harassment! Don't give up!
You're a wonderful and beautiful human being!~
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thanks
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I would love to feature this work in my group #End-Bullying [link] !
Very well written
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You're more then welcome to add that in your group
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Thank you, and no problem
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I love this, Bullying is a huge problem. I have been bullied before but not to the point to where I have thought of suicide; but nevertheless, i hope things get better for anyone who is being bullied.
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So sad yet so realistic. This stuff really happens and we should be more aware of it. Good job!
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Made me cry a little. That is just wow! you wrote that so gracefuly, it flowed so nice! I love it!
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wow thank you 
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