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Published: 2006-04-20 12:35:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 122; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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when the sun breaks the horizon,when the phone rings on and on,
when poeple wake, and rise from bed,
that's when time rolls on.
Grasping the whole world by the wrist,
and rushing it along,
making sure nothing stays the same,
that's time, rolling on, and on.
Leaves are falling to the ground,
and the ice is slowly melting
i blink, and you do too,
and it feels like the whole world felt it.
What i felt that night,
when time stopped for just you and i,
blood haulted in the heart,
fate, stopped in it's tracks,
that's love, pulling one back.
That's love, my love.
Whatever we do,
time will roll on.
We will grow old, and weary.
Moments will come and go,
but in the end, the greatest things of all, will stick with us.
That's me, and you, and all of our friends,
and the moments that i wouldn't dare forget about,
and the feelings i dare not put behind me.
I'll keep them all, because i know, that i would be nothing without them.
These are the things that time cannot touch.
These are the things i've grown to love.
And i know for a fact, i'll neverr have enough,
of the things time, cannot change, cannot touch.
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Comments: 5
ilikeorange [2006-05-18 09:21:46 +0000 UTC]
Ok....I think i've seen enough I'm officially in love with your poetry...it's great...I like this one especially
great rhythm and flow... yea...sweet.
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Andilwen-Illiana [2006-05-13 16:58:16 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful, and I think ballad is a good catagory. I can imagine it recited or hearing it on the radio.
There are a couple of typos, and fixing them would take away a bit of a distraction, but I wouldn't change a thing about the writing.
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xsaltinmywoundx [2006-04-27 11:34:33 +0000 UTC]
The last four lines are beautiful
This poem sums up how I'm feeling at the moment too.
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greeneyedenchantress [2006-04-24 18:32:06 +0000 UTC]
* spelling error in last line with never (neverr)*
But amazing otherwise! favoritize!!!!
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