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Published: 2007-10-21 04:49:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 399; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Ya, I know it's bad, but I'm proud of it. It was the best I could do. I'll take advice...or suggestions. I had one up earlier. Is this one better? The other one is in scraps.Related content
Comments: 11
Yo-yoMaster [2007-10-21 14:41:38 +0000 UTC]
Holy coffeecakes! That's awesome! Love da face.
Suggestions?
For the outline of the circle, use a really, really dark turquoise.
For the wings, use a frame in which the wings are at a diagonal angle. This will make da flapping more fluid.
Make the head go up and down with the wings. When the wings push down, he goes up. When the wings go up, he isn't pushing down anymore and should fall a bit.
Nice job on the face!
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Yo-yoMaster In reply to uberfetch [2007-10-21 16:42:08 +0000 UTC]
oh man, much better. Though can I be reeeaeaallly nitpicky? To make this totally awesomely perfect, maybe try making the wings also go diagonally down. Right now they stop at the horizontal and then go up again.
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uberfetch In reply to uberfetch [2007-10-21 17:01:32 +0000 UTC]
I don't think I'm going to. I sort of imagine the wings above the bodys head slightly. I don't know. Also for me this is good and I'm afraid I'll mess it up if I try to mess with it to much.
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uberfetch In reply to Yo-yoMaster [2007-10-21 17:53:19 +0000 UTC]
Sorry, but I don't think it looks THAT bad. I just kinda like it the way it is.
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uberfetch In reply to uberfetch [2007-10-21 17:54:10 +0000 UTC]
ok that last statement seemed a little harsh on my part. I did ask for advice and I will still accept it
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Yo-yoMaster In reply to uberfetch [2007-10-22 23:37:48 +0000 UTC]
whoa-whoa, buddy (LOVE THAT! And yes, that was an imperative sentence ). I think it looks great. Which is why I'm gonna remove favorite jus' so I can add it again.
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