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Slade: "The chamber has been prepared. All is ready for Trigon's ascent." A pause. "Once this is over, I'll own you. I will be all that is left."Raven: "You're mistaken. Once this is over I'll be the only one you will have left."
Slade: A bit of tension and indignation grows in his voice. "I own your mind and body. Trigon will remove this foul mark of your from my neck and my mind from yours. You'll have nothing and be nothing."
Raven: Darkly, she responds. "You have those only because I allow it. My body means nothing, and I can remove my mind from yours at any time. Face it Slade, ever since I placed that inscription in your neck you've been my property. You're just a toy to me."
Slade: Harshly, he snaps. "Enough!" As the warriors begin to latch onto him. "--Let go!"
Raven: Her eyes form a quartet of blood red as she kneels down to his level. "I own you. I sold myself out so you could be sparred as my personal f*ck toy."
Slade: Bitterly. "I refuse to believe it! You're just an insignificant pawn in Trigon's plan. He would give you nothing!"
Raven: "I'm his daughter, but you're just a lowly message boy. He has shown you no quarter and never will. It is not I who is nothing. You are." She stands. "As for my father...he has only given you to me to humor me. You're just a breeding stud he'd hoped to have a grandchild from. After he has that of me, I can do with you as I wish."
Slade: "If he is leaving me with nothing, than how do you know he will not do the same to you?"
Raven: "Oh, he'll double cross me. This is my father we're talking about. But that's why I have you. You were only part of the deal Slade, my friends' safety was also a term of my surrender. Which is why I'm ordering you to protect them from Trigon and likely myself."
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I went a little over board here. Sort of mapping out the direction I want my Slade+Rae fic to head. Inspiried by The End, an alternation to the "You're a fool." scene.
Slade, Raven, Trigon, TT= DC Comics and Cartoon Network
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Comments: 7
LaEnigmaDama [2015-11-19 07:36:26 +0000 UTC]
The drawing and story a both very good, nice job . I especially love how scared Slade looks... which is the proper reaction he should be having. Good boy Slade. ByThaWays do you have a completed version of this story? If you don't then you really should, but thats just me opinion X3.
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vampirecheetah In reply to LaEnigmaDama [2015-11-19 12:59:51 +0000 UTC]
I don't have a completed version, but I think I wrote an additional 100 pages past what was posted on ff.net. I've no problem sending by the word2003 files if you want what was completed for a read (send a note with an email and I'll send them your way). Unfortunately, I don't think this is a story that will see completion. I was in my late teens/early twenties when I began it, before adult responsibilities came in. I work, went to college, began focus on a personal comic project, recovering from health problems, etc.
I'm a good 10 or so years older now, and I've matured in my perspective on a lot of things. I thought it was nice to play around with Slade's chase down of Raven as something semi romantic. I wrote an abusive "edgy" dynamic as ideal, and as an adult I can't support. [But don't let it stop you from reading it, so long as you understand that the kind of relationship Slade and Raven were having is not something to strive for.]
Additionally, I've grown so much in terms or properly crafting a story. Radiance is filled with the kinds of story telling elements I'm working to correct [a lot of over the top, lengthy passages meant to spread page count, shock value twists with no warning, etc] that even if I wanted to turn back to the story that there's just no way I could write back in the style it was done in.
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LaEnigmaDama In reply to vampirecheetah [2015-12-12 06:56:18 +0000 UTC]
How can I forgive you for not finishing that piece of GENIUS!! Just kidding. Thanks for taking the time to write out your explanation and I both respect and understand why you dropped this story. Also, good to hear that your story telling has improved. Hope you keep mastering your craft and can't wait to see more of your work
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fallenrose24 [2005-07-06 04:04:39 +0000 UTC]
Wow....Talk about one awe striking story....
I love the idea. My God the expressions are wonderfully done in this picture...flawless! You're turning me into a Slade/Raven shipper! Only is she's 18 though....it sits well with me if she's legal at least. Fantastic job as always. I don't think I've ever enjoyed looking at any artist's scraps more than yours.
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vampirecheetah In reply to fallenrose24 [2005-07-06 13:54:17 +0000 UTC]
I don't remember if I specifically state her age in the fic, but I'll be certain to not specify that after I proof it when it's complete. That way readers can decide for themselves what age she is.
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