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Unreal-max — Neo-force: to the temple
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Description Chapter 3: To the chosen’s temple


*Max and Kate were running, but they didn´t go far from the large tree. Someone threw a large spear in front of Kate, the same spear as before. In the shock, she stopped and fell backwards*
Max: * he stopped and began to think* *Wait a sec why am I running?*
* he turned around to Kate and helped her up* Hey!!! Who dares to try to hurt...
* whispers to Kate* erm… What’s your name?
Kate: *whispers back* Its Kate And what you think your doing?
Max : Trust me. * Now stops whispering* Hey now whoever threw the spear, we don’t have to fight.

*The guards were as tall as Max, but they too had big ears, like from a wolf, and a wolf like tail. They were using brown hard leather armor, pretty light so they can move faster, but seems very strong.*

Guard#1: Don´t waste our time with nonsense. You’re some of the resistance that’s left, and we take no more prisoners.
Guard#2:  W-what’s that? He´s not from this world. We got to report this to the master.
* He took a step backwards*
Guard #1:  We have to kill them* He grabbed the large spear, bigger than normal and heavier, and pull it out the ground*
Guard#2: But look he doesn´t have a tail, and he came to help the resistance to defeat the master. He is the one. * he was scared. It was almost as he has seen a ghost. He began to retreat*
Guard#1: You coward!!! Now stranger….
* He spins the spear with his two hands, and starts running, very fast, against Max.*

Max: * He didn´t seem surprised by the speed, in fact that was rather slow for him. Max wielded his sword with the left hand, and when the guard was about two ram into him Max took a little step to his right, that wouldn’t make him escape from the attack, but while he made that, he spins on his own axis, clockwise. While the guard runs by him, Max makes a fest sword attack. Using the spins speed he dose a horizontal, not perfect horizontal, but a little upper, cut*
I told you I didn´t want to fight…* He put his sword back*

Guard#1: H-how fest… Its…Not…The chosen one… B-But how?*  He turned to Max, shocked by the way he moved. Suddenly the spear broke into two pieces, it was cut
n diagonal. The guard let the two pieces fall on the ground, even more frightened he began two ran away*

Kate:  W-what are you?* She got frighten with his ability, it was not so common *

Max: I´m a Neo-elemental, a mortal angel who got divined powers of the elements.
* Max turned around* But why they wanted to kill us? And who is the chosen one?

Kate: A-an angel? * She didn’t seem calm* A-And thanks for helping me.

Max: *thinks: I guess there aren’t any human in this world, but still it seems that they afraid of me. Well I should be, she’s a CAT.*  

Kate: Oh, the chosen one, this a being sand from the skies to save our world a long long time ago. I was heading of the temple when…

Max: * before she finished talking, he interrupted her*
A Temple? Maybe I can find an answer to my question. I´ll come with you, erm, Kate.

Kate: Ok * she get closer to Max and give him a kiss on the check * Than starts walking towards the temple, which is far away.

Max: * lays  his hand on his check* H-hey   ?

Kate: Its my way of saying thank you.
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Comments: 22

melmoon [2008-12-16 12:48:33 +0000 UTC]

TEVE BEIJINHO NA BUCHECHA *Q*~

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Unreal-max In reply to melmoon [2008-12-17 14:49:21 +0000 UTC]

xD pra nao dar na boca

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melmoon In reply to Unreal-max [2008-12-18 11:39:35 +0000 UTC]

SBHAUBSUHABUHSABUSBUHABSA XDD'

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Voxian [2008-12-14 22:00:43 +0000 UTC]

dude, you're an awesome writer!

do you RP?

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2008-12-14 22:12:06 +0000 UTC]

I used to. Well I dont write english very good

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2008-12-14 22:28:35 +0000 UTC]

i think you did fine... i could understand everything you were tiring to say...

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2008-12-14 22:37:20 +0000 UTC]

I used to fight a lot rp

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2008-12-15 04:25:20 +0000 UTC]

lolz, i do comedy RPs .... totally different

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2008-12-15 09:22:57 +0000 UTC]

xD Well Max acts a bit funny, but its more of an adventure fighting RP

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2008-12-15 21:18:34 +0000 UTC]

ya, i know how that is... I'm in a few RPs where it's all action/adventure.... I'm basically the comic relief...

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2008-12-15 21:41:43 +0000 UTC]

But I wasn´t that good

so I kinda stopped

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2008-12-16 03:46:42 +0000 UTC]

you don't have to be good to RP... you just have to enjoy it...

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2008-12-16 09:25:32 +0000 UTC]

yeah xD but got to write so ohter can understand.
Where I play some just write * he kills you * thats a noob xD I try to explain the attack

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2008-12-17 00:11:30 +0000 UTC]

ya, that is true... there are definitively wrong ways to RP ....

ROFL you should see my posts... each one is really long and detailed...

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2008-12-17 14:47:39 +0000 UTC]

I can make better post when im not using english

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2008-12-17 22:01:58 +0000 UTC]

ya, well I'm sure that's complicated.. i mean, if i was trying to post in another language i would be totally lost... and it would be terrible....

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2008-12-17 22:11:23 +0000 UTC]

>.< i guess i´m taking too to do chapter 4 well some wants to know wats next xD

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2008-12-17 22:15:52 +0000 UTC]

haha, that happens... just one reason i don't write stories...

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Unreal-max In reply to Voxian [2008-12-17 22:20:32 +0000 UTC]

well but some still like to read it xD I think
. Now I´ll be trying to do chapter 4

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Voxian In reply to Unreal-max [2008-12-17 22:25:21 +0000 UTC]

i enjoy reading your story... it's pretty interesting... and great for inspiration...

gl with chapter 4 ... i know how hard it is to write....

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AkasukiGirl [2008-12-14 19:14:57 +0000 UTC]

Koolerz!

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Unreal-max In reply to AkasukiGirl [2008-12-14 19:51:54 +0000 UTC]

tnx

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