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Published: 2015-09-05 19:59:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 3393; Favourites: 162; Downloads: 14
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EDIT*
Just changed his name from; The Uninvited One into; The Intruder *w*
Done    
Hey! long time no see people  

This boo need friends and enemies!


Bio:


 Name: The Intruder

Real Name: Ludwig R. Laws

Age: 32 years old

Gender: Male

Species:  Corrupted human

Personality:

  • Classy

  • Optimistic

  • Trust worthy

S.O: Pansexual

: Relationship Status: (Crack ship) Grizzly

Likes:

  • Pudding

  • Books

  • Puddings.

Dislikes:

  • Rudeness

  • Filth

  • Being talked back

Occupation: Stalker/killer

Date Of Birth: September 5th

Height: 5’ 12"

Eye Color: Hazel brown

Hair Color: Dark brown

Pet: None

Languages Spoken: English

Features: He wears a potato-bag to hide his face, hair is short and is dark brown. Wears suit, green shirt, brown gloves and red tie. Face is scarred from an injury years ago.

 

Phobias:

  • Agateophobia- Fear of insanity.

  • Agliophobia- Fear of pain.

  • Atelophobia- Fear of imperfection.

  • Bathophobia- Fear of depth.

  • Equinophobia- Fear of horses.

 

Weapons: Machete

How He kills/wounds in Combat:  He lurks around in someone’s party, family meeting etc. if he´s noticed and asked why he´s there, he attacks them. The reason why he lurks in someone’s home is unknown, therefore the nickname; The Uninvited One.

Relationships:

  • Parents: Both is unknown

  • Partner: Grizzly

  • Friends: None

  • Allies: Photo 

  • Rivals: None

  • Enemies: None

 

Quotes:
 

  • "The party is just starting!"

  • "Stay classy."


Notes:

  • He only kills if someone found him in the house

  • If not seen, he leaves the house in the morning

  • He rarely takes off the potato-bag

  • He have few pair of the same suit

  • He always have another bag with him, for the disassembled human corpse


Well, that´s about him now I hope you all like him as much as I do  
Oh, and yes, fear of horses      I thought of giving him something Unique to fear so I was like, horses.... why the heck not?  

Btw, I was really busy at the time I made him so I used shutter stocks I found in Google  

Do not steal him, credit me when you use him anywhere  

The Intruder (c) UnluckyOwlFreak
Grizzly (c) Techno723

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Comments: 52

insanitywolfartist26 [2017-06-05 13:15:31 +0000 UTC]

"stay classy" I like it!  

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XxLady-CarnagexX [2016-03-15 16:30:59 +0000 UTC]

Can he be friends with maybe proxy? Or animal?

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UnluckyOwlFreak In reply to XxLady-CarnagexX [2016-03-19 01:48:04 +0000 UTC]

Sure owo
not really sure about an animal.friend tho ovo

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XxLady-CarnagexX In reply to UnluckyOwlFreak [2016-03-19 14:39:46 +0000 UTC]

XD

no animal is one of the nicknames
to Kat. That or Hunter.
shes still human in a way. But is partially demon due to a certain poison that managed to sink into her right eye. Which explains her missing eye. 

Proxy is is full demon stuck in her 12 year old body until it rots away.
Kat ( animal ) isn't really too serious but she can be pretty violent when someone messes with her friends.
shes getting a redesign currently and should be posted later on today or tomorrow.
sadly it won't be with digital reference only traditional so the color will have to be explained.

you can see her old design here ----> ingloriouscardinal.deviantart.…

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AnimeJumperGodess [2016-02-25 01:43:24 +0000 UTC]

Mind if he get friendly with my CP Oc?
and that horse fear.... BRiLLANT

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UnluckyOwlFreak In reply to AnimeJumperGodess [2016-02-26 04:17:49 +0000 UTC]

Awww yisss please x)

Haha, wanted to give him a fear that no else CPOCs have eve

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CLAnemone [2016-02-06 22:49:07 +0000 UTC]

Kk. Imma do it here.

So, firstly, I like that this guys has lots of phobias. It shows she has both strengths and weaknesses.

Secondly, I just wanted to ask but how can he see with the potato bag on? Are there holes? You should specify if there are any.

Thirdly, I like that you gave him a unique design. It looks quite formal too. But when you write his backstory, remember to add how does he have such clothes. From a party? Stolen? What about that scar on his face? How did he get it? These are questions the reader's gonna ask. The more you explain, the easier it is to understand what kind of character your going at.

There isn't much to say. All in all, I give your character a 7/10. He's good he's good. But remember to put in some key points when you write his backstory. It'll change lots.

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UnluckyOwlFreak In reply to CLAnemone [2016-02-08 02:28:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much owo

There aren't any big holes, but many small ones. I tried one just go see if I could see and I could xD

It's quite hard to explain it since I still haven't written his back story, I've done some thinking and getting ideas from my friends so it's still a W.I.P C:

Thank you very much, I will remember it :')

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CLAnemone In reply to UnluckyOwlFreak [2016-02-08 02:45:47 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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MegaNE-KO [2016-02-06 13:55:11 +0000 UTC]

Omfg this Character is awesome! ◉u◉

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UnluckyOwlFreak In reply to MegaNE-KO [2016-02-08 02:19:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much ;;v;;

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MegaNE-KO In reply to UnluckyOwlFreak [2016-02-08 03:12:59 +0000 UTC]

Aye, you're welcome. uvu 

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Ripj4ws [2015-12-01 02:44:29 +0000 UTC]

Still need friends/enemies/whatever for him?

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UnluckyOwlFreak In reply to Ripj4ws [2015-12-01 03:14:36 +0000 UTC]

Yup owo

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Ripj4ws In reply to UnluckyOwlFreak [2015-12-02 01:33:23 +0000 UTC]

Cool. I think that he might have a pretty strong reaction to a couple of my oc's, namely deathtouch and watson. Also possibly dr oswald but hes a wip and doesnt really have a ref yet.

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NumNumkats [2015-11-24 13:31:18 +0000 UTC]

ZOMG...HE LOOKS SO FABU-

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UnluckyOwlFreak In reply to NumNumkats [2015-11-24 20:24:30 +0000 UTC]

HE DOO

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NumNumkats In reply to UnluckyOwlFreak [2015-11-25 01:34:39 +0000 UTC]

ewe

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bisqitsu [2015-11-24 11:20:15 +0000 UTC]

He looks awesome! *v*

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UnluckyOwlFreak In reply to bisqitsu [2015-11-24 11:24:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ;;v;;

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bisqitsu In reply to UnluckyOwlFreak [2015-11-24 12:54:49 +0000 UTC]

;v;

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UnluckyOwlFreak In reply to bisqitsu [2015-11-24 13:24:51 +0000 UTC]

;v;

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bisqitsu In reply to UnluckyOwlFreak [2015-11-24 13:31:43 +0000 UTC]

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UnluckyOwlFreak In reply to bisqitsu [2015-11-24 13:47:57 +0000 UTC]

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bisqitsu In reply to UnluckyOwlFreak [2015-11-24 13:51:01 +0000 UTC]

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Squishykitt [2015-10-12 23:07:53 +0000 UTC]

Okay but honestly this is so freaking awesome!!

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UnluckyOwlFreak In reply to Squishykitt [2015-10-12 23:29:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you beb ;//v//;

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xSpiralMoon-Artsx [2015-10-06 16:21:28 +0000 UTC]

He's so precious *v*

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UnluckyOwlFreak In reply to xSpiralMoon-Artsx [2015-10-07 06:19:53 +0000 UTC]

He is (≧∇≦)/

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sapphirekitty777 [2015-09-13 17:53:47 +0000 UTC]

what a cute mask
mine~mine~mine~mine~
hes like a killer from a slasher flick

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UnluckyOwlFreak In reply to sapphirekitty777 [2015-09-13 19:44:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks x)

really? what is it? owo

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sapphirekitty777 In reply to UnluckyOwlFreak [2015-09-13 20:20:39 +0000 UTC]

lol nothing in paticular
also, mabye a cat as a pet?

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UnluckyOwlFreak In reply to sapphirekitty777 [2015-09-13 21:02:46 +0000 UTC]



I already have a pet in mind for him ^^

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sapphirekitty777 In reply to UnluckyOwlFreak [2015-09-14 21:58:10 +0000 UTC]

xD i thought a cat would be a good pet for him cuz of his mask and his stalker personality

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UnluckyOwlFreak In reply to sapphirekitty777 [2015-09-15 00:53:18 +0000 UTC]

Ooohhh owo that is a good idea x)
He will get a pet cat evé

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sapphirekitty777 In reply to UnluckyOwlFreak [2015-09-13 21:06:49 +0000 UTC]

o:

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SlenderJr-smiledog [2015-09-07 04:01:19 +0000 UTC]

Hm?

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UnluckyOwlFreak In reply to SlenderJr-smiledog [2015-09-07 05:49:30 +0000 UTC]

Hm? :3

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SlenderJr-smiledog In reply to UnluckyOwlFreak [2015-09-07 14:15:47 +0000 UTC]

I like him

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UnluckyOwlFreak In reply to SlenderJr-smiledog [2015-09-07 23:40:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you >u<

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SlenderJr-smiledog In reply to UnluckyOwlFreak [2015-09-07 23:44:20 +0000 UTC]

U welcome. I wish i had someone to ship him with

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UnluckyOwlFreak In reply to SlenderJr-smiledog [2015-09-07 23:48:22 +0000 UTC]

Awww hahah >v<

He´s not ready for the shipping yet ;.;
but he soon will evé

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SlenderJr-smiledog In reply to UnluckyOwlFreak [2015-09-07 23:49:54 +0000 UTC]

Ok,when he is will you tell me,so i can try

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UnluckyOwlFreak In reply to SlenderJr-smiledog [2015-09-07 23:50:56 +0000 UTC]

Alright ^^

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SlenderJr-smiledog In reply to UnluckyOwlFreak [2015-09-07 23:55:46 +0000 UTC]

Yay^^ wait what pudding does he like

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UnluckyOwlFreak In reply to SlenderJr-smiledog [2015-09-07 23:57:13 +0000 UTC]

All kind of puddings *q*

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SlenderJr-smiledog In reply to UnluckyOwlFreak [2015-09-07 23:58:39 +0000 UTC]

He's my creepypasta self friend

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UnluckyOwlFreak In reply to SlenderJr-smiledog [2015-09-08 00:07:59 +0000 UTC]

Hahah >v<

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SlenderJr-smiledog In reply to UnluckyOwlFreak [2015-09-08 00:10:19 +0000 UTC]

Do u have a creepypasta self

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UnluckyOwlFreak In reply to SlenderJr-smiledog [2015-09-08 00:11:09 +0000 UTC]

Not at the moment ^^

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