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Tyrantboy — The Alien suit part one
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Description The Alien suit-Part #1


It was 8:00 am the turnbel residence and Tommy, Lola, Gus and Robotboy were watching there daily programming of there favorite, the Human fist.

Human fist: “It’s fist-de-coffin time!”

Gus: “oh, I think this is a new episode they said in the commercials!”

Tommy: “Awesome!”  

But just as the show was about to start, they were interrupted by a newscast.

News reporter: were interrupt your daily programming to bring you this news”

Everybody: “HEY!”

News reporter: a large meteor is heading strait for the bay area at an alarming speed and may be a threat to the city… wait … this just in, the meteor is breaking into little pieces in the atmosphere… it is still advised that you stay indoors for the next few days while small fragments of the meteor rain down on the town. This is channel 7 news, good night.

Lola: “Now what are we going to do for awhile?” Lola questioned    

Robotboy: “how-bout video-games?”

Gus: “Nah, Tommy doesn’t have any decent games worthy of the G-mans skill.”

Tommy: “Whatever Gu-“

Suddenly before Tommy could finish what he was saying there was a large explosion outside the house. They all went to investigate and to there surprise they saw Dr.Kamakazi with army of killer robots (Though not as good as robotboy of course) standing outside the house.

Dr.kamakazi: “Handover ROBOTBOY! Or face my army of mutant lions!”

Tommy: “You’ll never have Robotboy!”
Dr.Kamakazi: “Mutant Lions, ATTACK!”

Suddenly mutant lions started surrounding the house on all sides, ready to rip everything apart, but robotboy was faster he quickly jumped into action. Lions were flying in every direction when robotboy threw punches, kicks, lasers, guns everything in his arsenal he used on the beasts, but they just kept coming.
Elsewhere Tommy, Gus and Lola were hiding in the house a pair of mutant Battle lions grabbed the trio and headed outside. As Robotboy continued fighting robotboy saw his friends in the hands of Kamikaze’s minions.

Dr.Kamakazi: “Surrender to me NOW Robotboy, or else your friends pay!”

Tommy: “don’t do it Robotboy! Tommy yelled

But Tommy’s words did not convince him, so he had no other option to, but surrender! As soon as he began to shrink back down to normal size BJORN BJORNSON entered the fray.

Bjorn: “not so fast robotboy, you will not escape this time. Bjornbot, ATTACK!

Bjornbot: “YAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

Dr.K: “OH NO YOU DON’T BJORN! LIONS ATTACK!

Suddenly they all sprang into action with everything they had, bjornbot super-activated, mutant lions clawing at them and kamikaze and Bjornson were enjoying themselves to much to do anything. Robotboy didn’t stand a chance, he was getting pulverized by everyone, everything, and anything, and Bjorn was having the time of his life!

Bjorn Bjornson: “Yes, finally I shall destroy robotboy and will have the greatest fighting robot in the WORLD, ahahahahaha!”  

Kamakazi: “you fools stop messing around and go get ROBOTBOY!”

It was after that moment that kamakazi lost his place in the battle. The lions turned around and started chasing him and Constantine.

Dr.K “CONSTANTINE, I BALAME YOU!”

Constantine: “I know boss……. I know.”

Tommy, Gus and Lola were set free of there captor after kamakazi ran away, but Robotboy was being torn apart limb from limb, then he deactivated leaving him defenseless and at the mercy of Bjornbot!

Bjorn: “Finish him off Brother Bjorn!”

Bjornbot: “YAH!”

Tommy, Gus, Lola: “NOOOOOOOOOOO”
     
It was at that precise moment that it started raining meteors the size of fists. Every body took shelter, everybody but Robotboy who was deactivated got pummeled by the rocks and would have been destroyed if it weren’t for a small gooey like substance that appeared out of one of the rocks and began to ooze all over him, reactivating him with a few surprises…

Tommy: “oooooooooooooooh nooooooooooooooo, ROBOTBOY!”   

Bjorn: “YEEEEEESSSSSSSSSS FINALLY I-

Suddenly robotboy appeared out of the ruble and stood on top of the pile of rocks looking down at Bjornbot with anger. Now everybody was surprised to see robotboy for not only being alive but because he was wearing a dark black suit with big white emotionless eyes staring at his target.     

Gus: “HOLY CRUD ROBOTBOY WHAT IS THAT!”

But robotboy didn’t answer……. Suddenly robotboy leapt into battle, grabbing Bjorn bot by the arm and ripping it clean off and then punching him in the torso and making him explode! At the sight of this Bjorn began running away screaming like a little punk all the way back home.

Tommy: “Robotboy, how did you do that?”

Robotboy responded with a better vocabulary.

Robotboy: “I don’t know Tommy, I feel good, I feel stronger, faster, and smarter and… my speech craft has improved. But this suit… where did it come from?
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Comments: 57

Tyrantboy In reply to ??? [2011-02-18 22:47:31 +0000 UTC]

no, i was thunking of future art trades and crossovers.

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charactermaker27 In reply to Tyrantboy [2011-02-18 22:48:32 +0000 UTC]

got it

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Tyrantboy In reply to charactermaker27 [2011-02-18 22:52:51 +0000 UTC]

that, and i was in character.

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charactermaker27 In reply to Tyrantboy [2011-02-18 23:06:04 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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DarthWill3 [2008-10-08 00:48:26 +0000 UTC]

Wow!!! When does the next chapter come up? When does Lola finally confess her feelings to Tommy, man?!? I can't wait to see Venom!

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-10-08 03:21:11 +0000 UTC]

lola thing will come later in the story line and as for the venom of the series will be in part 3 and check my gallery for more info.

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-10-13 21:18:20 +0000 UTC]

Then why is taking so long, man?!?!?

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-10-14 02:56:31 +0000 UTC]

what you think writing a story is easy? i have to come up with how they get the symbiote off, how to introduce gray, what robotboy does to make him look stupid, what powers symbiote boy has, how robotboy defeats him, what the characters are saying the setting... shall i continue?
the point is that these things take time so please be patient.

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-10-14 23:05:35 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you, sir. I know the feeling when working on a new chapter. Just don't take too long, okay?

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-10-14 23:53:08 +0000 UTC]

okay, it will be done before the first day of november.

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-10-26 21:00:21 +0000 UTC]

Well, it's October 26 and it looks like you'd better come up with a chapter soon before Halloween starts.

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-10-28 23:47:31 +0000 UTC]

part two is finished.

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-10-29 23:38:46 +0000 UTC]

You con artist!!!! I don't see the next chapter anywhere!!!!

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-10-31 03:38:47 +0000 UTC]

................ i'm having some art submission problems right now, my computers acting up so hold on.

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-11-01 19:02:36 +0000 UTC]

I know the feeling. I had the same problem when I first started making fan fiction on this site.

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-11-03 02:50:36 +0000 UTC]

yeah, story making on this site dosent make sense.

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-11-04 00:06:56 +0000 UTC]

Just let me know when it's officially done. I'll be patient. Okay?

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-11-05 04:37:25 +0000 UTC]

thank you for your patience.

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-11-05 21:25:56 +0000 UTC]

So what seems to be the trouble? How can I be of assistance?

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-11-06 02:52:16 +0000 UTC]

well it says that it won't accept any word documents.

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-11-07 00:24:44 +0000 UTC]

Try bringing the story to the text file.

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-11-07 04:25:34 +0000 UTC]

ok.

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-11-08 03:59:02 +0000 UTC]

Any luck so far yet?

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-11-08 19:03:55 +0000 UTC]

absolutely nothing...

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-11-08 20:36:04 +0000 UTC]

Did you do exactly as the system told you how?

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-11-10 01:33:35 +0000 UTC]

yes, but for some reason it's not working.
you know what maybe i'll switch computers when trying to post it.

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-11-10 20:33:48 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps that maybe so.

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-11-11 17:43:15 +0000 UTC]

OH MAN! i forgot, my mom is constantly using the other computer because of a test she has to pass if she wants a raise so thats a no go, I'm taking this up with the staff.

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-11-11 19:38:54 +0000 UTC]

Don't just stand there stalling, man! Get after her!

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-11-15 03:45:12 +0000 UTC]

who my mom! she needs that raise!

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-11-15 04:25:45 +0000 UTC]

Then ask her to take a break. She must've been working too hard.

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-11-16 03:22:18 +0000 UTC]

i'll see what i can do...

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-11-16 04:00:43 +0000 UTC]

You sure take a long time to respond, don't you?

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-11-19 04:39:54 +0000 UTC]

sorry, things are getting hard to get at my house, there is allot of chaos...

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-11-19 20:08:29 +0000 UTC]

Well, ask your folks to give you peace and quiet for heavens sake, or you'll go mad!

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-11-21 00:45:24 +0000 UTC]

i think i'll be fine

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-11-21 14:49:28 +0000 UTC]

Then I've got four words to say in behalf of your good health....

"GET BACK TO WORK!!!!"

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-11-23 20:35:53 +0000 UTC]

listen, i'll just let you know when it's posted ok!

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-11-23 20:46:32 +0000 UTC]

Okay!

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-11-25 20:22:35 +0000 UTC]

hey uhhh... just another problem..... i'm in my grandmas house for thanksgivig AND MY BIRTHDAY! and she doesn't have a disk or something that i can copy the story on to so it's still delayed sorry

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-11-25 21:35:17 +0000 UTC]

Drat! Drat! And DOUBLE drat! And even a TRIPLE drat!

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-11-27 22:36:05 +0000 UTC]

i'm so sorry, forgive me.

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-11-27 22:54:03 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry. You're forgiven. Now would you be so kind as to post the second chapter for us?

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-11-29 00:36:38 +0000 UTC]

umm... i can't, my computers busted... remember...

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-11-29 00:39:50 +0000 UTC]

Well get it fixed, for crying out loud! or maybe just replace it.

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-11-29 01:23:04 +0000 UTC]

ok, ok i'll see what i can do...

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-11-29 01:40:24 +0000 UTC]

Good luck, dude.

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Tyrantboy In reply to DarthWill3 [2008-12-02 02:40:01 +0000 UTC]

thanks and to end this ridiculously long comments we have had i'll just send you a private note telling you when i solved this problem.

by the way i might be geeting my old profile back soon...

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-12-02 20:03:38 +0000 UTC]

See ya later...

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DarthWill3 In reply to Tyrantboy [2008-12-02 19:58:46 +0000 UTC]

See ya!

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