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Published: 2012-01-20 03:53:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 2213; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 29
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Like I said in my journal, I wanted to do a sketchy comic-y think to THe One That Got Away by Katy Perry... This is the first verse, I wanted to post it xDCan you guys tell me what you like, what you don't like? what I should change? I'd really appreciate some feedback before I go on and do more... xD
Also, requesting critique mostly because I want to see if it will go away tomorow... XD
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Finally found my dash clone! Ummmmmm... AJ, why are you crying?
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... I'm serios, though, how did the clone get out!?
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I guess I gotta catch it... wish me luck.
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this is really cute and i like the simplicity of it 
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i love pinkiedash. Appledash is not good in my opinion
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Thank you ^_^ Reminds me I do need to finish this... XD
Ahh, I love both pairings, that's part of the reason this happened xD
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I like that it's in pastels. If you want it to look colored in you should use a textured brush and artfully leave some white maybe? Or stay in the lines because I think it would be super cute as is but with staying in the lines.
For the second to last picture I would change the hand that the drink is in so that the character doesn't have to stretch as much.
This is adorable
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Oh, that sounds cute, I'll see if I can find a crayon brush or something... xD
Good idea, thank you!
And thanks again
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No prob. I'm excited to see how it comes out
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that colt's a fool
if i had a mare like applejack i'd hold on to her FOREVER!!!!!!
ya i'd pick aj over pinkie pie anyday of the week
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It's actually supposed to be Dash, I just colored her really simplistically... XD
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I colored it like that on purpose, I was going for a sort simplistic sort of look... Do you think it'd look better if I used, like, a crayon textured brush? or would it still look bleh?
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It's good, And I like it. I think it would have looked even better w/ a textured brush
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Good to know, thank you ^_^
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Aw, poor applejack, and isn't Dash's mane rainbow? And the cutie mark is a rainbow lightning bolt coming out of a cloud?
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You are right, my friend xD I was going for a sort of simplistic look, but I'm not sure how well it worked...
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I guess I'm the only one who likes PinkieDash over AppleDash here xD
Very cute, it's looking great so far, can't wait to see what else is to come!
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I love them both equally, really xD This will probably end up being more supportive of Pinkie Dash.. I haven't decided how it's going to end yet xD
Thank you very much, glad you like it!
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You're not the only one! c:
PinkieDash to me seems way more logical than AppleDash.
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It always just worked better for me personality-wise. I feel like Dashie and AJ are better as rivals anyways and don't really work so well as lovers.
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I know, right? D: I haven't decided if I'm going to have them get back together at the end or not...
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Poor AJ D8> Damn RD, you're such an idiot.
Appledash > RainbowPie all the time.
I really LOVE the cute artstyle and the kid style coloring. Goes with the innocent music of the song.
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Thank you very much, it was really fun/quick to color like this
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No problem! You should finish it XD
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I will as soon as I get a chance xD
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