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It was Friday that night, snow softly lands on the ground, giving a warm feeling that it will be a white Christmas. Kenneth was leaving his grandmother´s house with his mother, humming a happy tone while holding his mother´s soft hand.“Mommy, I want a red fire-truck toy for my 5th birthday.” Kenneth looked up to his mother and smiles happily.
“It´s a secret my dear, there´s still one month for your birthday.” Marianne, replied and softly hugs him.
But one month later after one day of his birthday, Kenneth´s family disappeared.
18 years later.
Kenneth looked down at his `parents´ grave, he wouldn´t admit it was his fault that they ended in this gloomy cemetery. “I´m sorry, mom and dad… I never intended to do that… If only I can rewind time…”
Kenneth softly cares his fingertips at the tombstone, “Here lies James Dawnson and his wife Jenna Dawnson, died in a fire accident.” Kenneth gently placed a single red rose at the top of the tombstone and sighs.
“I should have told you about that… I shouldn´t have kept it a secret…” Kenneth slowly stands up, glanced at his parent´s grave one more time and left.
*2 weeks ago*
“MOM?! DAD?!” Kenneth shouted as he entered the burning house, the smoke was black and thick, fire was everywhere making it impossible for other fireman´s to enter. “KENNETH! DON`T GO IN THERE!” Michael, Kenneth´s coworker and friend yelled at him as Kenneth entered the house.
`I shouldn´t have done that! Definitely not!´ Kenneth thought and took his gas-mask on, holding tightly on his fireman ax. “MOM?!” Kenneth shouted again but with no reply. He entered the kitchen, hoping that his mother and father would be there but no.
He glanced down in agony and after few seconds he decides to go up to the second floor, their house is big so it will be difficult for him. He kicked the door to his parents bedroom, he couldn´t see because the thick smoke was in the way. Once again he shouted but with no reply.
“I shouldn´t have… I shouldn´t have tested it…” He whispered to himself and left the bedroom. There was only one room left, his childhood bedroom at the end of the hall. He looked at the old wooden door that wasn´t caught by fire yet. Slowly opened it and enters his old room.
He found his parents with their face down on the floor. He took away his gas-mask and crouches down, “I´m sorry mom and dad… I shouldn´t have tested my power on you…” Kenneth whispered and began to cry. His parents were lying there lifeless, their eyes were wide open and seems to focus on one thing.
Kenneth looked at the direction and found his old diary in on the desk full of dust, he glanced back at his parents, took them up from the floor. As he was about to leave the room he stopped and took his old diary.
*Present day*
“What would you like?” A waitress in an expensive restaurant asked. “Nothing…” Kenneth replied and opened his old diary, the words were difficult to read, he was only about 5 years old when he wrote them down.
“I´m sorry, but you´ll have to leave if you don´t order something…” The waitress said, Kenneth looked directly at her and said, “I own this restaurant now. Leave me or else you´ll get fired.” The waitress looked confused and left him in hurry.
James, Kenneth´s father, was the previous owner of the restaurant but when he died Kenneth owns it now. “Workers these days…” Kenneth mumbled and began to read his old diary.
`Day 01.
I was brought to the Orphanage House. I don´t know why but they told me that my mama and papa had disappeared after my birthday.
Day 02.
These kids are mean, I don´t like them… They don´t like fire as I do, they began to call me Flamefreak.
Day 03.
I can´t find the red fire-truck toy my mama gave me on my birthday. They probably stole it!
Day 04.
Still can´t find my toy… I miss mommy, the old lady here is mean.
Day 07.
I was lost in the woods for 3 days and I found a new weird friend. He is really tall, don´t have a face at all and no hair, he gave me back my fire-truck toy, he told me he found it at the backyard. I told him about the mean kids and he said that he will take care of them later.
Day 08.
I visited my new friend again, he is really strange, he have weird things at his back, I wonder if he´s an alien because it will be really cool.
That old lady scolded me when I came back from the woods. I told her about the tall man but she called the cops and told me some kids around my age had disappeared… I wonder if that´s the tall man´s doing.
Day 09.
I have a weird feeling… It´s like my tummy is burning, I tried drinking water but the water tasted gross. I will visit my friend again today but I don´t know why a cop should come with me.
The cop disappeared but I found my friend again, he had some red liquid on his hands and tentacles. He finally told me his name, Slenderman, really weird… I told him about the fire feeling inside me, he told me that the `real´ me is trying to get out… I don´t know what he´s talking about but he sure is fun.
Day 10.
I was playing with matches today and something really cool happened. I was looking at the head of the match and when I closed my eyes the match lights on itself, I wonder if that´s the `real´ me Slenderman was talking about. Will visit him again today and tell him about this.
The old lady don´t want me to go out, I told her that I´m visiting a friend but she don´t believe me.
The old lady threw me in the basement, she does it to naughty kids every time. I don´t like to be down there, the `real´ me got mad and set it on fire. The old lady opened the door and I ran away in the confusion.
Night.
I can hear a fire-truck´s alarm, it´s really loud.
Slenderman gave me a pill so I can control the `real´ me. We played in hours but he told me to go back to the Orphanage House.
Day 11.
The old lady opened the door and two people entered the room. I don´t know what is going on but they seem like nice people, the woman names Jenna had some expensive looking dress and jewelry and the man named James had black suit like Slenderman. They told me that they are my new family… should I believe them? I will ask Slenderman later.
Night.
I snuck out again to visit Slenderman. Slenderman told me to go with my new parents, but I don´t want to leave him. I like it here in the woods.
He told me that he will get me back when I grew old enough. Guess I will go with my new `family´.´
“Slenderman…” Kenneth whispered and sighs softly after he read his childhood diary, “There´s no such thing as `Slenderman´…” he closed his old diary, stands up and left the restaurant.
The same night.
“Kenneth Dawnson disappeared after three weeks his parents died. The hotel, where Kenneth was, was got burned down, 31 people got injured while 29 died. The culprit who set the fire is still not found.
A video tape was found, it shows a man with a fireman´s uniform, with a gas-mask and a ax in hand killing people inside the hotel. Seconds later, there was a static sound and the video tape got blurry and the screen shows nothing but static.”
The TV turned off, Kenneth placed the remote to the table and took his gas-mask.
“Seems like there´s some houses to burn and people to kill tonight~” Kenneth grabbed his ax tightly and put on his gas-mask. “Well… call me Flamefreak from now on, my dear~ because it will be hot tonight.”
Months later.
Female TV reporter in the hospital; “One week ago a fire appeared in the Davidson residence, Steven Davidson (40) and his wife Sarah´s (38) burned corpses were found in their bedroom and their oldest son, Rick Davidson´s (17) burned corpse was found in the hallway in their house, which was found by the fireman´s. Rita, a 6 years old girl, the youngest daughter was the only survivor and now is hospitalized for burned skin and coma, her skin is all burned and her left arm is dislocated. Today, she finally woke up.” Female TV reporter paused and opened the door to 108. “Her story couldn´t be true at all, but Rita claimed that all happened.”
Rita´s story; “It was late at night and I couldn´t sleep, because my mommy and daddy is arguing about getting divorced, they were really loud and my dad sounded really angry.
I looked outside from my window, the blue full moon was shining brightly, the cold breeze and the empty street. The street wasn´t empty at all, there´s one single person hiding behind the nearest tree to our house, the person seems to be holding something shiny and square, at closer look it was a camera.
After few seconds, my parents finally stopped arguing and I could finally sleep. I quickly forgot about the person hiding behind the tree, I closed the window and went to sleep. Minutes later, I heard a window being shattered and a weird noise, it was like someone is breathing loudly, I thought it was my big brother Rick. When he gets angry, he would shatter windows and would destroy anything that´s fragile.
Even after 5-10 minutes, the loud breathing was still there. Then, I remember that Rick is sleeping over at his friend, the person downstairs couldn´t be my big brother Rick. There was this cruel and awful smell, it was something like fuel and gasoline, something burnable, I remembered my daddy always told me not to inhale the smell, because it was dangerous.
I got scared when I heard footsteps coming up, I covered myself with my blanket and hoped that the person wouldn´t come closer.” Rita paused and began to sob, she continued, “Then, I heard my momma screaming loudly and my daddy yelling `WHO ARE YOU?!´, I heard burning noises then I couldn´t hear them anymore, my mommy and daddy went silent… they were burned to death!
The awful smell was strong that I began to feel dizzy even I was covered in my blanket. Then, black smoke went inside my room from underneath the door. Footsteps went closer to my bedroom, I quickly stood up but almost tripped, quickly went to the nearest closet and hid there. I peeked through the keyhole, the door creeks as it opened slowly, the breathing sounds more loud and a dark figure slowly went into my bedroom.
I shrieked when I saw the man, I could see he was full of hatred and anger. I was scarred for life. He seems like a former fireman, because he´s wearing black clothes with glowing yellow stripes like the fireman´s that I know and he´s wearing a fireman´s mask too, the ones that can be used to breathe in black smoke, his hair is light brown and he´s wielding a hand-axe that fireman´s use. At his pocket, there was this same camera again, he must be the same person I saw hiding behind the tree. Along the man, intense flame went inside my bedroom, like it was following him.
I wrapped my hand around my mouth and nose, trying not to inhale the black smoke. The man studied my bedroom, I thought he would find me hiding inside the closet but he passed it, he stopped in the middle of my bedroom, the man in front of me rose his hands high up to the ceiling, I couldn´t believe what I saw, flames appeared out of nowhere from his hands. The flames were strong and hot, that inside of the closet was getting warmer and I began to sweat. The man slowly looked at the closet where I´m hiding.
Fear strikes up in my eye when the man went towards me, I began to breathe heavily, my heart pumps faster and I began to tremble. Then, suddenly, I heard my big brother calling my name. `RITA?! Where are you?! RITA?!´. The man in front of me stopped and spun around, went towards the door and went to the hallway in the second floor, I felt relieved, sighed in relief but I began to worry about my big brother. I rushed to open the door to the closet and went out from my bedroom to search my brother.
I saw a strong flame coming out from my mommy and daddy´s bedroom, I thought if my parents were still alive but the flames were too strong for anyone to survive. Then, I heard my brother yelling again, this time he didn´t call for me, he yelled `WHO ARE YOU?!´.
I saw the man walking downstairs, so I guessed my brother is downstairs. I didn´t know what to do but all of a sudden, my body reacted of its own, I ran towards the man and pushed him down to the first floor. The man fell downstairs and hit the floor with a loud bump, I sighed in relief and ran towards my brother, suddenly, the flames behind me got stronger and hotter and it caught me before I got to my brothers arms. My body was burning painfully, and all of a sudden the man caught my left arm and pulled me to himself. He didn´t seem to be bothered by the flames.
He grabbed at my neck with his left arm and pulled my arm with his left, I heard something cracking and I screamed in pain, my left arm got dislocated. My body was not burning anymore, but the pain is still there, the man threw me away from him and looked at my brother. Rick attacked him and punched his face, the man fell to the floor again but quickly stood up again.
My brother repeatedly punched and kicked him many times that I lost count. My brother was getting tired but the man seems to be okay, even after all those punches and kicks the man was still standing as nothing had happened to him. My brother was exhausted, breathing heavily and sweating. The man began to laugh darkly, he reached his right hand towards my brother and again, out of nowhere fire appeared at his hand.
My brother watched him in disbelief and backed away in fear… I couldn´t believe that he would abandon me in such a situation but the man began to laugh darkly, he reached his flaming hand towards my running brother and the flames began to follow my big brother, the flames were faster than my brother and it caught him after few seconds.
I watched my brother screaming in pain as he got burned alive, second felt like hours and days. The man was wathing him in silent. Then 3 painful minutes later, my brother stopped screaming and moving… I began to cry loudly as I watched my brother die. The man spun around and reached his hand towards me, I knew he will burn me alive as he did to my brother but a alarming noise went closer from outside, it was a firetruck.
I heard the fireman´s yelling to get people away from our house. The man stopped the flames at his hand, and I began to yell that I was here and the man rushed towards the backdoor to get out from here. The fireman´s kicked the door open, they saw me lying at the floor and they helped me to get out from my burning house. I was saved.”
Female TV reporter; “That´s the news for today, it´s up to you if you´re going to believe her story or not.”
Next day, the same TV reporter; “Rita Davidson died today, the girl who survived when her home was burned to ashes, her parents and her big brother was burned to death by an unknown man. Her room in the hospital, 108, was burned down, but Rita´s corpse is still intact but her head, arms and legs were separated from her body and her chest was cut open, her internal organs hang down to the floor when she was found… When the flames were put down, the fireman´s noticed a text written with red liquid on the wall next to her bed, the text says `No one shall be left, all of them shall be burned to ashes! Flamefreak.´ Is he the same man Rita was talking about? It´s up to you to believe.”
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Comments: 57
WingedReaper777 [2014-11-04 19:47:34 +0000 UTC]
OK, could someone clarify whether or not Flame Freak is able to spontaneously set fire to things or does he just like to set things on fire physically?
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XioTehLeafKing In reply to UnluckyArachnoFreak [2014-08-04 19:24:33 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome~
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x0Rum-Pirate-Ranni0x [2014-05-30 20:08:43 +0000 UTC]
YOU MESSED 'round with mah feels!!! xDD
*but im fine now
good story!!
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UnluckyArachnoFreak In reply to x0Rum-Pirate-Ranni0x [2014-05-30 20:22:02 +0000 UTC]
Lolz xDD
*the plan succeeded >xD*
Thanks~
Btw, I´m improving his story to make it more clear and add more details...
Ugh, I hate details D`:
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x0Rum-Pirate-Ranni0x In reply to UnluckyArachnoFreak [2014-05-30 20:22:46 +0000 UTC]
sameeee
*(specially with Roven..its just..too.hard...eurghhhhhhhhh xD
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UnluckyArachnoFreak In reply to x0Rum-Pirate-Ranni0x [2014-05-30 20:40:13 +0000 UTC]
Writing Agathe´s story is easy but Flamefreak...
The readers want more details about him ;n;
I want to read Roven´s story~ link me? :33
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x0Rum-Pirate-Ranni0x In reply to UnluckyArachnoFreak [2014-05-31 04:48:25 +0000 UTC]
Sorry i deleted his story to make it moar better..
Besides, i have to work on Thomas xD
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UnluckyArachnoFreak In reply to x0Rum-Pirate-Ranni0x [2014-06-01 02:10:24 +0000 UTC]
awww man D:
Good luck with that xD
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UnluckyArachnoFreak In reply to JadeDeathWolf [2014-05-19 00:12:54 +0000 UTC]
Thanks xD
But it´s not complete~
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zombiekittenmues [2014-05-17 00:07:12 +0000 UTC]
i find it well done if i may say ad some more detail about how he and slenderman met and when he discovered his flame and
it works with him but like i said before well done
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UnluckyArachnoFreak In reply to zombiekittenmues [2014-05-18 00:15:31 +0000 UTC]
More details will be added later, how he met Slenderman (I might change it to another demon) and how he discovers his power :3 thanks~
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honebar [2014-05-13 12:27:10 +0000 UTC]
Very awesome story. Nods, very good. my only problem was the girls age... and how well she told the story, I could see some one a few years older speaking that clearly and detailed, not a 6 year old.. maybe a 10 year old. But other then that I would have to say 9 fireballs out of 10.
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UnluckyArachnoFreak In reply to honebar [2014-05-13 20:50:28 +0000 UTC]
I dind´t realized that xDD Thank you for telling me~
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Ke13 [2014-05-13 04:07:13 +0000 UTC]
Up until the report the 6 year old gave it was pretty okay dude, but when you got to Rita you made her sound more like an adult telling the story instead of a 6 year old girl. Children don't have that kind of concept as her report gave dude. For one thing, she'd have no idea what a former firefighter looks like, instead she'd just think of him as a regular firefighter. I feel like the child interview could be done better to show a child is saying it because I had to keep going back to make sure you said she was 6. Also the way they found her body doesn't make too much sense seeing as you made it clear he burns his victims to death. And the message made no sense either.
Besides what I said, the story does have a good feel to it.
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UnluckyArachnoFreak In reply to Ke13 [2014-05-13 04:13:31 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for telling me this ;A;
It helps a lot, now I know what to edit :3
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Ke13 In reply to UnluckyArachnoFreak [2014-05-13 04:29:31 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome.:3 I think some people get so caught up in making a good story and end up forgetting some things like that. It might also help to explain when he saw Slenderman again or what made him go to murder people after his family died. But then again some stories are good when they have room to speculate.:3
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UnluckyArachnoFreak In reply to Ke13 [2014-05-14 04:00:20 +0000 UTC]
xD
Well, I will add more for the story in Friday C:
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gdpr-25813752 [2014-05-13 00:35:35 +0000 UTC]
I like the story. I really feel bad for these CP characters and OC backstories. Bu any ways i like it.
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UnluckyArachnoFreak In reply to gdpr-25813752 [2014-05-13 00:57:11 +0000 UTC]
Well, thank you
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UnluckyArachnoFreak In reply to XAttackonrainbows [2014-05-08 02:47:11 +0000 UTC]
*le hugs* Thank you! ;w;
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XAttackonrainbows In reply to UnluckyArachnoFreak [2014-05-08 21:13:45 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome
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Squishykitt [2014-05-06 01:05:15 +0000 UTC]
So awesome!! Thanx for the story I just needed it to help understand him more and this really helped
Now I know what he'll be like in my story :33
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UnluckyArachnoFreak In reply to Squishykitt [2014-05-06 23:44:11 +0000 UTC]
Np~ Glad it helps xD
I´m really excited :3
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RoneOmbre [2014-05-05 04:50:59 +0000 UTC]
Dat is AWESOME. A bit of grammar could be changed but overall wonderful~ Great job loved it
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UnluckyArachnoFreak In reply to RoneOmbre [2014-05-05 05:19:15 +0000 UTC]
Thank you ;w; I needed to hear it~ Glad you do xD
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RoneOmbre In reply to UnluckyArachnoFreak [2014-05-05 05:21:23 +0000 UTC]
Heh now I need to work on mine, I really do love your character though, he's pretty unique~
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UnluckyArachnoFreak In reply to RoneOmbre [2014-05-06 23:44:53 +0000 UTC]
Heheh~ Thank you ;w; Your OCs are unique too :3
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NeonCarla In reply to UnluckyArachnoFreak [2014-05-05 04:49:58 +0000 UTC]
How's the request going~? X3
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UnluckyArachnoFreak In reply to NeonCarla [2014-05-05 05:18:09 +0000 UTC]
Fine~ Now I need to draw it on the computer first and color it xD but yeah, I will do it tomorrow since it´s really late here .-.
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NeonCarla In reply to UnluckyArachnoFreak [2014-05-05 05:48:38 +0000 UTC]
Okais~~ I'll wait~~
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NeonCarla In reply to UnluckyArachnoFreak [2014-05-06 01:20:44 +0000 UTC]
*waiting* Anytime~
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StarryMochi In reply to UnluckyArachnoFreak [2014-05-07 00:26:43 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome :3
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JustVeros [2014-05-05 00:56:43 +0000 UTC]
this is such a great story, i could never write this well
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UnluckyArachnoFreak In reply to JustVeros [2014-05-05 04:41:06 +0000 UTC]
Ah, thank you so much ;w;
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