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Published: 2012-08-31 00:33:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 188; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description I have a blanket
full of holes.
I wrap it around
myself but the cold
finds me.

I don't know how to
sew so when I try
to fix it I wince
and poke my finger
with a needle.

Once I fixed the biggest
hole and I thought it
would get warmer inside
and it did for a time
until the seams started
to split and break
until the hole was
bigger than it
had ever
been
before.
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Comments: 2

Redwind36 [2012-09-01 03:30:20 +0000 UTC]

Hey Epps! I'm with my friend Mary, and you have just earned a fan! She really really really loved the poem and so do I. You are a great writer! Do you mind if we try to take this concept and turn it into a song?

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validus17 In reply to Redwind36 [2012-09-02 02:01:15 +0000 UTC]

You absolutely may!

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