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Published: 2017-01-20 00:27:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 2396; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 0
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So this was one of my favourite movies as a kid so earlier today I was looking at human styled fan art of him and it was largely smut (why god why, my childhood man) and in a very anime style which I don't personally think fits the style of Rodney.so I decided to draw my own version
i wanted to mainly keep in his major features, like springs and his hair style whilst making it more... clothing like?Ā
I hope you think it's good ;;Ā
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My critique: First the bad, right? So, I can see that you tried to capture him and his personality as good as possible. But I can't see any shading except the shadow under is feet. He looks a bit angular and his head does not seem normally shapen (jawbone is a bit stretched to the ear) but this comes mostly from his face, which looks too big for his skull. Also the head is a bit too big in proportion to the rest of the body. The lines are not straight what makes it look like you were nervous when you drew him. It also makes his right foot look dismambled, like it does not belong to his leg. Even though you tried to out motion in, he seems a bit stiff.
The positives are: THANKS THAT HE IS NOT ATTACKING MY EYES! The colours are really great. You've chosen a nice yet friendly tone for his skin and you tried to put in really nice details, like on his hair. He may seem a bit stiff, but not completely without movement.
I hope I could help you to improve. 
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Thank you for the critique,
i actually forgot to do the shading on him XDĀ
I do agree with the head thing, it is a bit too big, I didn't realise the lines weren't straight, but I see what you mean, I think part of that reason is the top part of the spring being a lot thicker
I also see what you mean by the lack of motion, I'm not really sure on how I could improve that though š
Thank you though for the positives I'll try and improve
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You only can improve due trying
You're welcome
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