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Previous pageBeware, english isn't my native language neither so I may be incorrect with thisΒ and I'm sorry for that.
If you find some incorrect sentences or grammar please notify me about that.
Warhammer 40K (c) by Gamesworkshop
Art and Characterdesigne (c) by M. Hoffmann
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I just found it. And saw the entire channel in one day. And quoting a certain GreyKnight . I NEED. MORE!
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Awesome, I wonder when will the next chapter come.
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Wait. I read through it all already? DANGIT. I'll just go sit in a corner and wait for more...
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Just to help some with correcting a few odd sounding English sentences:
the first one, instead of "We have to put the whole men on alert" You could instead go "We have to put the whole ship on alert"
and instead of "thronedam" you could say "Throne damned Ikeaon, please!"
Then some in the lower portion, instead of "did the chaplain bawl you again? How much he pumped up the volume this time?" it could be phrased, "Did the Chaplain bawl at you again? How much did he pump up the volume this time?" but I'm not sure what 'Volume' they're talking about.
Still, great to see a new page
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Thx you allot again.
Well it's about the sound volume. I thought if I write just volume everybody knows what I mean...
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Also its Kids not Kidz. But still, KEEP MAKING THIS!
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No worries. Just happy to help.
And then volume is fine! Just me misunderstanding, volume can "technically" also mean how much space a fluid thing can take, like one liter of water is a form of volume.
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Are you horus's long lost brother or something?
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some things should stay lost
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