failurepoet [2004-10-06 15:50:01 +0000 UTC]

When I first read this piece, I thought that love was in the first line or something, or somewhere, I dunno, but for some reason it kind of stuck in my mind, so that's how I slanted the whole rest of the poem. Re-reading it, I discovered that indeed I was simply hallucinating, although I like the slant it gave it. Aha! it was in the description. Wow, I'm not crazy. Well, not in the conventional sense. Wooo. So yeah, I love the slant that gives on the poem, as it could be interepreted a number of ways, but it's all the more profound with shattered love. Anyways, that's my too bits, nice work

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sadel32 [2004-09-10 03:01:06 +0000 UTC]

awesome...i absolutely love it.

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amaranthanomore [2004-05-04 02:48:37 +0000 UTC]

that is a really cool poem

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TasteOfInk43 [2004-05-04 02:39:47 +0000 UTC]

wow.. i love this.. awesome

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