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UnicornMagicDick — Homestuck Troll oc // maybe
Published: 2014-08-08 18:51:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 4414; Favourites: 56; Downloads: 6
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Alright, i love her design ; 3 ; she really cute. But im not really sure if i should keep it ; v ;" ill think about it. Here more info for her |DName: Aditya Kalani
Age: 7.65 (17)
Gender: Female
Height: 5'6
Weight: 134 ibs
God Tier: Maid of life
Screen name: FeatheryHumble
Lusus: Dove lusus
Blood: Rose
Dream: Prospit
Stife Specibus : Bow and arrow with feather
Symbol : Columba Dove
Planet: The land of feathers and clouds
Typing style: She replaces "i" with ";" & t with "+". Adding she will start with "{ blah blah "
Relation:
♥:NA
♦:Rokeus Voreia irldeer.deviantart.com/art/Rok… ( also flush crush )
♣:NA
♠:NA
Dancestor: Uenuku Kalano unicornmagicdick.deviantart.co…
Ancestor: The Giveness unicornmagicdick.deviantart.co…
Her personality:
This young troll is abit of a softy and well goofy.She kind to all trolls, but if you do tense to piss her off she'll take her bow out.Other then that she a sweetie pie.
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Comments: 23
(THIS IS A REVIEW. IF YOU'RE SENSITIVE, PLEASE DELETE AND IGNORE THIS COMMENT BECAUSE I'M A DICK.)
Name: Aditya Kalani
(Nice! Inspiration?)
Age: 7.65 (17)
Not canon, so I'm fine with it
Gender: Female
Height: 5'6
Weight: 134 lbs
God Tier: Maid of life
(Sorry, but Jane is the Maid of Life.)
Screen name: FeatheryHumble
(featheryHumble*
Also, the template for chum handles is an adjective (which you have) and an object, both relating to the troll.
I'm not bringing up the GCAT rule because of alternate universes)
Lusus: Dove lusus
(I honestly don't really agree with the fucshia-blood thing because of the dove lusus. (I recommend a color in the bronze-blood category because of the spotted dove which is brown)
The color doesn't relate to the sign and the sign doesn't have anything to do with astronomy which I honestly don't really like.
Trolls live on another planet because they are based off of constellations.
www.suberic.net/~dmm/astro/con…
Here's a few you can use, but stray away from the used Zodiac signs.)
Blood: Rose
What I said before remains
Dream: Prospit
Strife Specibus : Bow and arrow with feather
(So, bowkind?)
Symbol : Columba Dove
Planet: The land of feathers and clouds
Typing style: She replaces "i" with ";" & t with "+". Adding she will start with "{ blah blah "
(Why is this? The quirk must be inspired by their sign or their lusus.)
Relation:
♥:NA
♦:Rokeus Voreia irldeer.deviantart.com/art/Rok… ( also flush crush )
♣:NA
♠:NA
(YES, NO COMPLETELY FILLED QUADRANTS)
Dancestor: Uenuku Kalano unicornmagicdick.deviantart.co…
Ancestor: The Giveness unicornmagicdick.deviantart.co…
(I'm happy you added this!)
Her personality:
This young troll is a bit of a softy and well goofy.
(I honestly don't approve. The higher the blood color, the meaner and more violent the troll. Feferi was an exception and I honestly don't like that about her. She's the most likely to be a mean troll.)
She kind to all trolls, but if you do tense to piss her off she'll take her bow out.
(*sighs because the "violent and scary only when angry but nice to everyone" thing is overused and tired*)
Other then that she a sweetie pie.
That's all I have to say about her!
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Hey, you're really good at reviewing and I wanted to know your opinion on my fantroll if you have the time uwu
aminoapps.com/page/homestuck/4…
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I'm gonna be edgy and reveal that I haven't reviewed in a while lol. Gave up the business :")
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this is adorable! I won't let anything bad happen to her! She will not be hurt! She is a sweetie pie! I better not get to carried away
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You should do a picture of her when she was a grub
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Can I use this fantroll for a roleplay? I'll give full credit c:
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late but go ahead ; v ;
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Looking at her info, Aditya seems like a great troll! Good job! (Also her design is really cute)
I've never actually done critiques before, but here's what I have to say:
You should probably include some info on what her personality is like.
Additionally, (you don't really have to follow this) but most ancestors have 8-letter names. All the canon ancestors have eight letter names, except for the Grand Highblood.
From Aditya's info, her blood colour is stated to be rose. I'm going to assume her blood colour is fuchsia, because that's closest to the colour in the picture. Fuchsia blooded trolls are seadwellers, so they should have aquatic lusii. Check out this page for more help: mspaintadventures.wikia.com/wi…
Her land sounds nice, but 'peace' isn't something people put in land names. Try this test for some help: thepageofhopes.tumblr.com/post…
That's it! Hope I did okay with the critique!
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it's okay c: thank you! Ill change things when I have the time ^^ thanks you so much!
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omg what a pretty girl, your art is also absolutely brilliant!!
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eeee~! thank you Q v Q
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d'aww she is so cute~! i just kinda want to cuddle her <3
are you looking for relationships with this oc?
do you need help
i can help....
-throws ocs at you-
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//giggles
Why thank you, & sure i dont mind some help for my bby to find some relation :3
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d'aw you're welcome.
oh yay c: hmmm let me see. I have alot of ocs (like i mean ALOT ) but would ya like to pick one and just rp and see where it goes? c:
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may i see the suggestions hun? ; 7 ;
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but of course D:
I have....
Naveen Doreen - BI gender troll c:
circuscannibal.deviantart.com/…
Callie Anthea - Classly fair troll
circuscannibal.deviantart.com/…
Naiads Cetuss - High blood seatroll, who doesn't like to wear shirts :C
circuscannibal.deviantart.com/…
Zelruk Turrei - Ring Leader circus troll
circuscannibal.deviantart.com/…
c:
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eeeee!! Zelruk looks toots cute and interesting cx
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oh thank you c: wanna rp in notes? ( i don't wanna spam your lovely work here c: )
Zelruk: ;waves;
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why sure, notes seem fine c: i start or you?
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if you don't mind starting c:
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