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UmbraNix — Does it feel like a trial? .:contest entry:.
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"Exile. It takes your mind...again.
Exile. It takes your mind...again.
You got sucker's luck...
Have you given up?
Does it feel like a trial?
Does it trouble your mind the way, you trouble mine.
Exile. It takes your mind...again.
Exile. It takes your mind...again.
Oh, you meant so much...
Have you given up?
Does it feel like a trial?
Does it trouble your mind the way, you trouble mine.
Does it feel like a trial?
Now, you're thinkin' too fast you're like, marbles on glass.
Vilify. Don't even try.
Vilify. Don't even try.
You got sucker's luck...
Have you given up?
Does it feel like a trial?
Does it trouble your mind the way you trouble mine.
Does it feel like a trial?
Did you fall far for the same emptinesses again?
Vilify. Don't even try.
Vilify. Don't even try.
Vilify. Don't even try.
Vilify. Don't even try.
Vilify."
Exile Vilify By The National
So I was considering whether or not to redo my entry for *SilverLunarwing 's contest, because lets be honest it looks a little rushed, and then I started listening to Exile Vilify by The National and I sort of just
did this
and guess what my entry is now?
To be honest, I only wanted to do Nick at first because it's a pretty sad and lonely song, but since the rules said that wasn't allowed, I added Sol and Luna in there since thier cell is right next to Nick's. I can't say I'm happy with how Luna turned out, but I kept making the problem worse so I'm just leaving her as it is right now. I'm happy with how Sol came out though, I think I made her look sad enough...
To be honest, I purposely did the lineart messy. I think it fit the song, although now that I look back on it I could have done it in a better way
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Comments: 4
Oooh I love the contrast between the lines on Nick and the lineless background and other captives~ I'll make sure to use this as the final entry instead of the other (also awesome) one. ^^
Funnily enough, 'Exile Vilify' is one of the songs on the playlist I have for the comic! xD Evokes the same sort of image, too. Nice job!
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Aw yiss, thanks!
I can see why, the song really fits Nick's situation at this point in the comic, him being separated from Josie and being the new guy in strange obscure place and all. (And as a added bonus, it's a pretty good song ^^)
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This is amazing... there's just so much emotion pouring off of it, you captured the mood beautifully.
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Thank you rym ;9; That means a lot.
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