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valokilljoy — base outlines xWIPx
Published: 2011-05-28 20:47:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 1286; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 19
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okay, these are outlines from a beautiful image by =Hart-Worx . [permission granted, NOT traced.] I'd like help with a few things. The hands, for one, and the basic shading would be nice. For some reason, I can't shade them. -_-any other CC you have thus far would be good, too. I've already been told the chest on the right base looks flat, and plan to fix that later.
redlines and examples are greatly appreciated.
you can +fav the original deviation and see how beautiful these models really are here:
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Imo the second one's boobage should be put a little bit lower, but it is still looking great anyway. Is it useable now?
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no, I haven't worked on them since I posted this. >> *lazy* I mean, if you wanted to use the outlines, sure.
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I'm too tired to redline it atm. But I have to say that their hands that are behind their legs would actually really be sticking out some, especially on the right model. Depending on the angle of course. Only the hands on the right model bug me just a bit. I've realized that hands look really weird unless if they're shaded properly, even a little to show that there's knuckles involved. So maybe once you shade it it'll look better?
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yeah, everything looks like crap until I shade it. xD I dragged my outlines over the image while I worked on them, so everything matches up with it, mostly... so I dunno about the hands.
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