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Published: 2020-03-15 10:34:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1926; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 0
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I hover
In empty space
All alone on my own
I scream
Nobody hears me
There's no sound in space
I see
Faint distant stars
The only lights I have
I wonderΒ
Will someone find
Me here in this emptiness?
I hope
For final touchdown
To bring me back home
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Comments: 34
MrNail079 [2020-03-26 14:53:33 +0000 UTC]
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ugnip In reply to MrNail079 [2020-03-26 18:21:36 +0000 UTC]
This is so true
Let's keep to the hope
Thank you for the anyway, I am glad you liked my writing!
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Tinselfire [2020-03-23 20:09:05 +0000 UTC]
Must disagree with some of the previous comments on the interpretation. Judging from the experience of lunar command module pilots, these are the good things about going into deep space alone. Peace and quiet and nobody to bother you - and not burning up or becoming dinner for wolves are pretty universal hopes for space travellers.
I rather like it.
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ugnip In reply to Tinselfire [2020-03-24 11:59:22 +0000 UTC]
Hm, yes there might be different opinions on that.
Thanks for sharing yours!
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Tinselfire In reply to ugnip [2020-03-24 14:41:12 +0000 UTC]
Thanks in turn for writing <3
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LiterarySerenity [2020-03-23 04:35:17 +0000 UTC]
I wish the best for this space traveler.Β
Congrats on a well-deserved DD! ^_^β‘
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ugnip In reply to LiterarySerenity [2020-03-23 10:50:36 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
Also for the and the
!
I am happy you liked my writing
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LiterarySerenity In reply to ugnip [2020-03-23 20:52:08 +0000 UTC]
You are very welcome! ^_^
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xlntwtch [2020-03-22 22:16:43 +0000 UTC]
on the DD! A brief yet full look at what is maybe the deepest reason for longing = how alone we can all be.
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ugnip In reply to xlntwtch [2020-03-23 10:49:52 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
Also for the !
I am happy you liked my writing
Even if loneliness is not such a nice thing..
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serLeinad [2020-03-22 21:19:01 +0000 UTC]
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LindArtz [2020-03-22 21:13:43 +0000 UTC]
This brings to the fore all the reasons why I'd never want to go into Outer Space.Β (although I realize this is more of an analogy)Β Β Well done! !!
Congratulations on your much deserved, DD! !!!
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ugnip In reply to LindArtz [2020-03-23 10:45:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much, also for the !
I am happy you liked the piece
Sure it is an analogy,Β
but I would also not like to go to space
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ugnip In reply to WindySilver [2020-03-23 10:44:14 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
I am happy you like it
Thanks also for the !
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ugnip In reply to ariya-sacca [2020-03-22 18:37:34 +0000 UTC]
I hope so
Thank you for the and the
!!
Stay safe and healthy!
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Lintu47 [2020-03-22 12:00:12 +0000 UTC]
Hello!
Congrats on the Daily Deviation β₯
Have a nice day and stay safe!
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ugnip In reply to Lintu47 [2020-03-22 12:13:30 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
You stay safe too!
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forgottenchampioness [2020-03-17 23:53:04 +0000 UTC]
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ugnip In reply to forgottenchampioness [2020-03-18 10:38:01 +0000 UTC]
I knew some Starset songs before, but not that particular one
They make good music,
however since I listened to them when I was feeling not so well, I have ambivalent feelings to it
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JessaMar [2020-03-16 21:34:14 +0000 UTC]
I love the imagery of this, it feels very apt.
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ugnip In reply to JessaMar [2020-03-17 14:35:43 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
Also for the !
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MatsHolmberg [2020-03-15 10:43:30 +0000 UTC]
I also hope for that final touchdown. Well written!
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ugnip In reply to MatsHolmberg [2020-03-15 18:10:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you
Someday gravity will do its duty I hope
I will answer your message during the week hopefully
Have a good evening!
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