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kn83 [2020-01-17 21:27:53 +0000 UTC]

Awesome

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DoubleDandE [2018-08-17 17:13:10 +0000 UTC]

Hello I'm from ProjectComment . 

Are you ready to RUMBLE?! It sure looks like that, especially with this wrestling scene you got going. I like the background- it’s simple. Flashes of light to indicate cameras of various sizes going off on the scene, waiting for the next thing to happen- certainly captures that WWE atmosphere you get when you go to these events (have you ever been to one of these events?).  It doesn’t clash with the characters at all, it’s a dark color and that’s important since the colorful characters need something to stand out from.

The ropes of the squared circle look great, but I think they’re just a wee bit too big. Maybe shrink them a bit and lower the horizon (which I know you’re not trying to make parallel to the actual horizon of the picture), and maybe increase the length of the floor they’re standing on to help with this. The color of the mat looks a bit too bright for me, and should be matted so it doesn’t pop out to us more than the characters, I think this is what’s mostly wrong with the picture, as it pops out more than the characters. Maybe a muted yellow or a grayish blue should help with this.

The shadow beneath them looks great, and I like how you have it there, simple and effective. The ladies in the mid ground and foreground look great. Speaking of foreground, you’ve added a lot more detail in the foreground, which is great (i.e. textured tights) and helps to show distance.

I like the rather tall character pointing towards them, and her partner. Her partner looks well done anatomically, but her friend has something going on with her ankles and feet. Maybe she needs the part of her legs below her knee a wee bit longer, and her right ankle to match up with her left. It’s due to trying to foreshorten the left foot.

Overall I rather like this. Their costumes match up with the showy atmosphere of wrestling/lucha libre/japan pro, and they are overall in interesting poses. We can tell the characters in the foreground are doing even though we can’t see them. The focus leads to the characters we can fully see, and puts them in a rather rectangle view. 

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ultrabravado [2018-08-08 22:41:32 +0000 UTC]

Great work! and Congrats!

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atomicsnarl [2018-08-07 14:42:56 +0000 UTC]

I've got to learn how to blend like that!  Great stuff!

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