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Published: 2006-11-21 20:34:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 2852; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 9
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OK... This is my first design and i'm accepting your comments... Cos they are gonna encourage me to do more design..Related content
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What about movement of the eye?
The face is the focal point- which a human face will always, always be in any composition- but it seems like you might want the name to be more focal.
I guess that would depend on the utility of the piece, but it seems like if you're going to put the company name in there then you would want that to carry weight.
I think this piece could benefit from some more visual connection or movement that brings the face and the name together.
If anything the diagonal series of shapes in the background seem to visually bisect the image.
Looking at your other work I'd say you have a better design in you.
Keep me posted with the update.
-jw
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hai Jason! I guess your right i have to do something more on this. Anyway Thanks for your advice
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looks good!! but i think.. instead of PS background.. u should try any grunge paper or grunge wall.. just try.. 
great effect though!!
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hm.......your right this is too white.... i better use some colors on it... Hay i like your gallery....specially life till date....
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