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Published: 2020-05-10 14:51:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 367; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 0
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When I was lost
                in the desert

shattered
                broken
outside    
                inside

beating pain
                twitching havoc


the vestiges
                of a human.


no survivors
                expected.




strings of silk
        unite the fragments
        left of me

the burial cloth
        dresses me well

my fractured spine
        I fixed
        using the nails
                of my coffin

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MatsHolmberg [2020-05-21 12:28:16 +0000 UTC]

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ugnip In reply to MatsHolmberg [2020-05-23 08:50:10 +0000 UTC]

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MatsHolmberg In reply to ugnip [2020-05-23 13:40:44 +0000 UTC]

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MegapixelMasterpiece [2020-05-12 19:42:37 +0000 UTC]

I really liked this section:

"shattered
               broken
outside    
               inside"

and those last few lines have some power to them and create some powerful imagery 

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ugnip In reply to MegapixelMasterpiece [2020-05-13 15:27:48 +0000 UTC]

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