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Published: 2004-05-04 02:44:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 86; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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Description The lady is alone,
- unaware of her burning brow, or frozen toes -
Standing in the darkness where light has yet to be born.
where light shall never be spawned.

Shadows on her back,
Not whole, nor shattered, torn
Ashes
Once of flame,
Born
Lived
Died
Now, of ashes

Memory of light
burning
consuming
uncontrolled
Destruction, destroyed.

Shadows prevail.
She is alone.
Strong
Straight
Proud
Powerful
Pure
Hidden

A glimpse,
greyed skin
no blood beneath
no sun above

no light
no life

Strong
Proud
Controlled

extended hand
Frozen face behind

Does she invite you to her world, or beg for release?
Which will she receive?
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Comments: 4

jahg [2004-05-24 04:32:07 +0000 UTC]

Of course it's poetry.

"Her profile is strong. Her movements are strong. Her pride is clear. Her strength is clear. Her control is clear."

... that is poetry, and a lyrical delight.

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urlilpixie In reply to jahg [2004-05-24 04:36:25 +0000 UTC]

glad you like

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mindbender [2004-05-04 02:52:32 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmmm I like it very much. I think she is asking for both.

A Traveler In Love
Mind Bender

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urlilpixie In reply to mindbender [2004-05-04 03:23:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I glad you like it, and I appreciate the comment

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