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unicorn-skydancer08 — Poor Pinocchio
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Published: 2009-09-09 01:53:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 6613; Favourites: 85; Downloads: 157
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A devastating scene from my "Guardian" story. This is just after Pinocchio's tragic accident, and an emotionally shattered Terence weeps over him. Just so you know, he's supposed to be carrying Pinocchio over to the bed, just on the verge of laying him down.I know this didn't turn out perfectly, but I like how it looks anyway.
Pinocchio © Disney
Terence and Completed Image © *unicorn-skydancer08
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Comments: 111
No offense, but that would undermine this scene.
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It takes away from the seriousness of the moment and it just sounds like a deus ex machina.
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So, no Pinocchio ex machina? Okay then. It's your fanfic. I understand.
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You can write whatever you want but a scene like that wouldn't work for my story.
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sad yet not depressing good job on all the details you have talent and I amiry that
(sorry cant spell shit )
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Thank you, and I hope you enjoy the story that goes with it.
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I did just between me and you i'm not the who likes winhe the pooh never did never have but Pinocchio I love him he is so cute in this get bed k pinoc
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I really loved this story and your artwork, i'm just touched by the emotion,heart,sweat,and tears that go into this story and magnificent work of art can you by any chance put the whole story together and email to me pertty pertty please?
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You can read the full story in its proper order on my FF account: [link]
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oh okay thanks i will have to print it out sometime
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It's going through a bit of a makeover right now. I feel it can be better refined.
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i have printed out the first chapter of your story and i have said it many times and i'll say it again i love your artwork and heart in the story
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Thanks! You'd like the story even better.
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Hm, will check it out
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Have you read the story?
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yes it awesome
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What's your favorite scene?
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pinocchio christmas
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I meant from the "Guardian" story, where it all begins.
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oh I like them all I couldn't decide
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As sad as this scene is, I'd have to say it's my most favorite. I totally borrowed it from the original movie. I always knew there'd be some kind of scene where Terence mourns for Pinocchio the way Geppetto mourns him.
It shows just how much Pinocchio has come to mean to Terence.
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And the emotion of story and movie is very tangible. Hits you right where it hurts.
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yup so agree
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aww, i read the story, very emotional, but it ends happy :3
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Could you please leave me with some reviews on the chapters, either here or on Fanfiction.net?? I don't get half as many reviews for my stories as I get comments for my art, and I'm getting review-hungry over here!
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I'll try when I have time XD
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Aww, poor little woodenhead. He's so young too.
I didn't think it came out bad. Pinocchio's hair seems a little longer to me, but it's your style I think. 
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It's the way his head is tilted. And I just have a tendency to draw people with their hair in their faces. That's simply my style, buddy.
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Looks like I thought right with it being your style. 
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It is, but it has a wonderful ending.
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