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stokrotas [2020-04-03 18:17:07 +0000 UTC]

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Yuukon [2020-01-05 11:12:22 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, these are such beautiful flowers! You did really well in isolating just the one to put the focus on, so good work on that! Compared to the purple one I critiqued a few days ago, this is already a huge improvement when it comes to focus. I do have a tip for you when it comes to composition, though. The one that is in focus is all the way to the left side of the photo. I think that if you were to move the composition a bit more, so the left flower has more space on the left side, it will all feel a bit more open. Perhaps even cut off the flower that's all the way to the right. Since it's completely out of focus, it doesn't add anything, it's just kind of... there. The light in this shot is once again really nice. You do always know to capture the lovely light circumstances!

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