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Published: 2014-09-07 22:15:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 314; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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You've got me shaking from the way you're talkingMy heart is breaking but there's no use crying
What a cyanide surprise you have left for my eyes
If I had common sense I'd cut myself or curl up and die
Sticks and stones could break my bones
But anything you say will only fuel my lungs
Don't mind us we're just spilling our guts
If this is love I don't wanna be loved
You pollute the room with a filthy tongue
Watch me choke it down so I can throw it up.
Don't mind us we're just spilling our guts
If this is love I don't wanna be hanging by the neck
Before an audience of death.
You would be the corpse and I would be the killer
I would be the devil and you would be the sinner
You would be the drugs and I would be the dealer
Everything you say is like music to my ears
You would be the corpse and I would be the killer
I would be the devil and you would be the sinner
You would be the drugs and I would be the dealer
Everything you say is like music to my, music to my ears
Don't mind us we're just spilling our guts
If this is love I don't wanna be loved
You pollute the room with a filthy tongue
Watch me choke it down so I can throw it up.
Don't mind us we're just spilling our guts
If this is love I don't wanna be hanging by the neck
Before an audience of death
(Before an audience of death)
Failure find me
To tie me up now
'Cause I'm as bad, as bad as it gets
Failure find me
To hang me up now
By my neck cause I'm a fate worse than death
What a cyanide surprise you have left for my eyes
If I had common sense I'd cut myself or curl up and die
Don't mind us we're just spilling our guts
If this is love I don't wanna be loved
You pollute the room with a filthy tongue
Watch me choke it down so I can throw it up
Don't mind us we're just spilling our guts
If this is love I don't wanna be hanging by the neck
Before an audience of death
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Shard lowered her head and crept through the shadowed forest, large ears pricked and shoved forwards.
Catalyse stood nearby, amber eyes narrowed.
It's rather funny to see them together.
One lanky, slim, bony, skeletal like, with huge coyote like ears, yet beautiful.
One thick-furred, bulky with a stout muzzle, with rounded and short ears.
One with deathly pale blue eyes, the other with dusky amber eyes.
Shard stared at Catalyse, numb.
"Stop making me become like you," growled Catalyse.
"Then stop making me become so numb," retorted Shard. Her hackles were raised.
"I just hope you don't love me, because this shouldn't be love. Not with you snipping at me like this."
Shard froze and locked her eyes into his. The indigo sky shone through the trees, and darkness shrouded the place, gripping it with it's deadly claws, letting it's fingers grip the two wolves.
"I HATE EVERYTHING ABOUT YOU!" she snarled.
Catalyse lowered his head.
"Then why would you act like this? Then why do you love me? This isn't hatred - you know that. Why?"
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Part of one of my story's chapters
Hope you like!
Black dood iz Shard, other guy is Catalyse.
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Comments: 19
Siddaki [2014-09-25 12:36:40 +0000 UTC]
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Ooh, I really like the shading in this one, especially on the back canine. Your color choice is quite pleasing to the eye, and the background doesn't distract from the main focus at all. And the eyes! I love them! You just need a few tweaks on the anatomy. First, the bodies are too skinny for wolves, which usually have thick bodies, especially if you are drawing the more northern subspecies. I could link you to a few tutorials if you like. Also, some proportions are out of whack, or to quote Skippyjon-Jones, "My ears are too big for my head, and my head is too big for my body!" However, all these can be easily fixed while preserving the cartoony feel of your previous works, and using your coloring skills your art could progress greatly! As I mentioned previously, I could find you some really good tutorials, though I wouldn't be averse to helping you yourself. Have a good day!
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TyrantRainfire In reply to Siddaki [2014-09-26 03:28:03 +0000 UTC]
Hnngh, thank you! I'm happy that I did a hood job shading!
Yeah, I did make the guy in the back really skinny xD
But for the other guy, she's actually supposed to have crazy huge ears and is supposed to be all anatomy weird. She is a hybrid wolf jackel greyhound coyote thing, so yea :3
With my colouring, I just use paint bucket :3
As for the tutorials, you don't need to :3
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Siddaki In reply to TyrantRainfire [2014-09-26 20:53:18 +0000 UTC]
Wolf jackal greyhound coyote mix! Cool idea, but I'm wondering how that happened.
But I digress. Now that I have some background info, the anatomy seems less strange. The big ears definitely fit in if you consider the jackal side of the family. Taking the greyhound side into account, her slenderness makes much more sense, but she could probably be slightly beefed up in the future. For example, here's a picture of a greyhound mutt with wolf ancestry for reference:
Pretty scrawny, but still has some curves.
So anyway, thanks for replying in a civil and reasonable manner! Nice talking to you.
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TyrantRainfire In reply to Ghoststarx [2014-09-26 03:13:14 +0000 UTC]
Mdjdjdjd
Thannnkky youuu!!!!!!!!!!!!
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SummerMarmalade [2014-09-07 22:28:46 +0000 UTC]
oh my! so cool!
The picture's beautiful and the story has me very interested :3
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TyrantRainfire In reply to SummerMarmalade [2014-09-07 22:45:32 +0000 UTC]
Hnngh thanks so mcuh!!
Thanks so much, and awesome! :3
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SummerMarmalade In reply to TyrantRainfire [2014-09-07 22:47:39 +0000 UTC]
No problem!
It's such an awesome picture!
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DaisyDaFox In reply to TyrantRainfire [2014-09-08 01:07:35 +0000 UTC]
DON'T ACT YOU HAVEN'T DONE IT BEFORE TINY CAT..!
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