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UnknownSpy In reply to protvscar [2014-03-12 06:01:59 +0000 UTC]

heh, thank you. 

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UnknownSpy In reply to AlphaComics [2013-11-08 06:11:07 +0000 UTC]

Gee, don't scare me like that D: 

I hope i put that Traitor thing at the right moment ouo"

I really want there to be something more behind Kreeds eyes, but heh, not really sure yet what it is 

I am not good at making comic plots

Hahah, i am REALLY glad to hear that

Daw, thankies ;u; *Huggles Birdy*

Every comment of yours about these characters helps me to make them complete. So keep on doing that :'D It helps a lot ;u; 

Now i just need to think what happened/ what Kreed did. And then the next page ouo

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AlphaComics In reply to UnknownSpy [2013-11-08 07:06:16 +0000 UTC]

Sorry

I think the placement was perfect xD It does leave a lot of questions for people like "Why is he a traitor to them? What has he done?" Stuff like that 83 The way Kreed reacted was good too I mean he didn't say anything like "I'm not a Traitor!" He just went straight for the kill like he's heard so much of that word that he just doesn't care anymore. He's like, "What's the point of reasoning with everyone? Only I know what's right! Me! ME!"
What do you mean something more behind Kreed's eyes? Do you mean his reaction when he heard the word "Traitor"? o v o
Why do you think you’re not good at comic plots? O8 I mean with your other comics you do great

Anytime *Huggles Anet* >w<
I’m really glad my comments help you ; w ; I shall try to help you anyway I can >83

Oh the whole "Why is he a traitor?" thing right? 83 [Correct me if I’m wrong ^w^]  Hm, well, do you want him to have a misunderstood past? Where people think he’s always doing bad things, but it was a small little mess up that was made into this huge ordeal. Or he can just steal some supplies from his people and just use it for his amusement? Making friends with the enemy? Working with others that are not Nomads? I mean just him being with Shine and Saro is traitor-ish enough cause they’re not Nomads. o 3 o

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UnknownSpy In reply to AlphaComics [2013-11-08 07:53:10 +0000 UTC]

I meant behind his eyes, like backstory  

Hahah, maybe it is just me. You dont know whats going inside my head FD Like, i have a lot of questions in my head too about these things. 

mhm...

Kreed started to hang out with Shine and Saro, so slowly he started to think, being in teams was pointless, so they didnt want to be part of that anymore. They didnt know they were traitors already in that situation. So, Saro being a thief, she stole supplies from Nomands, and the other teams for themselves, and one time she got caught and got in danger because the Nomands, and Kreed came to save her, but to save her he ended up killing a Nomand, and the other Nomand saw it. They started calling him a traitor, and it just made him mad, because he was just helping his friend. He tried to explain this, but it was no use. And nowdays he is pretty much Wanted because of the kill, and the other murders he have done. 

HA! I did it! :'D 

Is this story good enough? I know there are still stuff that needs to be explained tho...

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AlphaComics In reply to UnknownSpy [2013-11-08 08:22:14 +0000 UTC]

Nope, I don’t FD” Haha, you could always just write your questions down and come up with many ideas as possible and pick one you like or combine some things ^w^ That’s what I usually do o v o

I think that's good 8D At least you got that part out of your head xD Maybe you could show why Saro steals stuff? Like is she poor and she steals food in order to survive. Or she just steals because that’s who she is?
I’m sure you’ll find a way >w< If you need any help, I’ll gladly do so >83

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UnknownSpy In reply to AlphaComics [2013-11-08 08:31:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah, that Saro part O3O" Erm, first i thought she would be poor, and Shine bought her those clothes ouo She weared just some rags... But somehow i want to keep her mysterious o3o 

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AlphaComics In reply to UnknownSpy [2013-11-08 08:37:44 +0000 UTC]

Keep her mysterious then ;3 Not everyone has to have a backstory o v o Well they can, but only the artist/writer knows FD

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UnknownSpy In reply to DarkWolfNiki [2013-11-07 18:17:57 +0000 UTC]

Well, yes, and when you get that kind of a kick in the troath, what do you think happens?

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DarkWolfNiki In reply to UnknownSpy [2013-11-07 18:33:21 +0000 UTC]

uhh >.< well the trachea would be crushed '-'

i hope google translate did tranlate it right 

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