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Published: 2012-06-17 17:32:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 188; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 5
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Description the perfect machine
stitch parallel seams
follow your routine
hope all this is a dream

the perfect machine
a clear, blood-vein stream
thought-smooth, and unseen
the mind is pristine

the perfect machine
wash off what you've been
through fog and thick steam
no one knows what you mean

the perfect machine
take doubts, sugar, cream
too silent to scream
so you wipe it all clean

the perfect machine
erase all your seams
this is your routine
can't wake up, it's no dream
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Comments: 7

TheVolcaronaMaster [2012-06-18 16:29:35 +0000 UTC]

I see what you did with the bolding. I like it. You are a good poet, Puppet.

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UndeadPuppetMaster99 In reply to TheVolcaronaMaster [2012-06-18 16:35:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Yeah, the bolding was kind of a last minute thing I decided to add in. But I like it too.

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TheVolcaronaMaster In reply to UndeadPuppetMaster99 [2012-06-18 16:36:48 +0000 UTC]

I need to write more poetry now that I cleaned out my gallery.

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UndeadPuppetMaster99 In reply to TheVolcaronaMaster [2012-06-18 16:42:49 +0000 UTC]

So do I!

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TheVolcaronaMaster In reply to UndeadPuppetMaster99 [2012-06-18 16:53:39 +0000 UTC]

Maybe we can do some Poetry trades I guess? I write a verse, then you, then me, and so on? After that, we'll decide who keeps it.

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UndeadPuppetMaster99 In reply to TheVolcaronaMaster [2012-06-18 16:54:25 +0000 UTC]

That sounds awesome.

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TheVolcaronaMaster In reply to UndeadPuppetMaster99 [2012-06-18 16:56:15 +0000 UTC]

OK. So whenever you feel up to it, let's do it.

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