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A real knife.

© 2010 Twiggy Teeluck
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Comments: 40

Ann-Sophie1 [2013-04-27 12:20:06 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Hello

This is a very good picture.
I like it because:
-The colors are great. The innocent white of the skin, the strong red of the blood and the cold grey/black of the knife.
-It could be really disgusting, but it isn't. It stays innocent and pure. It's like the blood is the most natural thing ever (and it is) and it just had to be there.
-The position with the knife. Theres something misterious about. Does the knife cut the lips? Did the knife cut the nose? Is she going to cut herself? How did she get hurt? And so on... The picture is persuant and that's why 4.5 stars for impact.
-The different shades of the blood. I mean, there is even blood on the theeths and it's nearly black. The blood on the lips on the contrary is so light and smooth.
-Great technique! It's blurred on the right places (her neck) and it's pin sharp like the knife on other places (4.5 stars for Technique. And that's great. I nearly never give five stars).
-The focus is great. It isn't her face, it's the knife and with the knife the action, the 'operation' in a way.

At this point I normally make a list with things I dislike but I couldn't find anything. Just the pose isn't very unique (just three stars for Originality), I saw it before, but here it doesn't really matter.

It's a great picture and you can be very proud with it.
Love, Ann-Sophie

P.S. I hope you did understand everything as I ment it. English isn't my first language.

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TwiggyTeeluck In reply to Ann-Sophie1 [2013-05-04 15:44:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the wonderful critique! And, I agree, the photo is not that original, haha.
I understood your English perfectly, by the way!

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bumfluff121 [2013-04-26 22:21:12 +0000 UTC]

Beutifulls

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Em0Anna [2011-04-22 17:27:15 +0000 UTC]

beautiful!

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eugenegregory [2011-01-18 00:38:32 +0000 UTC]

you have a bit of a darkside , dontcha?

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DevDia [2010-11-08 14:27:32 +0000 UTC]

sweet blood..mhmmm♥

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CobaltDr [2010-10-30 10:00:51 +0000 UTC]

The lipstick is a little smeared?

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twisted3mind [2010-03-28 19:04:32 +0000 UTC]

featured here: [link]

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tea-pot [2010-02-13 02:36:53 +0000 UTC]

this is great, the blood looks so real!

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Malchitos [2010-01-24 15:39:37 +0000 UTC]

your darker stuff is interesting too. Thats the Gemini duality coming out.

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gaozai90 [2010-01-18 03:03:21 +0000 UTC]

nice composition! very intriguing

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Blankserenity0204 [2010-01-16 23:51:15 +0000 UTC]

i rlly love this

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Blankserenity0204 [2010-01-16 23:51:02 +0000 UTC]

i rlly love this

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XNeedlesX [2010-01-16 00:48:21 +0000 UTC]

Featured you here: [link]
Thank you so much for inspiring me to become a better artist and taking the time to make art.

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hopemagic [2010-01-11 08:32:01 +0000 UTC]

definitely my favourite !!!!

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XanthicAmber [2010-01-10 19:09:15 +0000 UTC]

You are seriously beyond your years sweetie.....

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Serend1pity [2010-01-10 00:27:33 +0000 UTC]

I shivered when i saw this

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Bromelia94 [2010-01-09 11:00:00 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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autopsybta [2010-01-08 21:09:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Nice!

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brokenrose80 [2010-01-08 16:32:35 +0000 UTC]

disturbing...which i suppose it is meant to be...but also reminds me of an urge i still have to fight..a good piece....

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DefaultOne [2010-01-08 15:56:48 +0000 UTC]

That's really cool. It really caught my attention

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Kevinho160 [2010-01-08 14:04:15 +0000 UTC]

! Watch It Next Time!
Nice pic, love it, gr8 work again

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VengeanceSuzume [2010-01-08 11:17:15 +0000 UTC]

Oh my! Just amazing! Into Favourites it goes!

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exoticpeach [2010-01-08 09:43:19 +0000 UTC]

braces

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MonsterGirl07 [2010-01-08 05:07:46 +0000 UTC]

OMGOTH!!! ADORE IT!!!

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shuniba [2010-01-08 04:40:21 +0000 UTC]

So I was eating when I looked at this.....it might be a while till I finish....not so hungry all of a sudden.

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AllGoodUserNamesGone [2010-01-07 23:45:28 +0000 UTC]

I really like this picture, lmao
I especially like how the knife almost looks like a finger shushing the person looking at the picture.
Very devious. XP

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maskqueraide [2010-01-07 23:10:12 +0000 UTC]

this is really nice ^^

I love the colors

What did you use for light? Or how rather?

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TwiggyTeeluck In reply to maskqueraide [2010-01-09 17:44:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Natural lighting.

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o-OChojiLoverO-o [2010-01-07 23:06:14 +0000 UTC]

Great pic! Oh, by the way, it says copyright 2009..

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TwiggyTeeluck In reply to o-OChojiLoverO-o [2010-01-07 23:10:15 +0000 UTC]

Whoops! Thank you.

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o-OChojiLoverO-o In reply to TwiggyTeeluck [2010-01-07 23:11:06 +0000 UTC]

No problem! I always stay in 'revious year mode' until, like, April

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AshiixElainexx [2010-01-07 21:09:17 +0000 UTC]

I love the vibrancy.

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Nicole-la [2010-01-07 20:49:41 +0000 UTC]

My friend wants to know if it is real blood as well , is it?

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TwiggyTeeluck In reply to Nicole-la [2010-01-07 20:50:18 +0000 UTC]

Haha, no.

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Jakuba-Photographie [2010-01-07 20:44:33 +0000 UTC]

really a great work !
beautiful tones, great sharpness!

is she wearing a brace ?

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Nicole-la [2010-01-07 20:44:23 +0000 UTC]

Is that a real knife!?

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TwiggyTeeluck In reply to Nicole-la [2010-01-07 20:45:53 +0000 UTC]

Yup.

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Nicole-la In reply to TwiggyTeeluck [2010-01-07 20:47:24 +0000 UTC]

O.O... You be carefull!

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Unhudion [2010-01-07 20:44:09 +0000 UTC]

Awesome ^^

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