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Beware, english isn't my native language neither so I may be incorrect with this and I'm sorry for that.
If you find some incorrect sentences or grammar please notify me about that.
Warhammer 40K (c) by Gamesworkshop
Art and Characterdesigne (c) by M. Hoffmann
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Oh boy deep character 101 rule DO NOT MESS WITH HIS STUFF
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...what is the 101 rule ? Never heard about it.
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It's sort of cliche thing, like never ever go into Black Widows room and check the drawers, let alone The Hulk's
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Hi, I noticed some minor mistakes in the second panel : I think it's doze, not the -ing form (because there's "can" before) and good "at", not in. I've been following your story for a while, now. It's amazing to see how you keep improving everything ! No offense in any way, I just mean I already liked your comic a lot. I like it more and more^^
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Thank you very much for the little help.
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Time to see some sentimental character backstory!
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In the first panel "Cool it" could probably be replaced with "relax" for a more common wording, and in the last i think you left out "but I don't 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
oohh i wend if there thing are from when he was kid 
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I assure you these things aren't from his childhood)
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oohh. damn now i really want to see next page xD
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