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Description In this world of “ war”, humans vs. nekos, a lot of ninjas were send to nekos lands with some explorers to find ways to get all the power of this world.
One ninja in this group was Teo Andrews. A bit different from most of the humans, he believed that neko and humans should live in peace, but if the group knew that, they would kill Teo.

Teo was born in a little village of ninjas, which have some of the best who are sent to explorer troops. When he was a child he hates the nekos, for no reason, just like all the kids. One day Teo´s grandfather heard him talking bad about the neko. Yes it was the grandfather who trained Teo a lot. He told Teo how this war lead to nothing, and that he should pay respect  for all living beings .The child wouldn´t listen and still saw nekos as  stupid animals.

It was a few days later that everyone was called to the center of the city. Teo didn´t knew what happened; as he arrived there he saw a crowed around something or someone. He struggled through the crowed, to see what was going on. He was shocked to see his grandfather chained to two large stones, by his arms, and getting whipped before everyone. Teo couldn´t believed this, his grandfather was a traitor? He only believed that neko weren’t monsters.
Teo left the place, but came back after everyone left the center. Only two guards were there to take him to prison. Teo did take the guards down, in a way that it seems his grandfather escaped by his own.
They never saw each other again.

Form that day he was that this war makes monsters. No one knew that Teo freed he grandfather.

He grew to a strong ninja, a strong minded man, with a good heart. Most of the time, he uses black clothes with a hood and a dark scarf.
That way he hides the gray hair and his mouth, but leaving his black eyes uncovered.
His main weapon is hi katana, even if he doesn´t  like to kill.

   The day has come, he was chosen to protect explores in a camp near the neko land. It is a good chance to get to know a neko and find a way to stop the war. He was planning to run away from the explores.
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Comments: 42

Voxian [2009-01-05 06:37:02 +0000 UTC]

oh wow, you've topped your stories again... great job!

i love all your neko/human stuff...

you should draw some more nekos...

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2009-01-05 09:24:56 +0000 UTC]

only the story line from Teo is mine ^^
is a contest .

Maybe I will, but I got two more drawings to do and one more chapter

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2009-01-05 23:40:51 +0000 UTC]

ya i saw that... still though, you did a good job!

hmm good luck on all that... I've been trying to make more music... and it's not working out... *sigh*

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2009-01-06 00:24:50 +0000 UTC]

music ? thats hard >.< good luck

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2009-01-06 03:30:14 +0000 UTC]

ya, well I've actually written quite a few songs... but currently I'm stuck... and as stuck as stuck can be...

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2009-01-06 09:20:57 +0000 UTC]

=/

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2009-01-07 01:14:07 +0000 UTC]

i hate being stuck...

do you like cake?

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2009-01-07 09:24:10 +0000 UTC]

yeah
why ?

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2009-01-07 13:49:37 +0000 UTC]

chocolate cake? or vanilla?

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2009-01-07 14:34:32 +0000 UTC]

both

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2009-01-07 22:34:35 +0000 UTC]

hmm that's iffy... basically imo, if you like chocolate, you are a heathen, and if you like vanilla, we are best friends... but you like both... idk how to judge that...

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2009-01-07 23:25:03 +0000 UTC]

mabye, just maybe i´m both

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2009-01-07 23:40:28 +0000 UTC]

ah that might be true.. hmm, how about pocky? (and don't you dare say, "what is pocky?" lol xD )

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2009-01-08 09:22:19 +0000 UTC]

wats pocky? xD

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2009-01-08 21:46:43 +0000 UTC]

*smacks you over the head with a large stick, WHACK!!!*

I TOLD YOU NOT TO SAY THAT!!!

*sigh* ok, pocky is a REALLY popular asian snack.. it's the ONLY kind of chocolate i like (and that's saying something) I only wish i could give you some... you'd go insane like every other noob to whom the wonder of pocky was revealed...

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2009-01-08 23:27:27 +0000 UTC]

ouch >.o man I was playing

and in Brazil i never heard about it

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2009-01-08 23:48:34 +0000 UTC]

you don't play around with not knowing about pocky... that just isn't done....

anyways, i MIGHT make an except for you, cause you live in Brazil... anyways, GO GET SOME POCKY!! you can find it at some wallmarts... (do they have those in brazil?)

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2009-01-09 00:24:54 +0000 UTC]

errr yeah but not in my city
>.<

and i´m sorry

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2009-01-09 00:55:20 +0000 UTC]

ah ok... then don't worry about it... I'm no longer angry... (though, i was never really angry in the first place.. just trying to make a point... xD )

anywho, just next time you are out or something... see if you can find some pocky.. it's REALLY good...

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2009-01-09 15:00:21 +0000 UTC]

xD I don´t think that I can leave, cost a lot of money

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2009-01-10 00:17:25 +0000 UTC]

hmm good point.. ok then, go online and order some pocky! it's only like 2$s ... not sure what that is in your country... but it's not much...

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2009-01-10 02:04:04 +0000 UTC]

lets see =/ mabye R$4

its alot for here

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2009-01-10 02:11:14 +0000 UTC]

4$s is a lot for brazil?

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2009-01-10 02:15:09 +0000 UTC]

>.< for a bar of chocolate
yep, kinda

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2009-01-10 02:21:01 +0000 UTC]

well, it's not exactly a bar of chocolate... it's a bunch of sticks of chocolate... they come in a box

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2009-01-10 02:26:45 +0000 UTC]

ohhh

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2009-01-10 02:35:33 +0000 UTC]

lolz, sorry i should have explained what it was better... here's a pic:

[link]

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2009-01-10 14:45:20 +0000 UTC]

well i dunno the name but, i Think I ate choco sticks somewhere >.>

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2009-01-10 23:52:49 +0000 UTC]

really? where exactly? or do you not remember it very well?

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2009-01-11 00:09:03 +0000 UTC]

it was so long ago >.<

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2009-01-11 00:17:11 +0000 UTC]

ah ok...

well if you don't remember it... it probably wasn't pocky..

lol, just today i got someone addicted to pocky xD i brought it over gave him a few pieces... and he was like "THIS IS SO GOOD!!!" then he ate the whole box... O.O

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2009-01-11 00:24:14 +0000 UTC]

xD omg

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2009-01-11 00:30:09 +0000 UTC]

lolz ya, it's crazy... next time i see him I'll give him another box xD

FEED THE BEAST!!!

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2009-01-11 00:32:34 +0000 UTC]

lol u created a choco monster xD

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2009-01-11 00:45:58 +0000 UTC]

haha, yes lol... though, he's only had the strawberry kind lol

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2009-01-11 01:51:53 +0000 UTC]

xD

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melmoon [2009-01-03 11:01:36 +0000 UTC]

ninjas XDD
NARUTO, BLEH

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Unreal-max In reply to melmoon [2009-01-03 11:15:49 +0000 UTC]

xD nao

Era ninjas normais, nao tao Ops

nao gosto de naruto

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AkasukiGirl [2009-01-03 04:32:56 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm...intresting....

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Unreal-max In reply to AkasukiGirl [2009-01-03 09:57:12 +0000 UTC]

sorry that this story line sucks, I was tired >.<

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AkasukiGirl In reply to Unreal-max [2009-01-03 15:25:30 +0000 UTC]

Nyaaa!It doesn't suck!I think it's interesting!

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Unreal-max In reply to AkasukiGirl [2009-01-03 16:22:40 +0000 UTC]

tnx >.< I hope when I´m going to stard working again my ideas com back
>.> most of them are out

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