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This is my re-caption of tgcapsrule tgcapsrule.deviantart.com/ TG 12 tgcapsrule.deviantart.com/art/…
I like TGcapsrule, but all his Tg follow the same formula but with the names and settings swapped out (Nerd+bodychange+mentalchange=happy ending). But I really like this cap and it's picture so I decided to throw it's ingredients into my formula, (plain exposition+character conflict+bodychange+optional mentalchange=drawn out ending about the consequences).

While wrighting this I tried to not be as verbose, I learned my lesson from Bonnie Write TG unit1138.deviantart.com/art/Ac… and kept conversation to a minimum, but then I ended up writing some long winded monologs which defeated the point. I was getting ready to give some parts the boot, but my swollen ego refused to let me delete parts so here it is in all it's lengthy glory. One thing I wanted to put into the story was how the blondness of her hair represents how girly she is, it turning more blond as the story progresses. I never fooled myself into thinking that I had the room to put that in, and cut it in the draft phase.

Originally the mental change was to happen with positive/negative reinforcement, like she was a pet, but then I thought, sense it starts out talking about popularity the change should revolve around that, so I completely reworked the second half for that. The end result turned it into one of those weird Tgs where the TGer is more important then the Tged.

Also I gave Brad the character trait of never remembering Ricky's name, I hope that didn't make it confusing.

Description
This is my re-caption of tgcapsrule tgcapsrule.deviantart.com/ TG 12 tgcapsrule.deviantart.com/art/…
I like TGcapsrule, but all his Tg follow the same formula but with the names and settings swapped out (Nerd+bodychange+mentalchange=happy ending). But I really like this cap and it's picture so I decided to throw it's ingredients into my formula, (plain exposition+character conflict+bodychange+optional mentalchange=drawn out ending about the consequences).

While wrighting this I tried to not be as verbose, I learned my lesson from Bonnie Write TG unit1138.deviantart.com/art/Ac… and kept conversation to a minimum, but then I ended up writing some long winded monologs which defeated the point. I was getting ready to give some parts the boot, but my swollen ego refused to let me delete parts so here it is in all it's lengthy glory. One thing I wanted to put into the story was how the blondness of her hair represents how girly she is, it turning more blond as the story progresses. I never fooled myself into thinking that I had the room to put that in, and cut it in the draft phase.

Originally the mental change was to happen with positive/negative reinforcement, like she was a pet, but then I thought, sense it starts out talking about popularity the change should revolve around that, so I completely reworked the second half for that. The end result turned it into one of those weird Tgs where the TGer is more important then the Tged.

Also I gave Brad the character trait of never remembering Ricky's name, I hope that didn't make it confusing.