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Mommy please don’t cry,It wasn’t planned for me to die.
At this young age I should laugh and be glad,
But I haven’t been as the others and they treated me bad.
I tried to escape mommy I really tried,
But they always found me, and against agony they me tied.
I tried to cry when you weren’t home,
I tried only to cry when I was alone.
Mommy why did they hurt me, wasn’t I beautiful,
With white soft skin, as a china doll?
Daddy when you read this letter I’ve left this place,
Sadly I couldn’t do it without leaving a trace.
You will find an empty body in my room,
I sent myself to an unpleasant doom.
They pushed me to far dad; I’ve been hurt so much,
They pushed out to the dark zone where I was out of touch.
But not from their words and their laughter,
Their bullying made my heart shatter.
Why did they do this to me
Why wasn’t I, as they wanted to see?
I tired to fit in mom and dad, I really tried,
But I guess they all wanted me to die.
I’m crying right now, for the last time,
I’m going to pay for a useless crime.
With my blood that will takes my tears place,
I’m going away from here without any grace.
Mom and dad, my view is turning black,
I’m sorry but there is no turning back.
Goodbye mom and dad,
You are the greatest parent I could ever had!
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Comments: 147
awsum14 [2013-03-19 10:42:11 +0000 UTC]
Wow...just wow...I am sorry I am speechless....but this is truly amazing...oh look I am crying...well you get the point...and I have been in that postion before
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PivotSeq123 In reply to ??? [2013-03-15 01:11:34 +0000 UTC]
I swear for god... This is what has made me cry... It´s just, I´ve been a victim of this... In a different case, with my friends.. They used me, they liked me , they made me feel confident. And then.. trashed me away, like nothing, like shit.
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Tuff-Lan In reply to PivotSeq123 [2013-03-17 14:25:34 +0000 UTC]
I wrote this poem back when I was bullied aswell, suicide crossed my mind so many times, but I never tried thankfully. Now when I look back at that time, and when I read the poem again, so do I remember the pain and suffering, but then I also realise how strong and idenpendent I am now. You'll make it out so much stronger and better then those "friends", just never give up! I've always imagined myself as a phoenix, rise from the ashes and be stronger.
Also remember, you're never ever shit, you're an awesome person, an original personality. And you're better then them!
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PivotSeq123 In reply to Tuff-Lan [2013-03-17 23:44:20 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, Everything has just got worse, though so yeah I just ignore them
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PL-Fan111 In reply to ??? [2013-02-02 11:50:40 +0000 UTC]
Please, STOP BULLYING!
There are too many people who have tried to end their life because of it.
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Tuff-Lan In reply to PL-Fan111 [2013-02-03 00:59:50 +0000 UTC]
That's why we should stand united and make it stop
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Starlight13512 In reply to ??? [2013-01-21 20:42:13 +0000 UTC]
I swear to God, this made my cry.
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Tuff-Lan In reply to Starlight13512 [2013-01-24 12:09:29 +0000 UTC]
I don't know what to write expect, thank you for reading my poem.
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jamiecakes349 In reply to ??? [2012-11-27 02:20:46 +0000 UTC]
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HetaliaHetaonigirl [2012-11-24 03:25:43 +0000 UTC]
deppressedplz I'm cring my eyes out right now
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HetaliaHetaonigirl In reply to HetaliaHetaonigirl [2012-11-24 03:26:27 +0000 UTC]
Depressedplz
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HetaliaHetaonigirl In reply to HetaliaHetaonigirl [2012-12-27 02:46:18 +0000 UTC]
:icondepressedplz;
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countrywolf22 [2012-07-16 21:35:53 +0000 UTC]
Wow.....seriously i'm choking up right now.....
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ChibiHannah04 In reply to ??? [2012-06-28 17:38:06 +0000 UTC]
wow so true. you hear this kind of story's a lot.
I feel like i want to cry.
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Tuff-Lan In reply to ChibiHannah04 [2012-06-29 19:29:30 +0000 UTC]
Aw don't cry Im glad that I'm able to move some ppl and make them think about it atleast, that's one move into the right direction imo
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StarlightOrchard In reply to ??? [2012-05-02 22:49:35 +0000 UTC]
This poem is really moving.
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Tuff-Lan In reply to StarlightOrchard [2012-05-07 23:10:49 +0000 UTC]
well then, Thank you!
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Lombaxpuppy [2012-03-26 23:19:25 +0000 UTC]
I get bullied in school and so does my pals and whenever I try to stand up for them I get too nerovus..
But this poem/whatever its called is really inspiring.
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Tuff-Lan In reply to Lombaxpuppy [2012-04-09 16:49:29 +0000 UTC]
We all have to find our strenght to fight back, and it's hard. I know. I've been there myself when I was in school. But when I look back I, in a way, don't regret anything. I'm so much stronger, I can stand on my own two legs and no one, and I do rly mean NO ONE, can put me down now. Grow stronger and show that you're so much more then the bullies!
And thank you
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Lombaxpuppy In reply to Tuff-Lan [2012-04-09 19:25:41 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, and thanks for the inspiration!
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mojogrl96 In reply to ??? [2011-03-24 23:51:08 +0000 UTC]
we just had a anti-bullying assembly today so I looked up "stop bullying".... I dont know if people realize how much it hurts when they say things. I bet they dont know that the girl they called ugly, spent 2 hours on her makeup so people would except her. That the boy they just called stupid, goed to speech therapy every day for 4 hours. That the kid they just knocked over is beaten every night by their parents....
There's more to people than you can see... words hurt more than people know.... thank you
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Tuff-Lan In reply to mojogrl96 [2011-05-26 01:37:07 +0000 UTC]
wow.. just thank you.. I don't know what more to say then that. Thank you back.
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StrandedFighter In reply to ??? [2006-10-26 15:42:36 +0000 UTC]
really sad... but very well written
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Ex1 In reply to ??? [2006-10-25 17:10:59 +0000 UTC]
Rhyming seemed a bit forced. But I like the material. If it was meant to be like a young child was writing it then the impression comes off well.
...bullying hurts. A lot. I should know. It's a life no one should have to lead, living in fear.
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Tuff-Lan In reply to Ex1 [2006-10-25 20:17:03 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I know, my english isnt the best and but I feel that I got a clear meaning about this poem, to spread the word that the bullying should stop!
I dont think age matters when it comes to bullying, but yeah, its a young child that writes in it that I made up, sadly they're the one getting most affected by this.... Children can be so evil.......
I see now some changes Im going to do on the poem thou, thx for the notice, and the comment
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sniperkitten313 In reply to ??? [2006-10-25 17:10:44 +0000 UTC]
roger that...damn too many memories associated with that....good job.
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Tuff-Lan In reply to sniperkitten313 [2006-10-25 20:10:05 +0000 UTC]
Im trying my best to spread the word and stop this crap, I want the suffering to stop... thank you, feels good that Im not alone to think that this is awful and horrible!
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Tri-Linn In reply to Tuff-Lan [2013-03-22 04:09:55 +0000 UTC]
Bullying is almost murder.....
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aranelmorwen [2006-10-25 17:09:36 +0000 UTC]
So sad.
Bullies suck. I hope you weren't compelled to write this out of personal experience -- but if so? *HUGS!*
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Tuff-Lan In reply to aranelmorwen [2006-10-25 20:06:58 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I know, it puts so many to a limit that they cant take, and forces them too do stuff they shouldnt have to do cause, its isnt their fault!
I wrote this as an english poem at school, we were going to write about something we hated, and I hate bullying...... I just cant explain it
thx for the comment
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