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Footsteps echoed from the hallway, the sound was fast like some one running. These footsteps weren’t just from Alfa, Beta and Gamma. Looks like some guards were on there way to the invaders. Beta was the first to encounter two guards running in his direction and shooting at the same time with there machine guns. It was hard to aim at the moving target, which leaps to the right and to the left while running. This doesn’t stop Beta to take his two revolvers from his jacket’s pocket and shoot against the guards. It took just two shots from each revolver to take them out. The shots were almost perfect headshots. Beta put his guns in his pockets, while running passed the corpse down the hallway. Soon he reached a door. It was two wooden doors that made one big door. In front there were also two guards, which was no surprise to Beta. In the room a man could hear loud machine guns shots and crashes, which shakes the walls of the room. Seconds later there was a death full silence, but suddenly footsteps can be heard getting closer and closer. Suddenly the door slammed open and Beta walked in.There was a man standing behind a work desk. He had light gray hair and blue eyes. It seemed that he was a type of banker because of the black suite and the fact that he seemed kind of old. Beta was facing him, already pointing the gun at the man’s head.
Beta walked slowly toward the work desk.
- Steve, Steve Sharp?- Beta asked. The way that he talked seemed that he was dead, cold-hearted. There was no way to see his face for the room had a weak light.
- W-why? Why do you want to know that? – asked the man, with fear in his eyes. He saw what that monster could do and easily he might kill him like all the guards. Even so, he is kind of relieved that he could press a button under the table. This button was for calling more guards, which should be on there way to that room.
Suddenly Beta approached to the desk. There were many pages spread all over it. There was a computer on the coroner of the desk. Its keyboard and mouse were almost completely covered with some pages. The man seemed very important and very busy, explaining why he was the one of the targets. There was also a rectangular object near the computer. Beta reached his left hand to that object to grab it.
- What… is this? – He asked while holding it in his hand. Now he was more under the light and some of his face could be seen. His skin color was gray, seemed that he has no lips and had a piece of fabric covering the eyes. But, still most of his face was still covered by the shadows from the cap and hood.
Your…blind…?! This is a picture from me and my daughter… - Replied Steve in a certain confused voice. In fact, it’s strange that an assassin asking about anything about his “life” without wanting money or some kind object. Even that he could do what he did. Who is he? That question banged in his head.
Your … daughter… - Said Beta, seeming to be feeling some pain from his past, but why. He got no past… to remember.
Behind the door appeared two guards, a man and a woman. All guard had the same clothing. The man was aiming his pistol at Beta’s back.
Drop your gun or I will shoot you!!! –Said the man with his strong voice, but Beta didn’t move. That ticked the man’s nerves. - 1, 2…. – He started counting and when he got to three he was ready to shot at Beta. Steve screamed to that man to don’t shoot, but it was too late. The bullet somehow hit his body and simply dropped on the ground. The guards were stunned with that.
W-what a-are you ??? – Asked the man in great fear, he didn’t wait for an answer and rapidly shot Beat many times. The same thing happened over and over. At last he stopped when the pistol was empty. He saw Beta moving his hand. The man lowered the pistol and stepped backwards. – N-no… this can’t be …
Beta quickly turned around. Facing the guard and pointing his revolver at him. He pulled the trigger and shot at him. For some reason he aimed at the guard’s leg and shot in a way that the bullet only rasped the target. After that the man fell on one knee holding his injured leg wanting to stop the bleeding.
BROTHER!!! –Screamed the female guard and immanently tried to help her brother. She grabs his arms and pulled him away from the door. A blood trail was left behind. Beta turned to Steve. He put the revolver in his jacket’s pocket and tried to say something, but he only opened his mouth a little bit without being able to talk. He seemed troubled. After some moments lost in his mind he finally said something.
Get out of here… now !!! –Said Beta in his usual voice. Steve couldn’t bealive what he heard, was Beta really going to let him go? Maybe he was going to shot him from behind, but it was really strange.
Its your last chance… will you take it? – Beta continued. Steve didn’t think twice and slowly walked towards the door. Soon he stopped on the way as he heard something else from Beta, he said to take many guard with him out of the building and fast. With that Steve left the room and helps the guard that was shot near his leg.
Beta was still in the room, holding the picture frame in his hand. He seems once more lost in his mind. Although he can’t see the picture e still was facing the frame and after a while he let it go. The glass form the frame splatters when it hit the floor. Beta now left the room and heading for the place that he has marked with Alfa and Gama.
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Comments: 44
Vekao [2011-06-22 00:09:24 +0000 UTC]
the most think I liked is the wonderful description of everything .. Clothing .. Faces .. Movements
This is truly a wonderful^^
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Unreal-max In reply to Vekao [2011-06-24 22:56:06 +0000 UTC]
Well I don't really know what to say
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Vekao In reply to Unreal-max [2011-06-24 23:14:42 +0000 UTC]
Say you will not give up and will return to write again^^
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Unreal-max In reply to Vekao [2011-06-30 10:52:50 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
And why do you call me dear?
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Vekao In reply to Unreal-max [2011-06-30 12:32:32 +0000 UTC]
you welcome dear ^^
I call you dear because you are my friend
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Unreal-max In reply to Vekao [2011-06-30 18:14:22 +0000 UTC]
Your friend ? And you didn't add me , dear xD
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Vekao In reply to Unreal-max [2011-07-03 12:14:43 +0000 UTC]
thank you dear ^^
and i did too
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Unreal-max In reply to AkasukiGirl [2010-05-09 12:53:58 +0000 UTC]
Did you read one part 1 ?
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halibabica [2009-09-25 15:44:09 +0000 UTC]
Okay, finally got around to reading it. It could do with some proofreading and the tense of the phrasing is a bit confusing at times, but otherwise it's okay.
The story itself, I think is fine. But the wording of some things needs help. I know English isn't your first language, but you have some things to learn if you're going to write in it.
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Unreal-max In reply to halibabica [2009-09-25 15:47:29 +0000 UTC]
I know that why I first want to end this, mabye, to than read it for myself and try to fix it
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Darky-chaan [2009-09-25 13:32:33 +0000 UTC]
nice work!! but the arms are a little bit short, don't you think? LoL well, I don't know
are you going to continue the story? it's really interesting!
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Unreal-max In reply to Darky-chaan [2009-09-25 15:51:54 +0000 UTC]
>.> just now i saw it lol, dam
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Darky-chaan In reply to Unreal-max [2009-09-25 22:48:32 +0000 UTC]
xD don't worry, it looks cool!
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halibabica [2009-09-24 23:49:08 +0000 UTC]
Ooh, a picture to go with the story this time! Nice work, I love the shading.
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Unreal-max In reply to halibabica [2009-09-24 23:53:30 +0000 UTC]
Well, to tell the truth. I hated the shading >.> You already read the story?
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halibabica In reply to Unreal-max [2009-09-25 01:04:38 +0000 UTC]
I read the first part, but I'll have to look over this one later. A bit busy at the moment.
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