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Unreal-max — Neo-force:New world
Published: 2008-12-13 23:36:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 138; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description Chapter 2: New world, new friends and new foes


The day was bright, just some clouds made shades on the green field. Max was still lying there, unconscious. His wasn’t wearing his brown cape anymore, just a blue jeans and a white shirt. His cloths were quite torn. His sword was lying near his right.
  It was pretty windy, which blows on him. That’s makes him wake up. Slowly he opens his eyes and tries to stand up, but he´s still a little weak.

Max: Ugghhh. I feel like being ran over by a truck. My head is ringing. * He got up, holding his head with one hand, and seemed shocked*
Hey!!! Where am I? I just don’t remember fighting Shadow here.
* He pick up his sword* Doesn’t matter I’ll just teleport out of where ever I am.
* He spoke a weird language*
……
*Nothing happened* What the???
* Thinks: Why won’t Legacy teleport me? What’s happening?*

Max starts looking around to try to figure out where he is.


Max: Oh boy, I’m lost again. * Thinks: That always happens to me* After a while little bit of walking around, he stopped on the side of a large tree.* Wait a minute, I passed here like five times.
*He taps his own forehead* >.<
I don’t believe it.
* Out of nowhere came a person running against Max, he didn’t notice the person because he came from behind*
BAAMM!!!!


*Max got rammed and fell forward, with force. * He got up slowly*
But it’s a nice weather
Why got I struck by a tornado? x.x

*The person was a cat girl, a neko.*
Kate: HEY, DUDE!!! GET OUT OF MY WAY!!

*When Max turned around to look at her they both were  shocked*
Kate: Y-you don´t got big ears and tail * she said taking one step backwards*

Max: A-and you have them. * He steps forwards slowly* And why You ram into me?

Kate: I wasn´t looking forwards. NOW ! get out of the way

Max: Ok.  o.o * He stepped aside* But You need help?

Kate: * she began to run passed him* Its better you ran too…

Max: Erm….. Why? * suddenly he heard a sound for behind. Like something shard landed on the soil and got stuck * He turned around to see what was behind him. He saw an spear* >.< ohh!! That’s why.
* Max began to run too*
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Comments: 14

melmoon [2008-12-14 13:26:33 +0000 UTC]

que que eh spear?! O_O

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Unreal-max In reply to melmoon [2008-12-14 13:50:31 +0000 UTC]

spear é lança xD

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melmoon In reply to Unreal-max [2008-12-14 13:59:40 +0000 UTC]

SAQUEI XD

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WEareANGELsong [2008-12-14 03:24:30 +0000 UTC]

ur english is pretty good, but i just want you to know tht when you make someone talk you dont type:
Max: Ughhhhhh...

you type:
Max, "Ughhh...,"

good job! keep up on your english!

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Unreal-max In reply to WEareANGELsong [2008-12-14 11:11:29 +0000 UTC]

xD I know, but I wanted to show that he was kocked out of quiet some houres, and some words which I forgot the spelling I look out in the "word"

But I hoped You enjoyed part two.

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WEareANGELsong In reply to Unreal-max [2008-12-14 15:29:40 +0000 UTC]

i did, good job!

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Unreal-max In reply to WEareANGELsong [2008-12-14 15:37:41 +0000 UTC]

tnx xD
well only the characters I didin´t tell how they look like

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WEareANGELsong In reply to Unreal-max [2008-12-14 15:41:49 +0000 UTC]

thts ok, as the author, it must be ur duty to make it so its the r4eaders job to figure it out!

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Unreal-max In reply to WEareANGELsong [2008-12-14 15:49:46 +0000 UTC]

yes, and they are OCs, so I won´t give all the details.

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WEareANGELsong In reply to Unreal-max [2008-12-14 15:53:22 +0000 UTC]

cool, thts good!

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Unreal-max In reply to WEareANGELsong [2008-12-14 15:56:26 +0000 UTC]

Im working on chapter 3

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WEareANGELsong In reply to Unreal-max [2008-12-14 16:25:22 +0000 UTC]

great, i cant wait!

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halibabica [2008-12-14 02:47:11 +0000 UTC]

Ah, part two! Sorry I haven't gotten around to helping you with these yet, I've been preoccupied. Maybe in the next few days...

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Unreal-max In reply to halibabica [2008-12-14 11:13:57 +0000 UTC]

No problem. It is selfish of me when I were always taking up your time.
So no sweat. ^^

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