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Published: 2019-09-01 04:10:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 89141; Favourites: 540; Downloads: 122
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I gotta get this into Quick!saw there was a day left and tried to push myself whip this up for it, that's why it's so unpolished
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Well both judges said what I was going to say, especially sorti who saved me the trouble of writing up a paneling dissection, though one other solution would be to make the backgrounds different below the "tunk" panel so that it'd seem like a new block of action rather than the same single block above. Since they already took all my negative comments I'll just repeat that this was a unique spin on the idea of a malfunction and I like the joke candy bar names at the end. I do feel that the empty machine in the first panel was a wasted opportunity for more jokes, but yeah while I think the art itself is messy and could use work, you made up for it with originality. Thanks for entering.
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I think your face is messy and could use work!
Sorry! That was legitimately the only reply I could think of to this
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Hah like I don't get plastic surgery as a Hollywood elite. I take that as a compliment and will send it to my surgeon on Monday.
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This is excellent! I love that you used an everyday malfunction we've all experienced.
You would avoid some reading order confusion by moving the "security malfunction" panel lower, and the one where he's reaching into the slot higher. As it stands, it's easy to continue down from "Vrrr... Tunk... !*$#" just like we did right before. I might also move the price tags on the final panel below or to the side of the figure, so they don't interrupt the wordless action before the big reveal.
Your art is simple and effective. The panels where he struggles against being sucked in are especially well done!
The ripping clothes repeat a common mistake in a lot of transformation art. I'm guilty of it myself. But generally, when stretched to the limit, clothes will rip along the seams, like this: www.deviantart.com/zzzcomics/a…
While the pants getting clawed by the corkscrews would look something like this: www.pngkey.com/detail/u2a9o0o0…
That said, it's a minor detail, and didn't affect my enjoyment of your work.
Great job overall! Thanks for sharing and keep it up!
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I my head, I thought "the clothes were torn by genderbending science!" as an excuse to ignore proper physicality. I'll admit to a bit of pandering with how the clothing disintegrates away (also that was a lot quicker to draw and that was a real necessity at the time). If I had a do-over I think that'd be the first thing I'd change, because that was an intentional choice were as the other critiques you mentioned were out of ignorance. Thanks for the tips about clothing rips, I'll try to incorporate that going forward.
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Hey no fair that man earned his brotein fair and square! Should have got a manager and explained things oh well at least he got a far more expensive "gift" if someone decides to take her home.
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Vend co. is not responsible for any purchases stuck in the machine. By using our machines you agree that if you break the TOS we can transform you into a girl and vend you to another customer at our discretion. you will not be entitled to any revenue from the sale and you must abide by the purchaser (party a) wishes for a 24 hour period to be starting after the transaction is finalized.
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I never saw a sequence with this concept before, so congrats for the originality. I loved the wraps covering her exposed chest in the final panel, I chuckled at it. Overall good job!
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Great job on this. The concept is amazing and the method of transformation was really creative.
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it
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Ended up looking at this one by accident so uh... Congrats I guess you get your review from me early!
As you said its a little unpolished but for a rush job it still looks pretty good. The sound effect for Suck in particular stands out as kind of janky looking as well as the frame of the guy shoving his hand into the machine. Other things like the lack of any design on Brotein and the hand size when inserting the coin, etc. His jecket sleeves ripping is also weird since his boobs wouldnt really effect them I feel. That said still really good and I think the creativity helps make up for the polish.
Originally I was going to destroy you on theme because the security mechanism isnt a malfunction its an intended feature. But then I realized that the snack getting stuck in the machine is possibly the most relatable malfunction ever and technically is what leads to tg. So I'll give you a pass on that technicality. You've always gone for a humorous approach with your entries and I think this is the first time its really landed for me so great job.
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is it a rule the judges have to give their reviews off the first viewing?
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No not really but once I noticed it was for the contest I felt I may as well score it.
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BROTEIN!
in this world gone PC and feminine sensitive, one brand is still committed to bringing you manly snacks,
BROTEIN!
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This message brought to you by, big brother!
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this is quite possibly one of the most oddly specific ways to be transformed into the opposite sex I've ever seen
congrats
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I mean you gotta use every part of the buffalo idea right?
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She'll be let out if you pick hold her hand, the company is not a monster
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Okay those hooks look more like they'd skewer him than transform him. lol
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I forgot actual vending machines don't have sharp points to their hooks do they?
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Thanks, I wish I had the time to double, if not triple down on that joke
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intriguing little idea, gotta love those censoring candybars~
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That's new there, Unit1138.
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How are you, Unit1138.
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I see Unit1138, I wonder how is Miku for 2019.
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still, ya did a great job portraying it~
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