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TunDeri In reply to Nightmare-Moon-Fan [2014-02-09 18:15:27 +0000 UTC]

You mean in a sweater? I've drawn my share of those two but not in a sweater.

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Nightmare-Moon-Fan In reply to TunDeri [2014-02-09 18:56:53 +0000 UTC]

ohh i thought you ment art style XD

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TunDeri In reply to FunkyBacon [2014-02-09 18:03:32 +0000 UTC]

Where exactly would you have me improve on?

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FunkyBacon In reply to TunDeri [2014-02-09 18:26:41 +0000 UTC]

Well... the shapes of the arms could be improved. Dunno why the collar bones show through the shirt. her neck seems kinda short, the boobs may be a little high, but not sure. Shading could still be improved on. Too much hair shine. The shape of the ears could be better, also not sure how or where they are attached to the skull.

Those are some of the things.

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TunDeri In reply to FunkyBacon [2014-02-09 18:32:40 +0000 UTC]

What's wrong with the arms? I thought about the bones but decided to leave them in. Guess I don't know the right length of neck. Didn't even think of em being too high. What do you suggest I look into with shading? I so knew that was too much. What kind of ears would be better? I'll look into the attachment...

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FunkyBacon In reply to TunDeri [2014-02-09 19:16:07 +0000 UTC]

The arms look slightly uneven and maybe a bit short and could be shaped a bit better (her left arms had a strange level of thickness).

I think the bones could have been added in via shading or similar.

I usually keep about a hands width for the neck's length.

I guess they might be held up by a bra, but if not they should always sag a bit.

Uhm... it's a though one to explain. I guess trying to make the shading based on the shape of the object. Like this shirt have a lot of folds but apart from a bit of shading in between it is not very pronounced at all.

yep.

Ears is kinda tricky, cause everyone have their own way of drawing them. I generally put up and behind the eyes, or sort of on top of the head.

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TunDeri In reply to FunkyBacon [2014-02-09 19:29:22 +0000 UTC]

I noticed that afterwards. darn

Yea I only recently learned the right way of drawing those anyway. Stupid me.

That's a good tip.

mmyea... more practice.

Jesus. You know I always try to avoid having to work too much on a pic. Always looking for the easiest ways out. Shading's been my pride and joy but it's good that you point out my wrongness.

Tbh I guess I never did study the poneh head structure completely. Or... I did, but I discarded what I learned.

Hey I wanna thank you for bricking me at this point. I am aware of turning into a proud little shit given too much free reign and time and only someone stopping me like this wakes me up from that. So very much thanks.

If you have a steam account I'd love to have you as a friend...

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FunkyBacon In reply to TunDeri [2014-02-09 19:59:11 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, I'm just glad if I can be of help. ^^

And yeah, I do have steam, which should be fairly easy to find. x3

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TunDeri In reply to SagelyByMoonlight [2014-02-09 18:11:10 +0000 UTC]

Mkay thanks. I don't know what is it with people demanding realism all of sudden

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SagelyByMoonlight In reply to TunDeri [2014-02-09 22:10:43 +0000 UTC]

Seriously? Realism? There's only so much realism you can possibly get from an anthropomorphic pastel colored mare. Idiots.

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