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umneem — L' Arrivee d'un train

Published: 2014-03-17 16:27:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 2740; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 11
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Description The first issue of the comic series. It is about rationality, probability theory, statistics and cognitive science. The main character's name is Dispersion.

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Русская версия доступна тут: umneem.org/mrp/1

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Exovare [2014-12-24 17:26:39 +0000 UTC]

Finally got around to doing it

First panel - "Ponyville - a small rural town."
                   "Ponies live a simple and regular live here."

Fourth panel - "...and make plans?"
                      "We'll see."
(I know from that comment under that you purposely neglected we. I'm not sure about Russian, but the subject cannot be neglected in English like it can in French, German, or Spanish. Also, it sounds more natural that way.)

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umneem In reply to Exovare [2014-12-25 07:15:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I will change to "We'll".

I updated the script with your corrections.

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demiprimordialgal [2014-09-05 06:24:38 +0000 UTC]

Uhm.. shouldn't it be "We'll see." ? 

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umneem In reply to demiprimordialgal [2014-09-05 07:49:45 +0000 UTC]

I omitted "we" from the full phrase "we will see".

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demiprimordialgal In reply to umneem [2014-09-05 14:07:41 +0000 UTC]

Mmm..

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orangeworld10 [2014-03-18 14:47:30 +0000 UTC]

Реально очень понравилось! 
Каждая пони - разная и симпатичная по стилю. Интрига-это здорово, будет очень интересно посмотреть, что там) дальше ... .

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Twylite-Sparkle [2014-03-18 00:22:04 +0000 UTC]

The 3rd panel is striking to me, & the orange highlights are neat, too.

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umneem In reply to Twylite-Sparkle [2014-03-18 05:16:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Twylite-Sparkle In reply to umneem [2014-03-18 12:33:24 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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