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Published: 2004-04-10 08:30:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 6306; Favourites: 83; Downloads: 1075
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Description I lay there sobbing and shaking
Hopefully someone is waking
Do they hear me cry and scream?
Or do they think it's just a dream?
I need someone to hear
Cause this guy is to near
Then he climbed into bed
The fears were running through my head
As he got on top
I yelled at him to STOP
I tried to get away
He pinned me down and made me stay
As I felt him force it in
I knew there was no chance for me to win
As I felt the pain down there
I kneew from there he didn't care
He finished what he started
Our bodies then become departed
For I wished this was only a dream
Cause I had just reached the age of fourteen
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Comments: 115

Samantha-Rosy [2017-08-29 06:32:32 +0000 UTC]

Father and a daughter...

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xXPSYCH0-G1RLXx [2016-12-31 07:46:14 +0000 UTC]

I'm 13... less than a month ago...
I can still feel his fingers forcing through me.......
Please someone help me die...

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Elezian [2011-08-01 05:04:57 +0000 UTC]

I was 14 when it finally stopped....

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bunnybipolar [2010-08-30 13:03:41 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Commenter

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MEOWWS In reply to bunnybipolar [2014-07-12 23:41:50 +0000 UTC]

I'M SO SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ARE YOU OK?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?

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jenna898 [2008-11-26 01:59:21 +0000 UTC]

This IS an amazing poem.

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unknownskank In reply to jenna898 [2009-02-08 14:36:12 +0000 UTC]

I found my password for this account again. Just to let you know, I am not dead, I'm still alive & I'm here. If your interested, I also have a new account in which I use frequently now; [link]

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jenna898 In reply to unknownskank [2009-02-09 21:15:23 +0000 UTC]

May you please tell me what your username is,I dont click links.

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unknownskank In reply to jenna898 [2009-02-09 23:26:18 +0000 UTC]

helloashleeeee

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akatsuki-girl-34 [2008-08-16 06:29:11 +0000 UTC]

o my God......please tell me this didnt happen to u....i wrther (sp?) been killed that rape bc once ur dead ur dead but being rape means ur dead in the in side and that worst than being dead that on the out side.......

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Kimmy-Quevil In reply to akatsuki-girl-34 [2009-02-16 17:11:34 +0000 UTC]

i agree with you sooooo much on this.

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dffd [2008-04-08 03:52:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow...Youre AMAZING! , youre great at writing these +fav

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unknownskank In reply to dffd [2009-02-08 14:44:07 +0000 UTC]

I found my password for this account again. Just to let you know, I am not dead, I'm still alive & I'm here. If your interested, I also have a new account in which I use frequently now; [link]

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dffd In reply to unknownskank [2009-02-08 18:40:47 +0000 UTC]

Ohh , Ok! thanks~

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LilRedPhotography [2007-11-29 08:19:12 +0000 UTC]

i love it! im trying to be cheery....sorry if its not showing through....read my recent journal and you'll know too...

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unknownskank In reply to LilRedPhotography [2009-02-08 14:46:58 +0000 UTC]

I found my password for this account again. Just to let you know, I am not dead, I'm still alive & I'm here. If your interested, I also have a new account in which I use frequently now; [link]

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LilRedPhotography In reply to LilRedPhotography [2007-11-29 08:20:11 +0000 UTC]

if you ever need anything at all send me a note

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fellcreature [2007-11-19 07:50:01 +0000 UTC]

T3T so sad... why do you even make them

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unknownskank In reply to fellcreature [2009-02-08 14:47:18 +0000 UTC]

I found my password for this account again. Just to let you know, I am not dead, I'm still alive & I'm here. If your interested, I also have a new account in which I use frequently now; [link]

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Kimmy-Quevil [2007-01-25 14:23:33 +0000 UTC]

rape is the worst by far, once you've been murdered you can't be murdered again but once you've been raped it could like in many sad cases happen again.

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unknownskank In reply to Kimmy-Quevil [2009-02-08 14:50:15 +0000 UTC]

I found my password for this account again. Just to let you know, I am not dead, I'm still alive & I'm here. If your interested, I also have a new account in which I use frequently now; [link]

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Angelfire22 [2006-11-19 07:14:48 +0000 UTC]

That was so sad

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unknownskank In reply to Angelfire22 [2009-02-08 14:50:29 +0000 UTC]

I found my password for this account again. Just to let you know, I am not dead, I'm still alive & I'm here. If your interested, I also have a new account in which I use frequently now; [link]

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openwound88 [2006-05-24 19:42:43 +0000 UTC]

i was fourteen too.

if you ever need to talk, note me.

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unknownskank In reply to openwound88 [2009-02-08 14:51:30 +0000 UTC]

I found my password for this account again. Just to let you know, I am not dead, I'm still alive & I'm here. If your interested, I also have a new account in which I use frequently now; [link]

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ConcreteVision [2005-05-19 20:38:49 +0000 UTC]

It's amazing you can write about that kind of stuff, and do it so well. If that happened to me, I can tell you right now that I would never be the same... I'd probably stop writing...although I'm a guy, so ya...it's a bit more difficult to rape a guy, but I still understood what was going through your head while reading the poem. Plus, one of my ex girlfriends were raped a couple years before her and I got together, so I know about the mental damage it can do to you. srry

...but the poem's at least

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unknownskank In reply to ConcreteVision [2009-02-08 14:51:56 +0000 UTC]

I found my password for this account again. Just to let you know, I am not dead, I'm still alive & I'm here. If your interested, I also have a new account in which I use frequently now; [link]

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ConcreteVision In reply to unknownskank [2009-02-15 04:32:51 +0000 UTC]

okay thanks

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andreaofstad [2004-10-27 20:59:31 +0000 UTC]

I actually cried when I read that. And sadly, I relate to that. It amazing.

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unknownskank In reply to andreaofstad [2009-02-08 14:52:29 +0000 UTC]

I found my password for this account again. Just to let you know, I am not dead, I'm still alive & I'm here. If your interested, I also have a new account in which I use frequently now; [link]

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

tenshiki [2004-05-31 18:43:17 +0000 UTC]

T.T aww this makes me sad...its a poem with deep meaning...good job...

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unknownskank In reply to tenshiki [2004-06-01 09:41:02 +0000 UTC]

yes, thanks. thanks alot

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xxchyiaxx [2004-05-27 06:51:25 +0000 UTC]

Wow awsome poetry. I kno a 14 year old girl (shes my best friend actually) and she was raped too about a month ago. That must have hurt emotionally alot more than physically Im sorry its ever happened to anyone.

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unknownskank In reply to xxchyiaxx [2004-05-27 09:01:04 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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HaVoK-15 [2004-05-13 08:03:34 +0000 UTC]

too vivid...and thats good. im scared. and sorry. hurts alot i know. i know someone who thats happened to. im really sorry

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unknownskank In reply to HaVoK-15 [2004-05-13 09:37:12 +0000 UTC]

yeah.. hmm

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unforgiven86 [2004-05-11 06:37:05 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that is the most amazing poem that I have read on DA to date (Its only like the 10th to date - but the best yet) I really like it, it's quite sad

Adam

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unknownskank In reply to unforgiven86 [2004-05-11 06:42:14 +0000 UTC]

yeah. thanks.

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LinkinLuver13 [2004-05-11 00:19:52 +0000 UTC]

wow thats amazingly emotional...im at a loss for words, its just so good...great job!

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WindBurned [2004-05-09 04:25:42 +0000 UTC]

i can relate. im sorry it happened to you sweetheart if u need to talk, my contact info is on my page

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unknownskank In reply to WindBurned [2004-05-09 04:43:13 +0000 UTC]

yeah.. thanks for the offer.

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obsessedfangirl [2004-05-08 13:14:55 +0000 UTC]

God. A poem about rape. I bet it happened to you, didn't it..? D Sure thing. It sucks, too.

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unknownskank In reply to obsessedfangirl [2004-05-08 13:34:48 +0000 UTC]

:S errm.. righto tina.

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UnicornBee [2004-05-01 21:43:34 +0000 UTC]

This a powerful poem. It brought me to tears. I don't know what else to say.

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unknownskank In reply to UnicornBee [2004-05-01 23:28:32 +0000 UTC]

aww.. lol thanks.. glad you like it

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Ryu4366 [2004-04-22 16:57:03 +0000 UTC]

wow.... that was.... amazing.... i cant say i fully understand...well because i am a guy... but it happened to my mom... by one of her husbands.. usually when i was "sleeping" but i do send my sympathy... great poem too...

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unknownskank In reply to Ryu4366 [2004-04-23 07:14:04 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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vanillapanther [2004-04-19 20:42:06 +0000 UTC]

this is a really great poem. i love the emotion you have pored into it. and the imigery used is so... i tares at the heart.

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secretpoet [2004-04-18 17:15:19 +0000 UTC]

That's so sad.........you are an awesome poet,but I could hardly bear to read that.
everything about it is so painfully clear......the imagery,just evrything..........
youre poems flow well,u have talent but I'm sure you know that......

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unknownskank In reply to secretpoet [2004-04-19 06:26:07 +0000 UTC]

umm thanks thats the first nice thing youve said to me

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