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Squabblelobster [2018-08-19 13:01:32 +0000 UTC]

Hiya! I'm here over from ProjectComment

This is quite a lovely representation of 2B. I have not played Nier automata myself, but I've watched my SO play so I know some of the general ideas.

First off, she looks adorable, and I can pretty instantly recognize her character. Not only that, but I love how you haven't lost your own style in drawing her. A lot of fanart I've seen (and sometimes do  ) can get a little lost in the original style. You've done well to avoid that - I can instantly recognize her character and I can instantly recognize your art style and that is a very good thing.

Her expression, while simple, says a lot. At the surface, it is a sweet face, but also perhaps a face of tragic acceptance; one that i think well matches the tone of Nier from what I know of it.

Your banner is beautiful especially with the white highlights; they really define those edges well and even create a sense of movement in the banner. I will say that while the outlining white highlights on her dress look very pleasing, some of the creases in the middle seem to look inconsistent with each other. I cannot personally offer advice on this but there are many tutorials on the web to depicting clothing creases in drawings should you be interested.

I do like her hair, but I think it could be improved by going for a more simplified look. You've drawn individual clumps of hair which makes it look a little too busy. So I think just eliminating some of those hair outlines and letting our own brains register the illusion of clumps would be good.

A final remark, the golden background is beautiful and pairs well with the rest of the composition. It works very well, but the white lines on both sides are not the same width. It's a minor thing, but it is one I notice at first glance.

If anything I've said was confusing please let me know. It's early in the morning and I have not had my tea, so that is very very likely, haha. Overall, it's a wonderfully simple but beautiful, cute and clean piece. A pleasure to review

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Lyh-Flare [2018-08-09 22:31:20 +0000 UTC]

I am truly in love with how the sharp edges fit well with the curvy "banner" 

  I wish I was as skillful as you're with those kinds of art tools.

Did you use a reference or was this from imagination ?

I hope you will take your time to look at one of my works and comment on them ^^' I joined this group comments for comments and I'm still unsure on how it works.

Lot's of love and favs from me

Lyh Flare <3 

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AncientInsainity [2018-08-09 09:45:14 +0000 UTC]

Wow! So good and pretty!

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davidandino [2018-08-09 06:53:16 +0000 UTC]

FIRST! this looks cute. 2b is really a beautiful cyborg and she looks sweet in this picture. nier automata is one game that i've yet to play but it is really cool as i saw the screenshots and i know she reminds me of motoko with white hair and even though nier automata's plot is dark, the characters look cool. a2 seems cool and 9s looks friendly and 2b cute and sexy. you draw a very cute 2b. 2b is love very cute drawing.

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