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Thoughts, praises, criticisms, and haters are welcome.Paper Mario story idea~! This one's been running in my head for a while, details constantly being worked on...but now I think I've perfected that idea!
- OVERALL DESCRIPTION IS WIP -
So Mario and Princess Peach go to the city of Polyhue to supervise preparations for an upcoming festival. But as Mario comes across a strange blue mirror, Peach is swiftly kidnapped by a group of cloaked phantom beings called Hoodlies! That night, Mario meets the spirit within the mirror, Fleurdelis, who implores for him to find the other spirits connected to the Unity Mirrors. And so, Mario sets off on a quest that may very well determine the fate of the land.
Mario
- Who doesn't know Mario? He's a worldwide celebrity. Bit modest and humble, but always willing to lend a hand if needed. With the Unity Mirror in hand, he sets out on adventure.
- A: Jump
- B: Hammer
Princess Peach
- The fair princess of the Mushroom Kingdom, she was kidnapped by Hoodlies. At their castle, she finds another Unity Mirror, which she uses to contact Mario now and then.
Fleurdelis
- A sprite that resides within Mario's Unity Mirror. She greatly values peace and happiness. Fleur also helps keeps the partners together when they lose their cool.
Marcus
- A sprite that appeared from the Unity Mirror that Peach found. Like her, he's trying to reach his special someone. For now, the two work together to learn more of the Hoodlies' plan.
Goombick
- A street-smart Goomba from Polyhue, he mainly always looked after himself only. After trying to steal Tattle Shades from this one eccentric researcher, though, he's stuck with community service - helping Mario.
- X: Tattle (Describes the area, or a nearby person/object; can also remind Mario of the quest at hand and of current sidequests)
Karol
- A modest junior student teacher at Bluebrick's school, she's mostly interested in archaeology. She's none too confident in herself, but her companions keep her hopes up.
- X: Shell Shot (Sprints forth in her shell to reach distant objects; can hold in place, and then snap back further)
Monte
- Captain of the Maple Forest rangers. This old Monty Mole does his best to keep the peace around the town of Sweetstack. He always puts on a cheery face, but hides the pain from losing his late wife.
- X: Dig (Burrows self and Mario underground for a little bit; can move under fences; can't dig into hard floors)
Shymus
- A bold young Fly Guy from the Valley of Shy, though his adamant attitude far exceeds his skill and cooperation. He's quick to admit to Mario, though, that he can't do much alone. He seems to be smitten with Karol.
- X: Copter Lift (Hops onto Mario and either spins in place to blow away things, or can carry Mario across a straight path)
Buki
- A Spookit maiden that Mario saves from the brink of fading. She's quite austere and a bit naive, suggesting that she hasn't gone to the outside world very often.
- X: Foxfire (Charges up, then swings a fiery claw forth to burn, heat, or melt things)
Confetti
- The singer Bob-omb of Bonus Round. She's usually full of pep and cheer, but a recent falling-out of the band made her break down, losing all her cheer...and her voice.
- X: Bomb (Mario tosses her overhead, then after a while, she'll explode)
Squilissa
- This Blooper is a medicine maker in the Nuves Jungle. Why she would live out there far from civilization is beyond anyone's guess. She seems to suffer from amnesia, and she tries to recall her past.
- X: Squirt (Charges up, then spurts water forth a bit to douse, soak, or fill things)
Thossler
- This enigmatic and hotheaded Hoodly has been vying to challenge Mario ever since they met in Polyhue. He seems desperate to take the Unity Mirror from him.
Porthy
- This heavy-set Hoodly fights with his huge fists. His way of speaking is always relaxed, since he puts all his "oomph" into battle.
Ramille
- A female Hoodly that hangs out with Thossler and Porthy. Try not to anger her - she doesn't forgive easily. They say she's better at magic than most other Hoodlies.
Bowser
- And of course, Bowser is involved in all the havoc going on. Seems he was promised a big share of power by whoever hired him. He and Kammy Koopa do whatever they can to hold up their end of the bargain.
Yes, the Unity Mirror is based on the Wii U controller. I figure the Touch Screen can be used for the special moves in battle, as well as for efficient shopping and cooking. Maybe even some minigames.
Oh yes, the partners are all heavily involved in the story, as well as their interactions. Also, they each get a second ability at certain parts of the story, along with an extra move in battle. As for ranking up...Rather than Super Blocks or Shine Sprites, there will be Challenge Blocks, which bring a certain partner into a side-scroller level to complete. Finishing two levels will rank up that partner. So, of course, there's four levels per partner, totaling to 28 Challenge Blocks.
-= DISCLAIMER =-
- Mario & all related characters (c) Nintendo
- I made up Goombick, Karol, Monte, Shymus, Buki, Spookits, Confetti, Squilissa, Fleurdelis, Marcus, Thossler, Porthy, and Ramille
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Comments: 46
GuffaTheK9FemboiWOOF [2019-11-27 23:24:17 +0000 UTC]
pitch this to nintendo. I Β would love this!
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Wolfkeylo34 [2019-07-13 15:07:13 +0000 UTC]
this would make a great game. I love the style of art you used here Β
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ToonMike [2018-02-24 19:48:22 +0000 UTC]
Marcus and Fleurdelis bothΒ remind me of Starlow from the Mario and Luigi series
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supercomputer276 [2016-11-24 06:01:06 +0000 UTC]
Definitely a slick idea. Particularly loving the Bob-omb character's design. Though I kinda question two Challenge Blocks for each partner rank up. Unless it's communicated well that two are needed to rank up, the player might think after the first one that they just provide a nice bonus stage. Eventually they'll do two for one partner and they'll learn it then, but before that it seems a little misleading.
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NorientheHedgeWolf [2016-08-31 01:13:40 +0000 UTC]
Nice work. Gotta say i wish this was a real game!
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TheKindDirector [2015-06-29 05:55:21 +0000 UTC]
thats quite a good idea actually for a game.
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BeekerMaroo777 [2014-09-24 22:54:57 +0000 UTC]
I like this a lot! I like how Marcus and Fleurdelis look like Starlow.
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Kisame-Abumi [2014-09-24 16:31:56 +0000 UTC]
Hope this actually becomes a video game in the future.
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annon002 [2014-07-11 23:56:14 +0000 UTC]
thumbs up! this is a great idea, and i hope this becomes a reality,
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Klonosz25 [2014-06-16 20:51:36 +0000 UTC]
You are more creative than the most people i know, around the world.
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MarioFanBoys [2014-06-02 07:19:14 +0000 UTC]
My favorite partners are Buki and Shymus. My favorite of the Hoodly gang is Ramile. Good work!
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Talongrasp [2014-04-22 19:50:59 +0000 UTC]
Aww, I absolutely LOVE Buki!! >w<
She's just so adorable!!! >W<
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Raymondwireful [2014-03-23 20:16:38 +0000 UTC]
Paper Mario U should Add duty of unity Server Online
I AGREEDΒ Β
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ChaosMiles07 [2013-10-01 17:44:03 +0000 UTC]
This would definitely turn out better than Sticker Star if made real. I endorse this idea!
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StarlightMoonstone [2013-09-05 01:20:12 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome!! Why hasn't Nintendo hired you and made this a reality yet?!
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PkmnTrainerKyle10293 [2013-01-08 13:00:46 +0000 UTC]
Great job! You should try submitting it to Nintendo!
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TheRainbowDork In reply to PkmnTrainerKyle10293 [2013-02-10 23:35:43 +0000 UTC]
AGREED!!!!
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Dastardly-Toons [2012-12-22 19:57:51 +0000 UTC]
This is one of the Finest storylines I`ve seen for a Fan game! The Character Personalities are golden, the story Top notch, and over all feels like a true paper mario game!
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PolishedBrain [2012-07-04 01:29:21 +0000 UTC]
My God, this is incredible.I really, really want to see more of this idea.My favourite partners are probably Karol and Buki.Great work there!
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PrincessMiyoko [2012-05-22 04:16:53 +0000 UTC]
This is a very interesting concept. I could see this being made into a Paper Mario game for certain. Each of the characters look unique, plus I could see a bit side Material for Bowser as well. I would love to see some fan-favorites as well as these new characters. The Hoodlies could make for a unique antagonist...and maybe even create some Hoodlie-hybrid Bowser baddies?
Challenge Blocks? That would be cool. I could see a character being sucked into the block and then you would play a side-scrolling level on the Wii U.
I'd love to see more work on this if you can.
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GardevoirxGallade12 [2012-05-12 13:45:21 +0000 UTC]
I love Buki.... i think this should be a real video game
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UMSAuthorLava In reply to M1staBuck [2012-04-30 15:55:47 +0000 UTC]
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gold-ring-951 [2012-03-21 15:20:04 +0000 UTC]
Are you really going to rite the whole story in chapters on this web or fanfic.com or is it just to show us to what we think how the rest of the story works out?
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UMSAuthorLava In reply to gold-ring-951 [2012-03-21 15:44:48 +0000 UTC]
Here, yes.
And I'll update the profiles accordingly.
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Tonythunder [2012-03-21 02:16:08 +0000 UTC]
This is a pretty cool little idea and pic here and I like the characters you made up too
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Blode4 [2012-03-20 23:11:50 +0000 UTC]
My favorite partner is probably Confetti. I find it to be a unique spin on a Bob-bomb character.
Hmm... With the Hoodlys' designs I wouldn't be surprised to see a Meta Knight cameo in a game like this.
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PrincePeace [2012-03-20 18:48:18 +0000 UTC]
Cool. The partners at first sound like same-old same-old, but giving them two abilities instead of just one sounds interesting. The Challenge Block sounds like a new, fun idea, and I like all the characters' designs too. I wish this game were real so I could play it!
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Gurt-B-Froe [2012-03-20 18:39:05 +0000 UTC]
This is quite an interesting Paper Mario game you came up with here. How would Luigi fit into the story?
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UMSAuthorLava In reply to Gurt-B-Froe [2012-03-20 19:36:46 +0000 UTC]
Hm, well...
...that's a secret!
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gold-ring-951 [2012-03-20 17:30:07 +0000 UTC]
Cool idea! And I like some of the new OCs you came up with too.
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