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Published: 2014-01-09 00:00:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 6242; Favourites: 303; Downloads: 0
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Hey, you know what I haven't done enough of? Made a stamp complaining about how bad most CreepyPasta OCs are! Okay, well I'm considering removing a group from my watch list, a CP group, mainly because I am sick and tired of getting really lazy CPOCs, but I don't because even the group Admins are threatening to remove deviations and block deviants because of said OCs. Even they hate it as much as I do. "BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWLOCKING IS FOR COWARDS!" Bite me bitch, and we'll fight later!

So, what's the motivation for this? Well it ranges from unoriginality to plain sexualizing. Let's start with unoriginality.

Unoriginality

Despite popular belief, I am not convinced that originality is 100% dead. Nothing shows 100% originality, but nothing 100% lacks originality. Though, it can get pretty low. I do, however, think that creativity is suffering from people thinking that, if their creation matches what's popular, they too will become popular. This is why there are so many "_ the Killer OCs" or "_erman OCs". Hardly original, but that's what the creator boasts them being. The mentality seems to be, "Jeff and Slenderman are popular, so if my OC is like them, I could be popular too!" It's especially painful when the "OC" goes through the same process or even has a similar name to the original. We all remember Ffej the Murderer and NEB burned, those joke characters our beloved outmost made on his BENDrownedPlz account, right? Well, I've seen a SERIOUS "OC" following the NEB path that lead to them being Burned. I pray I misinterpreted and it IS just a joke, but God help us if it's not.

There are very popular and even dearly beloved spin-off OCs. Some that come to mind include Splendorman and Jane the Killer, but these two have their haters. (I don't like Jane, but I swear that I have NOTHING against her creator. I've seen his profile and actually find him to be a very nice guy.) Some creators may try to be like these examples, but bring literally NOTHING new to the table.

Making characters that depend too heavily on existing material. Good GOD this is one of the reasons I hate the term "OC". Because these OCs aren't very O at all! I mentioned how popular characters like Jane and Splendy are spin-offs of popular, existing material, but they bring something new to the table and may actually be able to exist without the original material, but in a different sense. However, many who don't try to do a spin-off actually go closer to the source than ripping-off. Do you know what I'm talking about? I'm talking about the OC having a RELATIONSHIP to the canon character. Like, parent-child, partner-partner relationships. These are extremely hard to do well. Unfortunately, they are common . . . Slenderman's neko daughter . . . *shudders*

CreepyPasta OCs CAN be very good and very original, even if they were never meant to be CPOCs in the first place. Laughing Jack is an example. It is rare this happens, but is not impossible. Just do a little research before making an OC.

Sexualizing

I don't think I've complained enough about how much I hate modern, sexy Halloween costumes, especially the slutty ones for your 5-year-old daughter. I want to be terrified of monsters, not sexually aroused by them! And a problem with most modern CPOCs, original or not, is that they are very sexy. Mini-skirts, tube tops, strapless dresses, bondage, engaging in kinky activities with their victims, long trench coats with nothing underneath . . . I have HUGE issues with these, because it's not creepy at all. And what is your OC for again? Oh yeah, CREEPYPasta. Now, can a killer be creepy and sexy? Of course, you just have to be able to do it right.

From what I notice, the sexy CP characters have little personality. Sexualoffenderman did have some personality and a good enough backstory, as well as motivation for why he wears long trench coats with nothing underneath; then you have the other OCs whose families were killed by Jeff or whose best friends were stolen by Slenderman. This, understandably, motivates the OC to go after the perp. This is still weak, because their motivation revolves around an existing character; but then it becomes even weaker when, for no reason at all, they go out clad in sexy skin-tight black leather or a miniskirt or a torn-up tank top, something like that, and it makes NO sense.

A sexy CPOC is fine, let me remind you, but that shouldn't be their personality in a nutshell. Like, you shouldn't focus so much on the sexy that the creepy is taken away. Most people will read CP to be scared shitless, not to be aroused by your slutty Fem!Jeff rip-off. And don't overdo it either. Give them a reason to be sexy, not just like, "DIS MAKES HIM/HER HOTTER!!!!" because that doesn't amount to much in the universe of the dark and creepy. Yes, there are sexy villains in history, but the ones we remember the most were also quite intimidating. The White Witch was beautiful, but anger her, and you were stone. She could go from pleasant and seemingly very kind-hearted to nasty and even scary in a matter of moments. Sexy OCs though seem to remain sexy all the way through, and for as much as the creator says how vicious and cold-blooded the character is, they never go into detail such as drawing the character killing someone or write about it, and even when it's done, it's glanced over so quickly that we never have time to be intimidated. I don't care if writing about gore isn't your thing; if you write a CreepyPasta, you will have to go into detail about gore if you want it to be effective.


Well I've said all I need to. So what's YOUR opinion on unoriginal or sexy-not-scary CreepyPasta OCs?


Something I forgot to mention . . . Examples of creations that bring more to the table:

laserpotato Go to her gallery and read. Now.

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Comments: 134

HirotheNiceOne [2018-09-08 00:53:52 +0000 UTC]

I'm actually trying to make my OCs original.

- Exo is heavily based on Lazari and a little bit based on Ticci Toby
- Hiro is heavily based on myself and is a Tsundere/Tsunshun
- Agatha is heavily based on werewolves and is Slenderman's daughter
- Lullaby is heavily based on Emily from Corpse Bride (Except Lullaby is a zombie cause she was revived)
- Quill is ummm.... I don't think he's heavily based on anything that does not belong to me. He is based on Lullaby cause they're both dead zombies and widows/widowers (Except Quill killed his wife.)

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Tortive [2018-07-29 05:58:47 +0000 UTC]

I got you covered. Three of my Creepypastas have characters. Three of my Creepypastas are about an inanimate object (the creepiest Pasta).

- Constance Blanc isn't my best Creepypasta because I was trying to copy flow of a chain letter (so I deleted it and left Jasper's journal entries.)

- Lady Luna was inspired by a dream, but to the audience, I think she seems more like peeping Tom than a Creepypasta.

- "December 31, 1969" and "fragile.mid and fragile.mp3" were inspired by weird things my phone did.

- "MikeShinoda.png" is the only inanimate Creepypasta I think is actually scary.

- The Presence wasn't a Creepypasta, so Creepypasta chased it with a knife until it became one. (The Presence is an accidental Pasta.)

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SSJ3MJ [2018-01-21 08:24:39 +0000 UTC]

"Well I've said all I need to. So what's YOUR opinion on unoriginal or sexy-not-scary Creepypasta OCs?"

Ummmm Let people do what they want and not be bothered by it?

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PervertBunnies [2015-12-02 17:51:08 +0000 UTC]

But instead they're unoriginal and creepy.

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PervertBunnies In reply to PervertBunnies [2015-12-02 19:07:33 +0000 UTC]

Fuck, I mean edgy

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NTSEFAN [2015-09-13 21:52:07 +0000 UTC]

I have an OC named "The mutational terror" who is a mutant proxy to slenderman.

The mutational terror: a young african american lad who was involved in a electrical freak accident and was visited upon by the slenderman along with experimentaion resulted in him reviving as a mutant and later a proxy.

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ImAHurricane [2015-09-01 04:13:56 +0000 UTC]

I have my OC called "The White Cat" that I'll be putting on DeviantArt.  It's about a guy.  He keeps seeing a white cat with piercing blue eyes.  I'll have more of the story as I come up with it.  That part that you just read from the story's plot is what has been in my head for about two days now.

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OfficerMT [2015-08-22 05:27:42 +0000 UTC]

I had an idea for something that I've called "the Photographer." I'm not sure it's all that good. I only have a general idea for it. Seem journalist discovers this weird humanoid in a red-&-black suit with a comedy mask that uses a camera to...idk. It's an older idea. Might scrap it.

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Krazees-Clown-Queen [2015-07-13 20:26:51 +0000 UTC]

If you want a horrible written CP OC

Her name is Cam and she lost her eye some how she has a thing for Sexual Offenderman gross and a thing for some weird ass Ultron character and she is the typical clieche CP female serial killer. She is probably secretly related to Jeff The Killer too or the younger long lost sibbling of Jeff The Killer -Le Gasp-I wouldn't be surprised shes horribly written

But yeah just goes to show how lazy and unoriginal the creator was and most CP OC creators are these days tis one of the MANY reasons why I left that disgusting fandom. There's more reasons but the terrbly written OC's like Cam are just one of them..

LOVE your stamp by the way it's simply beautiful

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Missappearingmiyu [2015-07-03 01:00:08 +0000 UTC]

I sort of am starting to think my oc is not an original DX

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Sp0ttedTiger In reply to Missappearingmiyu [2015-09-20 05:32:12 +0000 UTC]

Well that's a good sign; it shows that your maturity and creativity have improved since you first created the character.

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Missappearingmiyu In reply to Sp0ttedTiger [2015-09-20 14:23:12 +0000 UTC]

well, I have been editing her since I first made her. Let me say she's the hardest thing you could possibly think of.

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Nightmare-Lee [2015-06-01 08:34:35 +0000 UTC]

//The Mother laughs from distance

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mvrtyrii [2015-05-25 18:23:57 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely right!

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The-Alternate-Ghost [2015-04-25 02:36:08 +0000 UTC]

some creepypasta ocs i've seen is not even at least close to scary. they're mostly emo weaboos that have gigantic tits that probably weigh 100 pounds. do they even know what a creepypasta is supposed to be? they're supposed to be scary, not skanky.

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amini101 In reply to The-Alternate-Ghost [2015-05-12 04:30:23 +0000 UTC]

Thats because they want a character that they'll like and look ''creepy'' but most (if not all) fails. You have too choose Something that will be ''scary'' or, something not too ugly/ gruesome that you can associate with, hence why they are so much teenagers with kitchen knifes. Personally, to make an oc, I'll stay away from the CP pattern.

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NotQueenButKing [2015-04-24 02:25:24 +0000 UTC]

Im so tired of all the creepypasta ocs being cute D:<

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wildface1010 [2015-04-13 13:54:47 +0000 UTC]

Can anyone take a look at my Creepypasta in my Journals and give some comments? I really put a tone of effort on it and I want to hear how you guys think.

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vulture-bone [2015-04-06 13:20:27 +0000 UTC]

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Nightmare-Lee In reply to vulture-bone [2015-06-01 06:58:10 +0000 UTC]

Sorry for asking this, but...

Was that tentacle sticking out of it's butt?

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vulture-bone In reply to Nightmare-Lee [2015-06-01 09:31:16 +0000 UTC]

A second tail.

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Nightmare-Lee In reply to vulture-bone [2015-06-01 09:43:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh. I'm really sorry! Did I offend you from my question?

I'm just curious. Hehe

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vulture-bone In reply to Nightmare-Lee [2015-06-01 10:58:22 +0000 UTC]

Nope! This drawing is very old xD

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BJG13 [2015-03-22 14:11:02 +0000 UTC]

Yes I'm working on one right now!!! I think he's pretty original   
but... I was just wondering can he still be a Slenderman proxy or not...
cause everyone's into that nowadays   

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CreepyNightcoreDemon [2015-03-06 13:29:13 +0000 UTC]

Yes. I so agree on that.

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AlimuKillchan [2015-03-02 09:41:11 +0000 UTC]

I totally agree.
That's why I made this CP OC and joined serveral CP groups. huehehe....
alimukillchan.deviantart.com/a…

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Ariana-smith-cali [2015-02-19 19:17:31 +0000 UTC]

I completely agree. Even though I DID make an EXTREMELY MarySue oc, my others are sort of original! And not MarySue! I am a fangirl, but not a crazy one.

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HeartBlissMaid [2015-02-16 14:57:46 +0000 UTC]

this is why I never made a creepypasta oc, might in the future but not now

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RavenPember [2015-02-12 22:24:27 +0000 UTC]

   or the "dating Jeff" or something... I hate it when they shoe horn other people into there pastas just to make it popular of because they are just nutty fangirls... >:I  eyup

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creepykid123 [2014-12-30 03:57:17 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it can't just be I'm jeff the killers sister the end.

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KawaiiEmo1000 [2014-11-28 19:14:11 +0000 UTC]

Also this o-o glaceonclac.deviantart.com/art…

And just read that ROLEPLAY in the comments ..

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KawaiiEmo1000 [2014-11-28 19:12:46 +0000 UTC]

GETTA LOAD OF THIS glaceonclac.deviantart.com/art…

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KawaiiEmo1000 [2014-11-21 23:29:34 +0000 UTC]

My OC is crazy Cassie

She is gonna have ALOT of flaws and a tragic, scary past.

I used to ship my oc with canon, I feel like an idiot


I will delete the pairing

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liiimbo [2014-11-18 04:27:05 +0000 UTC]

And have something called "LOGIC"
Like Jesus most CP OCs that I've seen wouldn't last a day

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Fabricatedqueenie [2014-11-14 01:55:32 +0000 UTC]

This is the main reason I'm afraid/not confident to make Creepypasta OCs.

I just make plain old killers /and other characters, that don't really relate to this/~ -though they may not be creative-

(Not all killers are related to creepypasta, but some people think that. .3.)

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XMonochrome-NimbusX [2014-10-29 06:08:55 +0000 UTC]

Shit like: ________ the Killer

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GaarasGirl27 [2014-10-22 16:34:42 +0000 UTC]

thank you. this stamp is amazing, you deserve a medal.

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SnivyTheRuler [2014-10-18 21:47:23 +0000 UTC]

I love this xD
I have a few CP OCs of my own. Scythe(I know it's like Rake I need a new name for him..he was my first CP OC)
Teeny Is fine I guess, a fomerly abused demon cat that kills any abusive pet owner.
Cabbage patch killers is another one but I haven't thought too much about that yet...

This basically explains why people leave teh CP fandom in the first place. Mary sue, "sexy", unoriginal and downright stupid OCs.
My [former]CP OC, now slenderverse OC [Ludicrous Libby wow so original I know], actually has some factors based off of Ticci Toby, I wont lie. But I used those ideas to make her different as well I guess. All I "used" was the hatchets and her cruel, hard to stand nature. Overall I think I did a pretty good job with her. Of course there are some iffy points about her, like how she's really weak and so that doesn't fit in well with teh whole "proxy ordeal" but she's very headstrong and doesn't like to lose, which gives her that factor of being a standard Proxy.

Anyway, what I'm saying is, I agree with you in all of this. There needs to be creepier CP OCs, more scare and less sexy. 

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Sniper-Rin [2014-09-26 12:22:06 +0000 UTC]

I think that's the problem with younger people these days, is that if you were to post any sort of constructive criticism on any of their creations, they immediately take offense and claim you're hating on them, which can be natural because nobody likes to be "rejected" in any way but they take it personally if you reject their glorious super awesome self-insert OC because you would have to be crazy not to love them.
Then ironically, they turn around and look for anyone else who will agree with them and seek approval even though it's inviting other shit-OC-creators to basically circle-jerk with each other leading to no progress in character development.

And, it's as you said, they all think they're OC will be as successful as the original popular characters that inspired them but that's also ironic because those characters like Slender Man were something totally unique and out of the norm, so now we're getting poorer copies of this character. They're staying in the box, instead of thinking outside it to create a new extraordinary character that will be memorable due to it's uniqueness.

Eventually, hopefully, they will grow out of it though. I use to create cringe-worthy rip-off OCs after all when I was in my preteens, but now I really try to put a lot of thought and effort into creating my characters.

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KawaiiEmo1000 In reply to Sniper-Rin [2014-11-28 19:16:48 +0000 UTC]

I screenshot this XD

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Sniper-Rin In reply to KawaiiEmo1000 [2014-11-28 21:59:31 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha I'm flattered to know my discussion in this was worth saving so thanks~ ^^

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KawaiiEmo1000 In reply to Sniper-Rin [2014-11-28 22:35:22 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome :3

ALSO, GETTA LOADA DIS! glaceonclac.deviantart.com/art…

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RebelMyth [2014-09-19 15:06:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, the sexual thing bugs me a lot, especially when its a character that could be genuinely scary, but then I cant take them seriously because of fanservice and that. I did do a character who is, I suppose you could say, is "sexy" (Mantis, fav.me/d7x6gwo ) because I did want to challenge it.

Also, gore shouldn't be used exclusively. Too much and the story looses its appeal. I think people should try to play more with psychological-based horror instead of gore. Dont get me wrong, gore can still be used but too much is just boring.

Another thing that REALLY pisses me off is how close-minded people are when it comes to a character with a different style. My OC Razorback, who has a punk style, gets a lot of shit for not being "scary" because people aren't bothering to take a minute and read the ref sheet, or a little longer and read a story.

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Imnurhest [2014-09-13 01:17:45 +0000 UTC]

Agreed. But now what the heck am I going to do with my own ... "OCs" (FCs, technically).

I only made my slender "OC" to see what I'd look like if I were a slender. I don't really use her for anything. She's the weakest of the slenders, so she's not overpowered. Definetly not a creepypasta. More like a happypasta XP

Iyver was an experiment to see what the Rake would look like with wings. Because a ground-dwelling creature wasn't scary enough.

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Laughinggal7 [2014-09-04 04:11:32 +0000 UTC]

How do u make stamps

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Laughinggal7 [2014-09-04 04:11:06 +0000 UTC]

This makes A lot of sense

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British-Bitch [2014-09-03 23:54:09 +0000 UTC]

This is so true! My sister made a siren sort of CP but then her friend goes and makes an exact copy of the CP my sister made. Also the same girl makes all her CPs sexy,all of them!  

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seppen123456789 [2014-08-31 21:48:26 +0000 UTC]

They are OC's



Why wouldn't they make them if they weren't? And why do you guys make negative stamps?  

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VampireQueenEffeffia In reply to seppen123456789 [2014-09-01 14:38:51 +0000 UTC]

CreepyPasta is an internet genre very much like the horror movie genre. Sometimes, they feature characters, some of the most well-known being Slenderman, Jeff the Killer, and BEN Drowned.

An OC is in original character, meaning the person who created them has put thought and effort into making them original and a character. If a character is a rip-off of a pre-existing work, they are not original.

A CreepyPasta OC should be like other CreepyPasta characters: scary. A non-threatening CreepyPasta OC fails. Imagine if Jason Voorhees was super-sexualized. Imagine if Freddy Kruger was adorable and just focused on cuddling his victims. Imagine if Michael Myers just focused on pursuing his romantic desires for the Clown from IT. Would you take horror movies seriously if that was the focus?

If a CreepyPasta OC is a rip-off, it fails. Jason Voorhees is the re-animated corpse of a boy who drowned while the counselors were having sex, and his motivation to kill stems from his vengeful mother. Freddy Kruger was a pedophile who was burned to death, then began hunting teens in their dreams and the only way to stop him is to not be afraid of him. Michael Myers was a mental patient whose exact motivations are a bit obscure, but in sequels it's suggested his goal is to end his bloodline. Now imagine if they all had the same motivation: They wanted to kill because they liked it. Eventually, horror movie villains would become dull and repetitive. The plot would be the same, just with different faces.

Now, many CreepyPasta OCs tend to be super sexualized or spin-offs or rip-offs or both of more mainstream CreepyPastas. There is no end to the big breasted, stripper clothed Jeff the Killer rip-offs who realize how "misunderstood" Jeff is and feel like they can bring him back to sanity with their love. There is no end to Slenderman's "Proxies" who had rough childhoods. There is no end to the "Lost Episode" or "Videogame.exe" pastas. There is no end to the killers who were bullied but then became inspired by Jeff the Killer to dye their hair black, bleach their skin, cut their mouths, then go out and kill people. There is no end to the "ultimate combination" of every mainstream pasta out there.

We make negative stamps against poorly written CreepyPasta OCs because we're sick of people turning out the same bland, repetitive super-sexualized mainstream Pasta rip-offs over and over again.

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seppen123456789 In reply to VampireQueenEffeffia [2014-09-02 21:13:21 +0000 UTC]

Okai I was just trying to make a point. Sorry

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