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Published: 2007-06-20 16:03:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 36024; Favourites: 484; Downloads: 580
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Polaris looooves Jean's soles. They are just so irresistably responsive! Her whole body jerks and shivvers as the countless tickling tools stroke and prod. Jean feels like she is loosing her mind; begging and pleading for Polaris to stop. But our green haired friend can't get enough of the begging. She drinks in the image of Jean's squirming soles with ravenous delight. And the more hysterical Jean gets, the more Polaris craves the sounds and sights of Jean's tickle torture...Related content
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If im not mistaken, u made pg 6 as the end of the story 😝
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I LOVE this series! Very clever idea, truly fiendish...
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Another awesome job dude. This is a great series. Thanks for posting.
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Very nice. I agree those piggies need to be spread for those hard to reach places!
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wow. She's really getting it now. I'm not too familiar with X-Men and only watched the first two movies, but I really like this series.
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Good one!
You can see the ticklish insanity in her face!
The background goes perfectly with her situation...
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thank you! I am glad you noticed the background. I was worried that it maybe looked corny. And I also worried a bit about what color the ripples should be. I chose blue because I think it contrasts with the rest of the pic.
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Not corny at all! I love the color that was chosen!
I don't know the exact effect you were looking for, but if you were looking for a background that shows true tickling craziness, I would have chosen brighter colors like yellow or orange to be in the center of the pic and red to be at the outer-most edges....just like a circular gradient effect in photoshop... those colors would still contrast with the rest....
and instead of using a smooth circular ripple pattern, you could have made the edges of the circles, sharp and "zig-zag-like"...or you could have made the ripple effect look more distorted to continue that very crazy look...
I don't usually critique another artist piece so much (especially a great artist such as yourself!) But i just wanted to share what i thought...
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all great ideas! Maybe in the future Ill vary the circles like suggested.
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One of my personal faves from this series.
I love the look of tickle torture on her face.
And metalic nail polish so Polaris can get between her toes. Wow. Why didn't I think of that
Nice work buddy,
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thanks bandito! I didnt want to have to draw toe rings, which block the feathers.
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