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Ultima-Wraith — Lost Time
Published: 2005-10-13 02:35:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 111; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 5
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Description "You take the love out of love,
you take the like out of like,
Every push and every shove,
we always end up in a fight,
I know you care somewhere about me,
but it's too far down, and I just can't see.

You hope you can save me,
But i'm already gone,
Nothing you can do now,
But try to just move on,
I always wanted to be your only one,
But i'm afraid it's all come undone,

I once looked into your eyes,
There I saw my future,
Now all I can see are lies,
No truth for suture,
I held your hand,
Kept it close to me,
But it all went bad,
And it's not a sight to see,

One day down, and another left to go,
Freedom is something I'll never, ever know,
Despite all the pain, and the fury in my heart,
I still love you somehow,
And I'm sorry we had to part."
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Comments: 19

MaliceInGothland [2005-11-09 21:45:59 +0000 UTC]

very good one, nice rhymes and choice of words !

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Ultima-Wraith In reply to MaliceInGothland [2005-11-10 05:08:04 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Nemhein [2005-10-26 07:04:22 +0000 UTC]

it is quite catchy and nice to read, the flow is very good

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Ultima-Wraith In reply to Nemhein [2005-10-26 13:11:35 +0000 UTC]

I just need to find the rhythm..........and out how to record it.

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Shadows-Link13 [2005-10-16 22:49:05 +0000 UTC]

Oo that is an awesome poem/ song/ whatever. I like it

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Ultima-Wraith In reply to Shadows-Link13 [2005-10-17 02:19:58 +0000 UTC]

Yea, if I knew music, I'd have to make music notations.

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ladygalad [2005-10-16 22:47:14 +0000 UTC]

oh I really like how you start out this poem: "You take the love out of love,
you take the like out of like," I feel like that all the time in relationships.

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Ultima-Wraith In reply to ladygalad [2005-10-17 02:19:33 +0000 UTC]

lol yea, it symbolizes how if you take that out of itself, what are you left with? Nothing....that's what. lol Yea, and I want ya all to know, i'm not depressed, or anything. Just wanted to make a weird one again.

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KamikazeMizZ [2005-10-15 18:21:42 +0000 UTC]

*pat pat* nice ...
the sentiment resonates with me ... ...
heyy ... how's it been? ... we haven't talked in so long ...

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Ultima-Wraith In reply to KamikazeMizZ [2005-10-15 18:54:47 +0000 UTC]

it's been good, i'm in high spirits, actually, despite the somewhat creepeh poetry coming lately

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KamikazeMizZ In reply to Ultima-Wraith [2005-10-15 19:35:51 +0000 UTC]

hahaha ... glad to hear it! ...
it's great creepeh poetry though ... i like it ..

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Ultima-Wraith In reply to KamikazeMizZ [2005-10-16 04:30:55 +0000 UTC]

yea, I have to clarify that every now in then, cuz creepy is what I do, even when i'm happy XD

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KamikazeMizZ In reply to Ultima-Wraith [2005-10-20 03:59:37 +0000 UTC]

lorl same here ... i manage to come up with pretty gothic n gory themes ... especially in my most creative moments ...

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Ultima-Wraith In reply to KamikazeMizZ [2005-10-20 04:21:29 +0000 UTC]

yea

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Droakir [2005-10-13 19:40:20 +0000 UTC]

Nice job.

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Ultima-Wraith In reply to Droakir [2005-10-13 20:11:56 +0000 UTC]

thnx

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Rinnu [2005-10-13 02:38:17 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaw~ That's such a sweet song/poem thingy. Wonderful job, it's very pretty. ^^ Just add a chorus and it could be a song.

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Ultima-Wraith In reply to Rinnu [2005-10-13 02:53:15 +0000 UTC]

yea, I know, but I left out a chorus, cuz i'm not musically inclined as far as PLAYING

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Rinnu In reply to Ultima-Wraith [2005-10-13 02:58:28 +0000 UTC]

Aaah, okies. Makes sense now! ^^

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