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Description Into the stars WIP

Ag-Cat
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Ag-Cat [2016-06-19 14:54:24 +0000 UTC]

Mostly done with my part:  Star draft cThe journey through the Sea of Stars was going to be a long and harsh one, but Atlas was ready. Waiting for her at the harbor was her grandfather's trusty boat, looked better than ever under the starlight. Not that there wasn't at least one butterfly in her stomach: this would be the first time she did the job alone, after all.
"Be careful. The sea can be chaotic this time of year," her grandfather advised.
"I will be, grandpa,"
She hugged her grandfather one last time before she walked down the dock.
The trip went smoothly in the first week. There was no day-light cycle in the Land of Night, which the Sea of Stars was a part of. Instead, the people divided the year bases on the movement of the constellations in the sky. One can look up what day and month it was on the handy celestial calendar; but any self-respecting captain, like Atlas, should know the stars by heart. Still, she brought a pocket celestial calendar with her. It gave her some comfort while alone in the sea. F. It still needs dome editing and trimming to fit the 1000 words limit, but that's about it.
How's your side going?

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UntitledScribbler In reply to Ag-Cat [2016-06-20 10:58:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Yours is so awesome!! I love the ending, I really wasn't expecting it!! I'm getting there. The waterfall at the front is taking some time. I have less on in the next couple of days, so hopefully I can plow through it!

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Ag-Cat In reply to UntitledScribbler [2016-06-20 14:21:02 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it. Good luck with your piece. I can't wait to see the finished version!

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UntitledScribbler In reply to Ag-Cat [2016-06-20 22:31:44 +0000 UTC]

Dunno if you can look at this on a computer, but it is where I am posting the WIPs. Gonna go and get a gel pen tomorrow!!

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UntitledScribbler In reply to UntitledScribbler [2016-06-20 22:31:57 +0000 UTC]

The link: aminoapps.com/p/qlzks

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Ag-Cat In reply to UntitledScribbler [2016-06-28 02:48:11 +0000 UTC]

Have you decided on the title of the piece yet?

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UntitledScribbler In reply to Ag-Cat [2016-06-29 21:59:03 +0000 UTC]

We have to title it 0-0
Got any ideas?
I am so glad the deadline has been extended!! I have a summer school right now and there are literally no breaks! Will definitely get it done though!!!

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Ag-Cat In reply to UntitledScribbler [2016-06-30 03:52:57 +0000 UTC]

How about:

Sea Of Stars
The Star Journey
Under The Stars
Journey Under the Starry Night
Moon In Pocket
Where She Is Trying To Go
Out Of The Dark
Star's Calling
The Dream

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UntitledScribbler In reply to Ag-Cat [2016-07-13 20:20:50 +0000 UTC]

What title would you like to go with?
Personally I like Sea of Stars and Under the Stars, but if you have a different one that you think would fit your story better, then go for it!!

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Ag-Cat In reply to UntitledScribbler [2016-07-14 01:36:52 +0000 UTC]

Under the Stars work!

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UntitledScribbler In reply to Ag-Cat [2016-07-04 16:32:36 +0000 UTC]

Ooooooh those are all really good!!
I will think whilst I draw!!!

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