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PearlyOwl [2017-08-30 05:16:58 +0000 UTC]

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I really enjoyed your creative licence and the HarmonyVerse concept as a whole. For this piece I only wanted to point out the shading - everything else is almost immaculate. The mauve/grey you used as a shader on Celestia wasn't the best choice, although I can tell it was intended to reflect the colours of the room and Celestia's skin colour. I would've suggested a pale blue or lilac; by using different colours to highlight and shade can create fabulous effects, and would be especially powerful in pieces like this one where the characters are magically inclined e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> The yellow from the fire is in all the right places, but as it's not brighter than the white of Celestia's skin, it's not as powerful and doesn't look like the reflection of light it should. It works on her mane and tail, since it's paler than the base colours of those, but on her wing, leg and head it distracts from the main tone, rather than emphasize it. It's definitely a step in the right direction, as adding light and dark (chiarascuro) makes any object you draw much more lively and realistic!

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Yanie-The-Brown-Pone [2017-08-29 20:57:00 +0000 UTC]

Nice job ^^ It looks similar to a picture I did <333

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