HOME | DD

Unreal-max — Neo-force: Cap. 5
Published: 2008-12-26 22:17:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 129; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
Redirect to original
Description Chapter 5 : Scared shrine

They did a good job avoiding the guards; the smells disguise helped a lot just as Kate super hearing. As they explored the temple Kate was getting used to the guards smell, cause of the guard disguise .It was harder for her to know if some guard are near or far. It was moist in the hall way, the wall’s vines colored it green, in parts.

Max: You got any idea where we got to go? * He whisper to Kate while they were walking*

Kate: There is to be some scared shrine in here somewhere.

Max: But the most ways lead to a dead end. * They walked to a dead end after turning left somewhere*

Kate: And there another one * all the dead ends where they   have been had a statue. It was a man who used robes, long hair, no shoes, and no weapons. They where looking to the ceiling with there hands near the chest. It was like they were praying.*
Let’s go, Max. * She was turning around*

Max: Wait… This statue is different* The statue hand’s had a palm of distance between them* Look, its like he is holding something…
* Max got closer to the statue, to see that’s there’s something written on his chest, betweens his hands* Hey, there is something here…

Kate turns around once more and went see what it was.

Kate: Here says “Your heart sees the truth”, I don’t have time for games.

Max: Wait. Maybe it’s his heart, after all we’re in the temple of a saver. * Max touches the statue chest with his hand, and it seems like he pressed something. A door, to his left, opened* Wow!!
*Max jumps back*

Kate: I can’t believe it, you found it. * She smiled while walking in the room. It was like all the other rooms, but here there was growing a kind of weed. Also there was a larger statue of an angel he was wearing the same ropes, but was holding a sword in his hand. * The hands were still near the chest, and the sword was pointing down. He also using a estrange bracelet on his right arm. Kate was picking up some of the weed while Max looked what was written on the stone, which is under the statue.*

Max: *It seems that he can read that writing* “To honor the person that saved Zera from destruction” Hum …Why can I read that and couldn’t read the other… * Thinks: Only if he was one of the angels that gave birth to the Neo-elementares*

Kate: Max we can go now.

Max: You found it out? What is his weakness?

Kate: Erm… No, I don’t think we’ll find it. I was send here to get healing weed for the elder of my village.

Max: oh, we didn’t you tell me? Well now I know my not in my world, I got to find a way home. * He looked to Kate, and saw a kind of sadness*
Well I’ll help this world first.

When Kate hears that she looked up to him, with tears in her eyes, kind of happy. He guessed that for tears they were suffering, so he couldn’t just turn around. All of the sudden she hugged Max.

Kate: You will? Thank you. * she smiled at him*

???: Oh how sweet, a neko and a, well I don’t know what you are.
* Somebody entered the room; he was hidden in the shadows so they couldn’t see him or her, its smell wasn’t the same as the guards. It wasn’t a wolf. When it stepped forward, its form is reveled. He was a tiger like being, He is wearing a lighter leather armor than the guards his face and arms had black strips, his tail too.*
Please don’t stop. Your last moment got to be lovely. HA HA HA!!!
Related content
Comments: 5

melmoon [2008-12-27 15:15:18 +0000 UTC]

que risada do maaaaaaaaaaaals xDD

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Unreal-max In reply to melmoon [2008-12-27 15:28:05 +0000 UTC]

que nada

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Voxian [2008-12-26 22:51:57 +0000 UTC]

omgsh! you never cease to amaze me!

i love the fact that you are using some anthro characters.. makes me happy inside... <3

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2008-12-27 10:55:31 +0000 UTC]

tnx

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2008-12-27 17:17:05 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0