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TurtleShell — love
Published: 2003-09-07 01:52:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 86; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 28
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Description there are times
i dont know what to say
and when i talk
my words sound gay.
but when i see
that look on your face
i feel like im
in a special place.
there were times
i always thought of you
i got kinda scared
and didnt know what to do.
But now i really see
that you could be the one for me.
i am still quite young
and i still get scared
but then i relised
this feeling we shared.
now i know
that i love you
and i know
you love me too.
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Comments: 5

Celeserenity [2004-06-17 05:47:20 +0000 UTC]

Thats so sweet!
Your rhyming is slightly clinical in this piece, but you still get the feelings across very well.

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Gothik-Rose [2003-10-17 05:40:10 +0000 UTC]

Very sweet...

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Zerschmetterte [2003-09-13 22:59:31 +0000 UTC]

quite nice indeed

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psychodemon [2003-09-07 03:50:49 +0000 UTC]

Awww...how sweet.

Nice poem.

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TurtleShell In reply to psychodemon [2003-09-07 05:02:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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