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UnityBeing — The Wind Blows
Published: 2006-07-26 20:41:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 246; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
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Description The wind blows,
The screams grow as nights cry weakness to a lonely soldier.
A soldier that battled to barter his, bewails that sited inside his core.

The wind blows.
The dream silently dimmed.
A new day stared at a tasteless roundabout,
again a roundabout that cornered a lonely soldier to drain away a hollowed day.

The wind blows.
The screams echo.
A day voids a lonely soldier.
From failed battles to another battle darkness shadows upon his armoured face during a long rest.
Battles feuded by false friends roaring a war to fortify itself.
A fortified war that defiled a sober, lonely soldier to intoxicate and liberate dreams.  
Liberated dreams that expired from a lonely soldier to douse forth from a deadened doze.  
A dreaded, deadened doze that rested within a battlefield aroused by the incense of desperation.

The wind blows.
The throbbing gasps for serenity quiet down.
A battlefield’s echo is forgotten.
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Comments: 5

babigirl104 [2006-08-09 14:39:40 +0000 UTC]

that is really good...i like it..

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Eris4 [2006-08-08 15:00:20 +0000 UTC]

I love it!
You hit the feelings right on the head without too much descripition. I love the use of the soldier image. It reminds of one of my favorite poems. The use of words is perfect. You have such a wonderful talent! Keep it up!

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XTheScientistX [2006-07-26 20:54:28 +0000 UTC]

Sad and good

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UnityBeing In reply to XTheScientistX [2006-07-27 02:36:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you for reading my heart and spirit.. will be reading your shared poems too.

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XTheScientistX In reply to UnityBeing [2006-07-27 13:55:28 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome and thank you for reading mine.

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