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Woe’s meAnd I feel your handgrip
My wrist softly
And the shiver up my spine
Up through my neck
Into my thoughts
Do I know what I want?
Not even I know that
It seems you’re too good to be true
And too good for me
To hold you
Tonight
I question whether we’d make it al the way
Whether you’d let go…
Because you seem to good to hope on right this moment
Even though.
You’re giving me the go
And it seems your eyes could take me dead or alive…
Even though they don’t seem to care
And your giggle…
Woe’s me
And the worst thing is
I can’t even look you in the eyes
Because even their afraid of you breaking them
Even though I’ve waited so long for someone
That I’m unable to touch the bottom of…
Seems like I’m waiting for something to push
Me forward
To wake me up…
And tell me what I’m missing
When I’m all alone
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Comments: 3
Andilwen-Illiana [2004-09-19 02:10:52 +0000 UTC]
iIlike this, especially the metaphors and the line "And it seems your eyes could tke me dead or alive" but the line and stanza breaks seem kind of random and there are some technical errors that distract you.
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Andilwen-Illiana In reply to Andilwen-Illiana [2004-09-19 17:09:37 +0000 UTC]
Explain what part?
Yeah, I write, although not that well.
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unknownemo In reply to Andilwen-Illiana [2004-09-19 15:22:08 +0000 UTC]
explain to me...
thanks anyways
do you write*
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